My Cyber Girlfriend Came True

I just want to ask, what do these two pictures say? What is Fang Lian's position? He still catches rape.

If you want to write about the emperor's uncle, you can go to an external website. If you want to make money, then write well. If you don't write well, you won't be able to please both sides. I can only say that the author is really good.

Fuck, you look like my cyber girlfriend Ding Zhen

The plot started when Mi Xiaoyue's parents came for her. The plot involving Mi Xiaoyue collapsed sharply, and her level, plot, and IQ began to decline. Pick two points that I think are more prominent to complain about Based on the plot, the first is the place where the parents find each other. It is obvious that super powers can set the attributes of the other's parents. It is a matter of one sentence, but there is no setting. It is written that the other's parents find Mi Xiaoyue, and then the richest man is found. It is very abrupt. When you can decide the life, death and happiness of the other person with just one sentence, but you want to help but don't help to the end, then your biological parents must be good people? I won't talk about the reality. The canary mother in the book is a scam, right? The plot can be smoothed out with just one more sentence, hey, no, it's just for fun. The second point is to sign a contract and invest 50 million in Director Yu, but he didn't sign the contract. I won't say anything if you set it up for the rich second generation to play, but you set it up to transfer money from a private account to the other party's public account (the company's financial officer will call Director Yu immediately after the payment is made), and then write in the plot that Director Yu has investigated the protagonist, and that for ordinary people, the funds may come from the southeast. Then the two of them prepared to start filming without signing a contract. There is a saying about divine writing that prohibits poor people from writing divine writing, and the same applies here. Does the contract protect Party A? No, it's to protect both parties. Taking this article as an example, Director Yu's purpose is to prove his ability to the family. Now there is a sum of 50 million suspected to be from the southeast for you to use. Can you use it without signing a contract? The answer is no. If you don't sign a contract, it goes against your original intention and proves your ability. If you don't sign a contract, if the money is black money, you are an accomplice suspected of money laundering. You can't escape at all. There is no need for the official to arrest you. You will have no foundation in the family. Even if the matter is not exposed and the movie is finished, if you distribute dividends to Party A, you are suspected of money laundering and will be blamed for the rest of your life. If you do not distribute dividends to Party A, you are just preparing to play gangsters. Why do you, a small person, play gangsters with other people's capital involved in gangs? Isn't it the kidnapping family that wipes your ass? How else can you prove your ability? Does it prove that you are capable of committing crimes with your family capital? As long as you sign the contract, you can hire a professional law firm to handle the 50 million contract. If the thunderstorm occurs later, it has nothing to do with you. The advancement and retreat are all in your own hands. If the lawyer can't get through, it means that Party A has a problem, and Party A will run away on its own. How can it be possible to pay the full amount to the personal account after just ten minutes of chatting? The third point is that after the protagonist spent money, he forced the actress to follow the unspoken rules. When the person came, he cried for a while, and then the male protagonist let the person go. Realistically speaking, you have penetrated this girl's psychological bottom line. From now on, people will not have much resistance to the unspoken rules. Judging from the plot of the novel, this woman must be accepted. Is there any other unspoken plot in the future where the protagonist comes to the rescue? After a few times, the two have feelings for each other, and then have a relationship. Isn't this a double act? You already have superpowers, just have sex directly and then protect her.

The character of Fang Ling is a bit over-written. Is it necessary to spend so much time describing a character who is a gold digger and the godfather of the protagonist throughout the book? I don't need to mention the stereotypes of gold diggers and godfathers, right? If you had changed to a character with a better personality during the rape scene, there wouldn't have been so many bad reviews. I didn't feel much about the chapter where Fang Ling went to catch the rapist. I wanted to see how the protagonist would deal with it in the future. It was very interesting. But in Chapter 55, Fang Ling's green tea manipulation and the protagonist's unfavorable handling, as well as the scene of Green Tea washing her feet, showed me Hong Wen. After reading this chapter, there were only three words: "Why?" After the chapter was broken, the operation of two chapters was updated the next morning, which made me laugh. After reading the next few chapters, the handling of the protagonist made me laugh again. Fang Ling was a real genius in chasing the dulcimer and leaving her behind. No punishment was returned to her. I can only say that Fang Ling's operation was extremely profitable. If this character continues to be a heroine in the future, I can only say that I will still watch it, but I will only glance at it occasionally

