Battle of Two Cities: a Fatal Rhythm Is Drawn at the Beginning

The plot of the final chapter fell apart a bit, and the part where the protagonist told Jinx about his ordeal was called a "super game" according to the parlance of the game, that is, the role manager played by the protagonist was not enough to support him to say such a thing, especially in front of Hilko, and judging from the current progress of the relationship between the protagonist and Jinx, he will know more or less about the protagonist's past. The identity of the young gangster from the city, and the words he said to Jinx with a sad face seemed false. I know that the author has patched it up, and the family... If it is a family, there will be traces of it, and the protagonist still looks like a young man who looks like the mayor of the city. After all, the original owner did not appear out of thin air. He also has his own interpersonal relationships. They will understand each other more or less, but suddenly he took out a "rope" "Dart" and claimed that there was a family in the past... The handling method is a bit blunt. The protagonist's dialogue at the transaction site is a patch. Those people and Jinx do not know the protagonist's past. To be fair, the description in front of Hilko said that he has never met Hilko, which is considered passable, but his past relationship is not fully revealed. The bartender... It seems a bit wrong for the protagonist to say that he is a regular customer in front of him. After all, Judging from the dialogue, they are familiar people. The most important point is that Jinx is very important to Hilko. Hilko may not take care of the protagonist's overt interactions, such as pranks and so on. But when the protagonist first meets Hilko, something will not be right. Hilko will also understand and investigate. The past mentioned by the protagonist may not be tenable in front of Hilko.

It's quite good-looking. I have the image of people talking in the Two Cities anime.

The author's writing is okay. When will the contract be signed?

Does it look good? Why no comments?

There is nothing to follow. Is the writing really so ugly?