I Cultivate Yin Virtue in the Yang World

Bloody plot, lagging boy, what are you going to do?

The old man died halfway through his business venture. Now he has a bad physical examination and is in poor health. This is the time when his life is at risk. However, the Platinum Gods are unremitting within themselves, and those who forget about themselves and the outside world should sincerely collect and read it to show off the spirit of an old man. It is not suitable for passers-by to glance at it, give negative reviews and abandon the book, so as to ruin the path of writing books.

In a small town, there is a lot of shit, and there is also a useless protagonist,

Overall it's okay, but there are some flaws. There's a lot of shit in a big town, and there's no sense of speed control. The protagonist's upgrade is slow, but now he's being monitored. I'm really speechless.

It's quite good, but the number of words you wrote is too few, and I'm not used to it.

Without further ado, let's just say the conclusion: it can be used as food and edible, but it is also slightly poisonous. Let's talk about the advantages first: the plot is smooth and the writing style is pretty good among so many online writers. Both the protagonist and the villain have online IQs. There are some folk customs and mysteries in the middle, but it is quite enjoyable to watch. The story has a strong logic and gets better as you go to the back. I feel that when the world view is revealed, it should be quite exciting. Okay, let's talk about the shortcomings next. 1. Protagonist's character: Because he is a sinister character, he cannot be a bad person. As a result, when the protagonist does things, he is a little awkward and not refreshing enough. 2. Little boy: He stole the protagonist's money, and the protagonist took him in. Well... I guess many people gave up after reading around Chapter 10. This is indeed poisonous. But after looking at it, I roughly understand the author's intention. The little boy plays a lubricant role in the plot, and after learning the Dragon Transformation Technique later, he should no longer be a drag. Moreover, it seems that it is not easy to find out the child's identity. There should be a plot trigger. I think other methods can be used, and it doesn't necessarily have to be taken in. This is a matter of opinion. 3. The first plot is a bit bloody. While in the cave, when I discovered the true identity of the female supporting character (possibly the female protagonist), I was a little caught off guard and thought I was watching a female video. In fact, there are more and better ways to deal with it, but I can't understand it when written like this. 4. Monetary system: The author seems to have no idea about prices in ancient times. Considering that spiritual stones will be used as currency in the later stage, I just pretend that I can't see it. Overall, it's still watchable. Although there is a short section in the middle that is a bit boring (around 50-60, I forgot the details), but after reading it, I found that the author's level and ability to conceive stories seem to have improved a lot. The above are personal opinions. If you have different opinions, or if the author is not convinced, you can object. I voted and supported it. I look forward to the author coming to dig my grave after he becomes a god.

The writing is good, the writing style and story logic are both good. If I can maintain my current level, I will follow suit.

You can watch the protagonist online every day.

I recently discovered a secret, that is, when you click to vote for a monthly ticket, your monthly ticket number will be reduced by one. If you don't believe me, you can try it.

I haven't read it yet, so let's give it a try. It's not easy for newbies, so don't let it dampen your confidence. I would like to give a suggestion to the author: read less book reviews, but you must read them less. It is better to know the general situation of the quality of their books earlier. Many new authors give up writing because of the eunuchs in the book reviews.

There are so many flaws that I don't know where to start. While the storyline inherits the poisonous points of previous Internet novels, it can also achieve little improvement. I would like to call it awesome. The advantage is that the stories are all tested, have an audience, and have interesting logic.

It's very well written. If you complain about the small town and things like that, go check out what Gu Long's Lu Xiaofeng writes.

The writing is okay. Why are there so few people? Is it because your updates are too slow?

I really don't know how to vomit if I have something to say, it's written in a mess

I was almost poisoned to death in the front, and almost died of pleasure in the back...

What the hell is written behind this? Dragon Transformation Technique? Is the spiritual root free?