This Knight Is Nosy

The Eight Virtues of a Knight: ①Humility: If you can't fight, run away. If you don't have many opponents, you can run away. A good man doesn't suffer the loss in front of him ②Honesty: Playing tricks is a villain's behavior. It's better to just elbow and circle kick ③Bravery: Following your teammates in a group fight and being alone on the opposite side is always the best solution ④Honor: You can help when you see a duel that represents the glory of the knight. Teammates backstab the enemy ⑤ Mercy: Even if you knock down your teammates, you must end the pain of the fallen enemy ⑥ Justice: Use horizontal slashing more often, the enemy and teammates will slash together. Anyway, if you don't slash your teammates, your teammates will slash you ⑦ Sacrifice: The catapult can not only throw stones but also yourself ⑧ Firmness: Adhere to the above principles until death​

It's a pity. The title and introduction of this book are actually quite exciting. Whether it's the knight complaining on the surface or "I thought this was a good thing" to gain virtue, even the most ordinary "I'm just a hot-blooded good young man" can be seen. But the author didn't write anything. For example, your virtue system is like a hot pot restaurant that claims a mysterious pot bottom blind box, attracting diners of all tastes. When it was served, I saw: Hey, just a pot of water, no taste at all. Especially in the beginning, there is a magic light point, a baron's maid, a mysterious boss's mysterious woman, and a baron's daughter buying a pet while shopping... Brother, these plots of yours can appear in any Western knight novel from more than ten years ago, but they cannot appear in your system with virtue as the core. You are banging here and there with a hammer and hammer, but nothing will be left. I think the author said they are revising it, which is quite a pity. The first twenty chapters I read may have already been revised. It's a pity, really.

When you see the author of Chapter 20, see for yourself. Does this have anything to do with the title of the book? Is this system still necessary? Just give some abilities and some insignificant plots. If you want to write a system, you should develop more gameplay and plots in terms of virtue. If you remove the system like this, it will not be a very ordinary orthodox Western fantasy. You must know that everyone has long been tired of reading orthodox Western fantasy. Now they come in because of the system gameplay in the title and introduction of your book. I can only say that your way of writing is very discouraging at the beginning.

It's good to watch, but some scenes and language are like fantasy novels, which is a bit dramatic.

Alas, there's nothing new and it looks boring. I came in because of your introduction, but you didn't write around your introduction, but used the same old-fashioned Western fantasy novel routine.

It's a very old-fashioned knight adventure story, without outstanding characters, and the plot is not very novel. It is probably difficult to read.

It's really just so-so, just a very ordinary Western style, without any disturbance.

Feeling inferior to the noble living saint of Bohemia, Paladin Henry

Goldfinger is actually okay, but there is indeed a problem with the plot. I feel that this book is likely to be difficult. However, if you accumulate experience, this theme can be used in the next book.

Is William's role too high? Are you writing a story about two male protagonists?

Why do the authors have so few comments? Isn't there a 5,000-thousand collection? I think most novels with a collection of 5,000 have at least 60 or 70 reviews, but this book only has a dozen or so. 🤔

This book is too plain and I have no desire to read it.

I feel like the writing is pretty good, but it's a bit scattered, without a complete process of starting and ending. If a gun appeared early in the story, then the gun would definitely go off. However, in this book, a gun only appears. It just appears. Of course, it may be that it is too short now and the story has not yet unfolded.

Your plot twist is a bit abrupt.

I'm really speechless. I know exactly where to go after reading the chapters. I wasted half an hour and it really made me sulky.

Something didn't look right to me. I thought I could see an orthodox paladin with a very upright outlook, but it didn't show up at all.

The author, this one is following the trend, the knight is too perfect, and the other one is a pity that I cut it. After all, that author turned out to be better at fairy tales. That one was my first attempt. When I saw the later part, I had a hunch that it might be cut. I didn't expect it to be true.

Addition and subtraction are a bit monotonous and more mechanics could be introduced. You might as well refer to the virtue system of the game Darkest Dungeon.

It's not good-looking... It doesn't help others or has more content in the introduction A very ordinary western fantasy

This system is good, and most novels now focus on cultivating gangster street slickers. Even if this system is rigid, it is still better than killing people and touching their corpses.

The golden finger enhances the sense of anticipation and the rest of the content is quite bland.

VV will not not:. Give it to you

Those who are unfaithful, unfilial, unjust and unkind, kill, kill, kill