Peninsula: Dangerous Boys

It felt like a bit of a rip-off. After watching the whole movie, I didn't see any danger. Some of the boys had no temper at all. It felt like they were not as rebellious as the protagonist in Metamorphosis that I watched when I was a kid. . .

I have always been a reader, so I can understand readers' thinking very well. Before posting, I will read it several times myself and check for typos. After posting, I will also read it during my break, so I can understand the readers, especially the people who follow it. Readers may just read it once and then read another one, but for me, I will read the chapters that I am satisfied with a dozen times or even dozens of times. When I have time or no inspiration, I will even read it from the beginning. Of course, I will skip the boring chapters (so I know which chapters are boring) As a creator, I know the content to be published before readers. I will not brag about qualified chapters, because my level is limited and there is still a lot of room for improvement. Speaking of bad foreshadowing chapters, I knew the content was boring or uninteresting before posting it, but I still needed to post it, otherwise I would be sorry for my own heart and subsequent creations. I am also working on solutions, such as trying to update more this time, but it seems to be self-defeating. It has been more than a month since I started writing the book. Before I decided to write it, I was mentally prepared. Some people will definitely like it and some will not, so I have to accept all opinions with an open mind. Also, I seem to often post comments and even ask for your comments. I want to explain this reason. Because before writing this book, I had made up my mind to finish it, and I would never supervise it. However, during the creation process, I would be confused and entangled. To be more specific, how much time should I spend on creating this novel 24 hours a day? Is this kind of effort worth it? When will it feel worthwhile to me? It is when everyone votes for recommendation, comments and encouragement that it gives me a sense of interaction and satisfaction, especially the "come on" buff in the comments, which makes me feel that it is worth it. When did I start to doubt whether it was worth it? After I finish creating every day, I look at the time I spent and the amount of code, and I can't help but start to doubt whether the time and energy I spent was worth it. After all, you are generating electricity for love, spending a lot of time and energy every day, but not getting any money in return. But before I wrote the book, I was trying to improve myself, exercise my abilities, and get rid of my impetuous personality. So of course it would be best if I signed a contract or something, but I still had to finish writing the book if I didn't. (Now that it's free, I feel pressured. If I really sign a contract, I feel like I'm autistic. Maybe it's more suitable for me to be free and then update slowly. But during this period of time, I'd better try to update more and at least get the basics right.) I have two options now. The first is to work behind closed doors and write my own thing without interaction. For example, today I won't post the author's words or comments, and everyone will remain silent in a tacit understanding. This is actually the way I like in my heart. The second option is to actively ask for your comments, interact with everyone, and then receive criticism and education, and strive to make progress. This option is painful for me, and even a little scary, because you never know what the person on the other side of the network cable will say to you! But, for the time being, I still want to improve my level and try my best. I was really defeated by myself, so I started updating silently, reading comments silently, and making progress silently. This is actually the most suitable for me. I am also torn between these two choices now. I have decided to make a compromise for the time being. Readers can comment on what they should. I warmly welcome it, and I will definitely read it, but I will try not to participate in the discussion myself and just develop silently.

It's really interesting to interact with readers, you can get inspiration and education. I hope everyone will comment more. It would be a good thing for me to talk more about my shortcomings. If there are any, I will correct them and if there are none, I will encourage you! The heroines are Yoona Lin and Krystal for the time being. Whether there will be others depends on how long it takes to write. Depending on the age of the protagonists, there will be many opportunities in the later stage. Theoretically, if it is short, it is possible to have only one female protagonist, but if it is long, there will definitely be multiple female protagonists. We also need to pave the way for the business line, there must be some. I am mainly a creative artist, but I will also work part-time as an artist, but I won't become an idol because I am too passive. I was inspired to write this novel after watching the variety show "Girls and the Dangerous Boys". The protagonist is allowed to participate in this show and start to change himself, so the foreshadowing needs to be longer, which just happens to temper my impatience, and I can sort out the following content. With this slow pace, there is a high probability that it will not be popular, and I can completely accept this. Because I prefer fast-paced stimulation, and then forget about it after watching it, so now I want to change myself appropriately. In summary, the pace of the entire book is definitely slow at present. Regardless of whether there is a contract or not, it will definitely not be a eunuch (except for force majeure). In the short term, the book with a single female protagonist will be completed early, and in the long term, if there are multiple female protagonists, the book will be updated slowly. ps. The biggest difference between the original variety show and Metamorphosis is that most teenagers actively want to change themselves, rather than being forced by their parents. Although I also feel that compared with the domestic Metamorphosis, it is not dangerous at all. But if you really put it into perspective, if you were a teacher in your teenage years, you would have become more honest no matter how dangerous it is! By the way, I would like to recommend the song "The boys". The Chinese-translated lyrics are quite interesting.

