Cultivation into Immortality but Cyber Wasteland

The protagonist is suspected to be an indigenous person. Besides the protagonist, there are also time travellers. There is also a pseudo-protagonist who is set up by his teammates (I don't know how to describe it 😒) The writing is really good, and there is nothing wrong with the logic. The future is promising.

Alas, Immortal Xiaoyao, now the starting point is a bunch of evil demons and heretics. None of them look alike.

Shennong is here, this book is more than grain and grass, and there is hope for fairy grass

The pace is too fast. The protagonist's talent should be developed slowly. But now the whole story is about fighting, and the fighting is too long and dense. Although the upgrade is fast, which is an advantage, I always feel that this talent is of little use to the protagonist. It is a battle to have it or not. And it's always the little Karami who joins the boss's game. After finishing a plot, let the protagonist develop a lot. This cyberpunk worldview of cultivating immortals is quite novel, but if the battles are too dense, it will be the turn to return to the traditional cultivating immortals. Such a good worldview can at least write about some different cultures.

If something is wrong, then correct it and encourage it. If the author is beaten, he will stand upright. If he makes a mistake, he will stand up straight. With feedback, I will make progress.

At this level, it will be popular if it continues. 38 Monthly votes have been cast. Come on.

Integration and many interesting settings, the rest depends on the plot, and the background also needs to be improved.

It's really something new, and it's pretty good

This method is a bit like the "Xian Lu" I watched before. Is it possible that it is a trumpet?

Not a buddy, are you going to accompany the emperor?

Who knows who the tuba is? I'm going to hit him

It's a pity that it was discovered too early

The update has been suspended for 7 days without any news, so it is time to pay tribute. Please burn incense in an orderly manner.

The writing is really good, keep up the style, and hopefully get platinum gold.

Or is it that the new book issues are updated intermittently, and I can't even read one book a day? Who is this eunuch? Moreover, it is said to be about cultivating immortality in the wasteland, but the result is to use the rules of the wasteland to explain the process of cultivating immortality. At first, there is a new idea, but after reading a few chapters, you will understand what it is. Changing the soup without changing the medicine is not as good as the promising article on cultivating immortality.

The main point of view is aboriginal, and after a few dozen chapters a time traveler appears. If you don't mess with it, who will?

Eunuch? It obviously feels good, but it's a pity.

Finished😭😭

I've finished reading the latest chapter, so do you still write?

The author writes wonderfully and is definitely worth subscribing to. Borrow precious treasures and recommend a book. Cyber ​​Immortality Cultivation Stream: "People cultivate immortality in cyberspace, and the system lives in fantasy"

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

Don't give up😭😭😭😭

What can be done? Still not finished