Tokyo: I Am Surrounded by Troubled Girls

The writing is extremely detailed, so much so that it makes me tired to read it every day even if I wish I could be precise to the minute. The advantage is that it will make you want to quit after just a few chapters. As for the label's love, haha, such a torturous and time-consuming process of teasing, let alone the protagonist, made the onlookers tired and directly entered the sage mode.

Dear readers Don't cross it out yet When the author used to read the novel, what he hated most was the toilet paper of the indentured slaves at the beginning. At that time, I felt that if the heroine was a slave, there would be a beauty without the process of conquering... I couldn't enjoy the pleasure of falling down step by step and being pulled. Now that I think about it, it turns out that I am a slave, and the author feels the same way... So I hate it. The author now admits it generously. Yes, that's right. In a big circle, I just want to say The author is the slave of all readers. The author can do everything. If you are interested, please read it. Save the child, writing a novel won't make it to the first round of recommendations, and then it will only cost 300,000 yuan to be put on the shelf or something... Don't do that kind of thing/(ㄒoㄒ)/~~ If you are not interested, for the sake of the poor child, can you accompany the child to the shelf... You can just stay on the new chapter for 20 seconds and then scroll to the last page. Of course. To be honest, it's your own choice. The collection is slowly increasing every day, but the reading remains unchanged and I have returned it... If you have reached the end, thank you for wasting a few minutes to read it. Finally, you can just curse a few times. What's even more vulnerable to me is that there is no one around...

Perhaps the starting point of Groove now needs to use various means to make the works faster and tilt resources towards high-topic works, but I still prefer these more delicate works.

The beginning is similar to that of Female Difficulty. I hope it won't be like a eunuch.

Why do you feel that the setting and the characters are so similar to a book I read on Mao Station called "The Difficult Look of Women: Duanmu Classmate"? Did the author learn from it?

I'm not asking for help. Newbies feel like they can just click on Chapter 46 or 47 and read three or four chapters later. The descriptions in these chapters are really great.

It is too thin and may not be suitable for the market. Before you have a basic number of fans, it is recommended to stick to the template. You can write both coarse and fine grains. The real writing power is the degree of relaxation.

After reading the beginning, it looks so similar to Nv Nan

Why does he look so similar to Duanmu, who looks like a woman?

I feel that the main reason for the poor performance of this book, apart from the writing, is that the hospital plot in the first few dozen scenes does not have a strong driving force. The plot of passing the hospital does not promote the main plot too much. This branch line is too long at the beginning. There are neither many tangible rewards nor any follow-up plot advancement for the protagonist after completing the plot process. A dramatic conflict with tension is undoubtedly a better shot in the arm. You might as well be a little bolder in many places. Otherwise, there will be neither enough positive feedback nor hope, so how can readers continue to follow the story.

Judging from your grades, it looks like your crotch is stretched. Come on.

Personally, I feel that the female character's personality is based on "Female Hard to Change", which makes it difficult for women to be eunuchs. I use this book as a meal replacement.

The title of the book is "Problem Girl", but when I read the latest chapter, I couldn't see anything wrong with it. I just mentioned that I like corpses, but I felt that there was no problem at all 😵.

I've seen the second volume. Isn't it the second heroine who imitates the heroine? If so, that would be great. The heroine is gone. Next, you will be a meal replacement 😍

As for the monitor, I thought the monitor was also a female protagonist

The protagonist lacks some golden fingers or other things to promote the development of the plot, leaving readers with no hope for the subsequent plot and lacking some purpose in doing things. Need to show more of the characteristics of the protagonist.

Have you changed the plot? I remember there was a hint of Sisyphus pushing a stone?

Is it because I gave myself a holiday during the Spring Festival or is it because I'm gugu?

No more updates? After all, is it still no match for the results?😫

No updates until then, and when it will be released.

There are more heroine cards 😍

Poor, the writing is quite good, but there are no grades. Does the author still write books?