I Am Cultivating Immortality Alone in the Cyber World

After reading three chapters, Three questions The first and most important question: sense of substitution Your protagonist's subjective consciousness comes from the world of immortality, and the reader does not come from the world of immortality. How do you create your protagonist? It seems like we all want to be bystanders. At the beginning of the cyber world, you spent a lot of words describing the emotional changes of the protagonist. Then let me ask you, after reading one chapter, will readers be led into the cyberspace protagonist or the cultivator? The second question: Atmosphere I have read the first chapter several times. Although there are elements of the cyberworld, there is no atmosphere of the cyberworld. The look and feel is more like the ancient world of cultivating immortals. It is recommended to use a slightly more professional wording. Don't just write nouns The third problem: crisis This problem is a cliché. The crisis of the cyber protagonist cannot be well reflected in the protagonist of cultivating immortality. My suggestion is that earth travelers obtain the inheritance of cultivating immortals and travel through the cyber world.

1 Cyberpunk itself is a niche, and cultivating immortals is even more so 2 The protagonist himself has no sense of substitution or identification. Everyone is from the past of the earth, even if the indigenous protagonist is not written by a great god, he still has to rush 3 There is a problem with the article, I don't know whether it is the parser who is the protagonist, or what, sneer, suggestion. Then why not make the parser the protagonist? Is there such an emotional tool? 4 If you are not a master, don't play memory killing and emotional cards. I've only written 38 chapters, and you've already started, and combined with 2, it makes me want to vomit, to be honest. I won't say anything else, but it's still ok, keep up the good work

Investigation object: "I am cultivating immortality alone in the cyber world"-male protagonist-[Xue Xi] Investigation result: [Borrowing a corpse to bring back the soul] Judgment basis: A time-travel investigator, as the name suggests, is to investigate the time-travel situation of the time-travelers and The purpose of recording this profession is to allow observers (readers) in all worlds to know in advance the travel situation of travelers in this world, and to volunteer to provide observers with a quick query service for travel information If there are any errors, please correct me ——Feast of All Souls Zhenjun Stay on January 3, 2025

Cyber ​​World will continue to write about the regular academy competitions, please end them as soon as possible 🙂

😅 The author really didn't choose the topic of cyber and cultivating immortals well. The cyber sword fairy Tie Yu is represented by something like an electronic wooden fish or a network Buddhist country. The cyber style is used to interpret cultivating immortals. Tongtian Dao Dao, which has already been used and has produced popular models, has to go through the traditional cultivating immortals vs. Cyber technology, which is a dead end that no one has ever taken.

I write too much about the academy now, and I'm tired.

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Although there are not many, they are beautiful

The taste is so strong that I didn't finish even one chapter.