"You are a very good author" "I also like the writing style" "I am ready to be filled with updates" "I am glad that I am a part of your journey to greatness" "Some authors lack professional ethics"

I met a young player by chance at the starting point, but I couldn't defeat him even though I tried my best.

This introduction is too bt, how come one of the female protagonists is Liu Yibo, a flying pig?

The plot completely collapsed starting from Chapter 57, the characters collapsed, and the plot collapsed. If this was the outline that had been planned a long time ago, then I suggest not writing it. The previous chapters were quite interesting, so I tried to change my thinking as a contrast, but in the later characters The color comes out faster and faster, and the camera changes as soon as it is shaped a little. After the female lead, who spent a lot of ink on it, slaps her nose and face, and drives away her best friend and Internet celebrity, who also spent a lot of ink on it, I really don't understand why it is necessary. Do you want to switch to a one-liner? But looking at the comment section, it is not the case. It is obvious that you have committed the biggest poisonous point of harem novels, one family dominates I don't know what you think, author, but in my eyes, harem novels are far more difficult than having a single female protagonist. The main reason is to control the balance. How to make the female protagonists do their best (If it is a hierarchical heroine, how to arrange the amount of text), how to create attractive highlights in as limited a text as possible, and how to use the main plot line to reasonably promote the interaction and shaping of the heroines. Obviously, your article did not do this. , It can even be said that it is just to have the plot development you want regardless of the rationality of the plot and characters. To put it simply, making dumplings just for this dish of vinegar is not what an author who plans to write a medium-length novel should do, because online novel authors generally are not that Great writing skills. A great writer can write a good work for a little personal work, but still needs to go through constant polishing. But ordinary people need to be extremely careful if they want to write a daily work that will not be scolded, not to mention that the outline has obvious loopholes. This situation can directly be sentenced to death.

The male protagonist wants to be perverted but not perverted and wants to be born but not born. It's very uncomfortable to watch.

Is this sentence evil or not?

Do you have a cyber girlfriend Liu Yibo? A little fat treasure girl who dropped out of college and squats at home👧

My evaluation is that you can read it, but the author's ears are too soft and he is too easily influenced by comments. I suggest you write according to your own outline and wait until you protect your base before talking about other things. Changing styles can easily lead to instant death if both parties are displeased.

Inexplicably changing Fang Lian's settings

I think the first female protagonist is obviously well written, but when it comes to the second one, the male protagonist is like a licking dog. If you want to meet, just meet him directly. There must be so many twists and turns. The second female protagonist can tell her parents that she has not found her parents. The male protagonist before her is not the best. It must be like an underground affair.

The elves are here. . . It's direct and natural. . . To be honest, this kind of pornographic novel, if the protagonist is not in a dominant position, the book is gone. . . This current girlfriend and this one who came out of nowhere, sister? Suddenly became supernatural again? The plot is completely outrageous, and Kavin doesn't just make you go berserk. . .

An erotic novel that saves bad girls? The other protagonists are all here for rewards, and they are all bad girls who don't waste anything. You are the only protagonist who really wants to save others?

Changed author? In the latest chapters, have you started to let yourself go? Chapter 55: The protagonist was being trained like a dog by a green tea guy, which made me laugh out loud.

This book is a bit baffling, emmm. How can I put it? The plot development is a bit sudden. Is this book a male channel? When I read Chapter 10, I felt like everything was written about the female protagonist. I felt like there weren't as many things written about the male protagonist as there were about the female protagonist. It just felt like it was always written from the female protagonist's perspective

It was good at first. After I got home, the yandere sister also felt that the portrayal was pretty good. Then the yandere sister suddenly became possessed? Keep reading and suddenly lose interest.

