
Under One Person: a Poor Taoist Devotes Himself to Cultivating Immortality
一人之下:贫道一心修仙
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- Completed
- Length
- 1.1M Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 2mo ago
- Source
- Qidian
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My Cultivation Text Adventure Game
I don't know what the author wants to write
In the introduction, I saw that the protagonist is dedicated to cultivating immortality, so I went in with high expectations. But now that I have read the latest chapter, I find that the protagonist is always involved in various incidents, and I see all kinds of grievances and resentments, as well as the protagonist's own love and hatred and fun and slapstick. On the contrary, the protagonist's single-minded pursuit of immortality was not reflected very well.
The title of the book has nothing to do with the content, and the protagonist is a typical Feiwu Well, he is the kind of character who can't beat anyone, and has everything to do with the protagonist, who is not a fun person, and is quite boring.
I feel like there is something wrong with what you wrote, the author.
Chapter 3: Sex and fate are reversed. I remember that sex governs the body, life, and the soul. And Chapter 8, remember that there is only the Consciousness God and the Yuan Shen, where does the Desire God come from?
The classic protagonist muttered to himself. . .
Did the author not write it? Using inner demons as a system?
Come on
The story unfolds slowly. It's very well written, but I don't know how the comments are all negative. I have to keep accepting it without thinking, right?
The subject matter is so good, but the content is a mess.
No wonder I haven't discovered this book before. After reading dozens of chapters, I can only say that it is too boring. The plot is useless. The main character has no brains. He has a master and starts experimenting with his own cultivation method before he even introduces it. It is basically finished.
Legend, creation, the other side? The third generation Yuanshi Tianzun?
I've read Chapter 20, but I still feel not at all excited. I don't have Golden Finger, I don't have talent and understanding. It's said to be a rebirth and time travel, but there are all the stories about parents, the protagonist is like a native, tepid, every plot point is soy sauce, what's the matter? Does this have to be played at the beginning of the original plot?
After reading the book reviews, 90% of them complained about it. How many chances did the author take? Let everyone unanimously hate that the author has no focus and makes the protagonist keep doing things ineffectively? When I look at it, I feel like it should be written in a pretentious and annoying way~ It's not fun without a plan Let's go
It is obvious that the author has made progress
When I saw it on the shelves, I felt it was a bit messy. It was too bland and I had no desire to read it.
The main contradiction in Under One Person is between strangers and ordinary people, not between strangers and strangers.
It's almost like Grindelwald in Fantastic Beasts It's not clearly related to the company. Too much is not good.