Devouring the Starry Sky: Inner Volume Training, Volume Crying Luo Feng

The first dream of all Devouring fans: to hold Luo Feng's thigh. The final realization of all the swallowing fans: Luo Feng hugged his thigh.

I can look at anyone who can be the male protagonist, but I don't like Luo Feng's brother and younger brother, which are not in the original work. For example, Luo Hua's original work also has a clear development path. Is it a fanfic anyway? I will die if I don't specifically select these people, so I settled on the No. 3 High School in Yi'an District and 56 years. How many years has this original work been written? The time and place are all badly written, and the plot map of the original work is also badly written. These fan fiction writers don't know how to use their brains and have no imagination to be science fiction authors. Every time traveler has a golden finger, why can't they express themselves freely? Nowadays, you can make money by writing about cities. Do you see anyone writing based on the templates of richest men such as Jack Ma, Ma Huateng, and Wang Jianlin? Cities are the real world and don't require much imagination. Go ahead and write.

I feel more and more that the digitization of understanding is a failure. Normally, it is not difficult to double the understanding or ten times the achievement. The pig's trotter's understanding has doubled hundreds or thousands of times compared to the beginning. Transcendence and sainthood are derogatory terms for pig's trotters. This kind of improvement is much more terrifying than the blessing of perfect genes, but the level of pig's trotters is not up to expectations.

It's so cool. Every time I meet an opponent, I have to describe the opponent's appearance for a long time.

Cultivate earthlings, cultivate cosmic beings, let your sons grow free

When I read the introduction, I wanted to laugh. Even with this amount of training, my physique and proficiency would not be so low even without a system. Is this a reward or a punishment?

Who doesn't know that in Tomato's book, the heroine is just to prove that the hero is not gay? According to the way the original book is written, there are only a few female characters in the whole book 😅

If Luo Fan is 15 years old and publishes the novel "Swallowing the Starry Sky" on the Internet, and Luo Feng is only 12 years old, do you think Hong and Lei Shen will know about the novel "Swallowing the Starry Sky" and what will they do if they know it?

Comprehension and energy can increase by tens of thousands or hundreds of thousands without moving. It is not good to digitize these things, because you, the author, cannot explain it clearly. You are smart just by looking at tomatoes. You can make tens of thousands of epochs come out, and tens of millions of epochs come out. As for how much talent and understanding this has? You can figure it out yourself.

Author, please read the original work again. The soul treasure and the armor type are different. The armor treasure is weakened to one thousandth of a thousandth according to the proportion, which is correct, but the soul treasure can completely guard the soul as long as it does not exceed the upper limit.

Sure enough, it's a poison. You got it out of nowhere.

Isn't there anyone out there who thinks it's better to start the game now?

Is it good to write an original heroine by a fan?

Like Ai Chen😭

It's the first time I've seen the book that gave birth to the original universe. It's not bad. It has its own ideas. Many fans will follow the original work. Demon Killer Clan and Sea of ​​Blood have nothing new.

After reading more than 50 chapters, I would like to make some suggestions and write less explanatory text. . Don't go back and forth, I guess the author is used to writing like this and it will be more expensive to put on the shelves, so I'll cut my losses in advance and wish you a bright future.

I don't want spiritual teachers. I feel that spiritual teachers have no passion at all.

Without a few common treasures, what is the title of invincible king? Even the King of Destiny, the King of Seven Swords, the South Punisher, and the Black Shaver King, who are close to being invincible, all have a few valuable treasures! A hundred thousand times the foundation of the peak kingship plus more than ten times the amplitude secret method plus several times the genetic level plus the peak secret method plus two ordinary heavy treasures, this is the limit of the kingship that is close to the invincibility of the king! ! !

Please! What is the limit of becoming a king at 180,000 times the peak level of the Realm Lord? One million times is the threshold for becoming a king! To increase the combat effectiveness tenfold based on the peak of Kingship, it can be the amplitude secret method or the gene multiplier. It can also be a peak secret method or a heavy treasure. If everything is done, if it reaches 10 million times, the king will be invincible.

So hypnotic. See the back

The protagonist has too many messy arrangements and too many messy ideas.

Is it okay if the protagonist's name doesn't include "Fan"? I have seen that most novels have the character "Fan" in the name of the protagonist. Since Ye Fan came out, the subsequent novels without "Fan" in their names feel like they are not the protagonists. Why bother. . ? Can you change the word?

Making a clone of the original universe is so imaginative, and the thinking is awesome, but it's also too outrageous!

It's best not to touch on areas where the author is unclear about the original work. There is a difference between the bloodline evolution potion and the bloodline potion. The former is a pharmacist or a product of technology, which only improves the physical talent, but does not increase the law affinity and gene multiplier; the latter is made from the corpse of the corresponding race. The effect is not mentioned in the original work, but there is a high probability of law affinity and gene multiplier. It should not inherit the secret talent.

Is there anyone out there? What's the book like? I don't dare to click on these more than 20 comments.

When I saw the Enlightenment Crystal, I thought it was some kind of treasure of enlightenment. I thought it could increase the clarity of the law hundreds of times or thousands of times, but this is the result? The cosmic level is only doubled? The Realm Lord only improved three times? You must know that some treasures that assist in understanding can increase the clarity of the laws dozens of times or hundreds of times. It's just that those treasures can't be used for a long time like the Enlightenment Crystal.

This is a great idea! The soul enslaves the Zerg mother queen, and then uses the space worm clone to transform into the mother queen and enter the queen's small universe to comprehend the holy seal similar to the Chaos Monument, and then be rewarded with a holy seal! You can contribute this holy seal to the clan in the future! I guess I can exchange it for a few treasures!

There are too many people swallowing them together. I'm almost tired of watching them.

It's a very well-written Devouring fanfic, very good