Kill the Immortal!

Personally, I think it's okay. It's quite satisfactory and the writing is good. However, the immortality novels are in decline. Before 3 million words, there was no traffic at all. You can see which of the immortality novels with traffic is less than 3 million words, such as Haoyu Zhenxian, Immortal Mansion Immortality, Asking the Immortal Way, etc., Among the dozen or so popular books, none of them is less than 3 million words. If you want to become popular in the early stage of immortality novels now, you have to be a platinum author who is really popular. Writer, cultivating immortal novels requires working out the word count. Even Daai Xianzun became popular in the later stages. Readers are too lazy to read it because of the small number of words in the early stage. And because of the small number of words, some readers will scold you if you make a slight mistake. When you have more words, everyone will start discussing the plot, and more and more people will support you. If the author wants to make money quickly, there are only two ways, 1. Change to a more popular theme, 2. Enter a factory to make screws.

Personally, I feel that when it comes to food, it is even higher for people with an appetite. Come on, author! Great progress

Just one question Why is it that the letter found by the protagonist after robbing the dead man's storage bag is a complete conversation like WeChat? Shouldn't a letter only be addressed to the party receiving it? The letter you sent should be in the other party's hands, right?

Is this a eunuch? Such a beautiful book

I just started reading it today. The writing is so good, why don't you continue writing? Sooner or later🔥

Generally speaking, my writing skills are acceptable. If you don't have a book, it's okay to read it a few times, but don't have high expectations.

The writing is good, and your writing skills are online. Come on!

It's really well written. The most important thing for a novice is persistence.

I feel like the writing was okay and the plot was pretty good. Are you going to run away?

It's okay. I voted for February and hope it helps.

I hope that character drawings can be released soon, and I want to draw fanfics (^▽^)

Hahahahahaha

This kind of useless protagonist is still such a useless person after time travel. Can being reborn really change anything? In addition to the halo created by the author, he should still be a loser. This kind of protagonist is destined to be unlikable, so cut it or rewrite it.

It's pretty good so far, a story about a rebirth in the late stages of foundation building after a miserable mess. There are still some differences from the previous rebirth and cultivation of immortality. The protagonist was still hanging out in the mines for fifty years in the previous life, so he did not have enough grasp of opportunities after rebirth. The protagonist's biggest opportunity is two noble teachers, who help the protagonist a lot. But I feel that the relationship between the protagonist and his teacher is a bit awkward and looks a bit weird. Also, everything has become easier since I became a disciple. I have all the magic weapons, talismans, and techniques. What the protagonist lacks is time, but the protagonist gives people a feeling that it is not so urgent.

More than a hundred chapters are not on the shelves, why not give up and start again?

I'm full after seeing this introduction. Do you have to take advantage of the popularity? ?

It's pure white writing. It's better to practice this kind of writing in a few more books. "The two looked at each other and smiled, and the tacit understanding seemed to have improved invisibly."

I personally think the author's writing is pretty good. How can I put it? The author is a little impatient. The protagonist can do things vigorously and resolutely, but the plot cannot be too fast. It does not mean that the plot is too slow to be too slow. On the contrary, it is a steady stream. I hope the author will polish it well in the future and continue this book.

Infinite Universe Boundary Infinite Boundary Sphere Infinite Sphere What are you fighting with me for? "Welcome the Heavenly Lord!!!" "Ant! You will die with just one look from me" Countless Tao Yun laws are circulating, just standing here, He is the center of everything in the world Just by being looked at by Him, everything turned into ashes "You are such ants! I don't know how many I have killed!" Just by looking at His appearance, He can disappear! This kind of rule is the decomposition of the origin of everything! It's more like the end of matter recycling the decomposition in the body! [Ding, congratulations! With superior understanding and the derivation of the rules of all things in the world, he understood the way of reincarnation and heaven! Ding, congratulations! Created the supreme heavenly way among all things in the world! Ding, congratulations! The heart feels everything in the universe creating an infinite domain! Ahhh! What did you do? How could you... You... Be so strong? The created Supreme Heavenly Dao obviously cannot understand it, because this is beyond its cognition!