The Rise of the Ancestors, from the Martial Sages of the Republic of China to the Immortals of the Pre-Qin Dynasty

I am always writing stories about ancestors, but there are not enough real-life chapters. It feels like the story and life of the protagonist are missing, and it deviates from the core of the protagonist.

The more you live, the more you go back. Then what else are you going to do in the future? Go on the day of birth. There is no future. Noise Shengxian

I came here from the introduction. Can anyone tell me about Shen Nong?

This kind of book is just for show now, as long as the ancestors have an outline. Why are you doing the opposite? Who cares about how your ancestors rose to power? Ridiculous

The protagonist almost has no sense of existence. . . I forgot what it was called. There is also little feedback. Moreover, he can also be an ancestor and have a child, isn't he the only one? Simulate yourself. And there is changing the world. . . What is the difference between ancestor's modification and one's own modification?

Personally, I feel that the real-life chapters should be more synchronized. After watching other people's performances throughout the whole process, I feel that the protagonist has no sense of existence.

The current shortcomings, I think, are that the protagonist has spent so much money to end up with only a branch line. At best, he is a branch line, but at worst, he is the dog of the main line, a domestic slave. Second, you can't always write about simulators. You have to write about some real-life changes for readers. It doesn't need to be too much, but you also have to write about real-life changes. Third, after the protagonist has finished brushing his grandpa's grandfather, it must be ensured that the protagonist can maintain his own strength. It is best to add some simulator entries to the protagonist himself to ensure that his status remains unchanged. For example, the green congenital fetal gas entry of the grandfather is added to the protagonist, so that the grandfather regards the protagonist as the heir of the family. It is best for the grandfather to have the 200-year lifespan entry. Whether it is the Ming Dynasty or the Song Dynasty in the later period, the protagonist must have a core entry to ensure the protagonist's identity as the Son of God in the later stage. Whether it is the Supreme Bone or Double Eyes, the protagonist must have a heaven-defying entry for his ancestors, and he must ensure that he also has it.

There are no pig's feet, only his ancestors, how can he substitute them?

Dear author, don't stop updating for so many days. Your book is really beautiful. Have confidence in yourself. Don't doubt whether the book will collapse. Don't read the comments. Just write the story you want to write. It's really great and beautiful. Come on, come on, you can do it. Come back later and continue to rise, don't be afraid.

I haven't seen such an attractive seedling for a long time. When I first read the title and introduction, I thought it was an ordinary ancestral routine article. But I personally like this kind of article that affects ancestors and then gradually rewrites history. However, for general ancestral articles, in the middle stage, you will gradually lose track of how to write them, and boredom is the norm. I hope the author can make a good outline and write steadily.

To be honest, the difficulty in this kind of book is how to round out the world view, because it will become more and more outrageous later on, causing readers to feel that their IQ is being rubbed on the ground. . . .

You can't read books about changing the past. How can you ensure that changing the past will not cause you to disappear?

It's rare to find a good book. The author is missing. Do you guys have any recommendations for similar books?

After reading it, the subject matter was novel, but I didn't feel immersed or happy when I read it carefully!

Author, your book has the potential to become a god, so it would be a pity.

There was too much written about this overseas, and the plot was not advanced for a long time. I feel like I haven't said anything in the two chapters, so it's a bit fun to read 😎😎

The plot becomes a bit boring when all kinds of gods appear. The earth is getting stronger and stronger, and the constraints of breaking away from the earth and entering the starry sky are getting bigger and bigger. In the future, the earth will become bigger and become the universe, right?

I saw it on the shelves. The current protagonist is his Jianchang ancestor. It looks like a memoir, which is boring.

Author, if you are threatened, just send a message in my comment.

How can I put it, the world view is too much of a hindrance to the protagonist. If it starts with a high-martial world view, where humans fly out of the earth to conquer the stars or conquer the battlefields of thousands of races, with levels ranging from low to high, without using a single universe to just blow up the stars or swallow the stars, the immortal level, and then write the world view thousands of years after humans have entered the starry sky, it would be better if the protagonist simulates his ancestors and gradually changes from ordinary warriors decades to thousands of years ago to warriors who suppress the star field. It would be better to add restrictions up to three times.

I really want to know why not just use Manqing. Why, do they have shares in Qidian?

Has anyone written one based on this theme?