Immortal Spirit

Things are very messy, and I feel like I want to cram in a lot of things, but I can't explain them clearly. The writing method is very ancient, which means that some very simple settings are written in a very classical Chinese style. Putting aside the unfamiliar words, the settings are actually very simple.

January 19th was the first round of recommendations for this book, and yesterday was the first day. The results of this book were not ideal. Although I had been mentally prepared for it, I was still a little disappointed. I am a newcomer and have never written before. There will be many bad things when I write. Please forgive me. I am not asking for the third round, but I still hope to enter the second round, so that the book will be more stable and the results will be better. I hope you will read the first ten chapters and then turn to the latest chapter to give me some encouragement. I am not like those talented players who can write good results in their first book, but I have confidence in myself. I will definitely make this book better and better as I write it. If there are any shortcomings in the book, you can tell me if you don't like it. Following up, I will definitely consider how to avoid it. I implore you again, whether you are a collector or a newbie, after reading other excellent works, you can remember the little ones, come back and read this book, and give me some data. Thank you, sir. I hope this book can enter the second round. If you read it, please leave a paw, and I will kneel down and lick you one by one.

It's too routine, the beginning is to point out opportunities, pick up mistakes, unknown golden fingers, use the weak to defeat the strong enemies to chase and kill, and the fiancée with a strong identity and background 😅

Now I feel sick when I see something returning to the world You all can't live without grand narratives, right? It's so boring

The words do not convey the meaning, and the writing is not coherent enough. Although I can understand the unwritten details based on the context, this greatly affects the reading experience. There is always a feeling of interruption from time to time, and there is always a feeling that I have missed reading. I think about it as it comes out, and it is confusing. The cultivation system is too complicated and confusing. If I don't explain it in advance, new terms suddenly appear. In short, I am tired of reading in one sentence.

Just look at the introduction. He is a destined savior. It's not that he can't be saved, but you are destined to be purely disgusting.

The characters of the male protagonist are quite contradictory. He is quite ruthless in the front, but not so good in the back.

Follow-up reading is very important for new books, please support me, thank you!

Why are there so many new authors recently? Their accounts are too new, and their writing doesn't look like a newcomer's, but it's not that good either.

If you look at the introduction, you will know that the protagonist saves the world, which is awesome.

I've read thirty of them, but they're still unclear and I'm speechless.

This book is written in imitation of the Xianlu book, but it is too ancient and should be written in more vernacular.

How unlucky is this protagonist! First the mother, then the man surnamed Wu, and then the God of Wealth, all came looking for the little shrimp, the protagonist.

I hate reading aboriginal writing the most. It's written in an old-fashioned way. I've withdrawn it.

Looking at the introduction, it looks like a salvation story😒😒

Brother, I can't understand the first chapter... Can Shen Nong tell me if the style of writing is still incomprehensible in the following chapters?

Does anyone find it a bit difficult to watch?

It's like it goes straight from the asshole to the brain

Is it because I'm too lazy to pay attention or something? The writing is pretty good but I feel like I can't understand it. From my grandpa's paintings, shouldn't he be the son of a marquis? How come he's so poor that he can't afford to eat and goes to cut evil pawns?

Lingxiao True Dragon, everyone is welcome to come and watch it for free, I will be very happy that way,

Lingxiao True Dragon, everyone is welcome to come and read it for free, I will be very happy that way.

The author made a big mistake. The most important thing in the novel is to introduce the protagonist's background at the beginning, including his name, place of origin, birth, family background and other information, so as to leave an imprint on the reader's short-term memory. There are none of these things in three chapters. It feels a bit like duckweed and not very impressive.