Fang Ling has a lot of identities to catch someone raping her, and she even caught her fw who was keeping her.

The changes in the female characters' personalities are too urgent. Every one of them is in a hurry. In just a few dozen chapters, they have to write changes that are almost inconsistent. The hidden clues are ridiculous... The plot on the shelves is actually about the wealthy families that Xiaomi created out of thin air. Isn't the character of the sister-in-law pretty good? If I had to replace it with an elf, it would just be Liu Beiwen's plot... I don't understand. The heroine's motivations were not written enough at the beginning, and her motivations for wanting to become a regular person and wanting to go ashore to stop were not clear, so she has been criticized by everyone. What is your status and status? The level of what she did was enough, but it was a bit rough. In the part when she fucked her sister, her motivations were quite obvious, but patching it up afterward is completely different from explaining the perception at the beginning. Miao and Yang, the little space given to them is not enough for anything, not to mention it is too thin, and the tool character attribute is too strong. Generally speaking, this book is creative, otherwise I would not have seen it before it was put on the shelves. However, I feel that there is something wrong with the author's outline and plot design. My personal suggestion is to cut this book and rewrite it creatively based on this theme.

Was my sister taken away from her? Stop doing this disgusting thing😅😅

I have seen the latest chapter, Chapter 185, and would like to share my personal views. First of all, the advantages. The advantage is that this is a small emperor's book. There are many female characters, the characters are well portrayed, and some scenes are well described. It is recommended that the moderator upload a full version for readers to read critically. Then there are the disadvantages. One of the disadvantages is that it is messy. I originally thought it was a simple urban system article, relying on the system to pick up girls in countless ways. Then a superpower appears. When I saw it, I didn't know whether I should think with my big head or my small head. This chaos is also reflected in the related plots. For example, the plot of the protagonist's sister being possessed requires writing a paragraph every few chapters. This inexplicable plot interruption greatly affects the continuity of reading. In addition to the chaos, there are also some minor problems. For example, the characters before and after the protagonist seem to be inconsistent. For example, most of the plot is driven by the characters catching each other and being jealous. Anyway, overall it is good to read Xiao Huangshu. In theory, I should give it 7.4 Points, but my brother said that I must add 0.5 Points, so my score is 7.9 Points.

Quickly round out the supernatural content, which will affect the viewing experience. Originally, the city was well written, but if fantasy had to be inserted, it would be right to write in the general direction of the city.

From a city god novel to a fantasy and suspense novel, what a great beginning.

To be honest, the urban plot is pretty good. Don't add fantasy elements to the next book. It's a pity that Sanjiang is written like this.

Please end the supernatural content as soon as possible. It's not interesting at all. Momojiji is all about the Riddler.

The author does too many tricks, including inexplicable plots such as elves.

The author's writing skills are good. If it were written as a normal urban novel with multiple female protagonists, the impression would be much better. Unfortunately, the author always has some extravagant "fantastic ideas", which makes it difficult to read. For example, using the system app to forcefully change the supported heroine from worshiping money to being a good young man. What a wonderful story to redeem the innocent, kind and weak heroine who was trafficked and adopted. But before she was even familiar with her, she suddenly turned into the daughter of the richest man through an app, and the story line was cut off. The sister Annan of a reorganized family with a very good character was suddenly possessed by the Elf Queen Li Daitao, which took up most of the story. The sister did not come back until the ending. The more the plot is written, the more it deviates from expectations. What app system is a game of several gods? The heroine's father used his daughter to trade with the gods to become the richest man. The hero's sister traded with the gods to create the system app, etc. Everything after the hero's life is just a game of trading possessed by gods. Others don't know, but I clicked on the first few dozen chapters to read. Originally, it was for the urban campus plot of Shenhao with multiple female protagonists, but I really couldn't appreciate the high-end development in the back. .