First of all, the reason for writing this novel is because after watching the variety show "Girls' Generation and the Dangerous Boys", I began to imagine that it would be interesting if a Korean entertainment protagonist could participate in this variety show and interact and collide with Girls' Generation, so I just wanted to write a book myself. I only started to know about Girls' Generation after reading Korean entertainment novels, and then gradually became a fan of them. I remember that during the time when I was addicted, basically every book had a heroine named Kim Taeyeon. I have to use Baidu to find out about many of the heroines now, haha! Then there is an explanation about the content of the book. I have seen feedback in the comments, and I have seen similar ones, and they even directly asked me to "extend" what I plagiarized. Regarding this, I have to say the following three points. . . Haha! Just kidding, I would like to explain it seriously. I only wrote this because of the variety show "Girls' Generation and Dangerous Boys". There are many plots that appear in variety show videos. I described them through words. It is inevitable that there will be repetitions in this part of the framework! I remember that the Korean entertainment masterpiece "Dream of the Stars" seemed to have written about this variety show later, but the male protagonist Wen Shao was integrated into it as a teacher. I have forgotten the specific plot because it was so sad. To be honest, I almost cried while watching it, so I didn't stick with it until I finished it. Back to the topic, within the framework of this variety show, the male protagonist I wrote was integrated into it as a student, and then collided with Girls' Generation. I adapted it on the basis of this variety show. You can even say that I plagiarized the variety show "Girls' Generation and Dangerous Boys" (after all, Korean entertainment even carelessly wrote the real names of the stars, which is already a crime. The sin is serious, and after Korean entertainment novels, I also copy songs and movies, what should I do? But I thought about it, I have read enough celebrity city-type books, and it seems that everyone is doing this, so I will continue to write, and I will never be a eunuch!), But you can never say that I plagiarized other people's novels. This crime is too serious and can scare people to death! Finally, there is an explanation of the signing of the contract and subsequent updates of the novel. The signing of the contract should have failed, but it still says that from the time I made up my mind to write, I have already been mentally prepared for the love of power. As long as there is no force majeure, I will definitely finish the book and will never be a eunuch.

The writing is getting better and better, support! But it's still a pity——-So is the male protagonist determined to let go of Girls' Generation? (Replacing love with companionship? Although writing this way will make the characters more vivid and real, it is really uncomfortable for readers - everyone is a dream boy, who doesn't dream of being their male dad 😭)

We are entering a bottleneck period again, but relying on previous experience, we have basically overcome it. Force it, force yourself to write, change yourself, etc., There are still the same tricks. So, a few days ago, I started to change the update time, just to make more changes and to stimulate myself. The problems encountered this time are really difficult to describe. I decided to write this book for Love Power because I like Korean entertainment, especially Girls' Generation. The finished book has been decided a long time ago, and it is basically certain that I will write only this one. The problem this time arises from this basic determination! Because I only plan to write this one book, I want to squeeze in as many things as possible, but I am afraid that if I don't include some content, I will regret it later! It is easy for problems to arise, such as some content that I know is boring before I write it, and some interesting content that I don't include for fear of regretting it in the future. To put it bluntly, it is my old habit that I have committed again, and I am reluctant to delete the plot and content. Personal ability is also a big problem. The stall is too big and I can't hold it up, so it collapses! ! ! Why do you say it has basically been overcome? Because, after I reflected on it, you can do as much things as you are capable of. There are many things that are boring or too lazy to write, so I just skip them. At most, I just write them down, maybe they will be used in the future! PS. It suddenly occurred to me that if there is a variety show that I have missed, I can write about the variety show rebroadcast on TV or online from the perspective of an audience, and then return to the scene at that time. This is also a way of writing. In short, just persist and persist.

After a month of writing, I really learned a lot from readers' comments. Will the distribution of protagonists and supporting roles overwhelm the protagonists? The pace of the storyline, are there too many boring chapters? Is it too pretentious if there are too many transitions and foreshadowing? These are all problems that are difficult for me to discover behind closed doors. I am very grateful to the readers for speaking up. After reflection, I did describe the supporting characters too much, but when a character appeared, I couldn't help but want to describe it in detail or even more realistically. I will pay attention to it in the future. The problem with the transition chapters is that when I was sorting out the outline, I overly pursued reasonableness and couldn't help but start to pave the way and fill in the loopholes in advance. This is a problem of my ability, but also a problem of my personality. I am trying to find a way to solve this problem. More updates or a few sentences to summarize and pave the way are one way. Giving up the excessive pursuit of reasonableness is a better way, but the degree inside needs to be adjusted after problems are discovered later. Also, some readers feel that the first variety show is too long. This is true. I will not repeat the reason. After all, the titles of the books are now Dangerous Boys. What needs to be added in particular is that at least for now, I am still working hard with the goal of writing for a long time and completing the book, so including the previous excessive foreshadowing issues, I am laying a solid foundation for the future. Finally, thank you again to all readers for their follow-up reading and recommendation votes. Special thanks to the Sweet Puff reader for his comment. He really loves this type of novel, just like me, haha! ps. Because most people read on mobile phones nowadays? Although I am a computer coder, the length of the paragraphs has changed a lot. This is also related to a reader's comment, but I have forgotten his name. I would like to thank him here.

Because I didn't like the two heroines you set, I chose to send you a hair extension. I copied it from Tomato Next Door's My Wife Is Sunny, a Korean entertainment book.

I have finished chasing it. To be honest, when you accept the succubus setting of the male protagonist, everything seems natural. And indeed, as a book friend said in this book, the beginning of the second volume is the beginning of traditional Korean entertainment. However, with the addition of the first volume, we can really see the growth of the male protagonist. I feel very comfortable reading the third volume. As for the love line, although Lin Yoon-ah's love came too suddenly in the first volume, I really like the handling of the love line in the second volume. Both of them are so-called male protagonists and female protagonists. It is difficult to accommodate the other and give up the initiative. Instead of twisting and turning, it is better to break it off. I originally thought that I was going to create a misunderstanding and use it to break up my relationship, but it's true that I've read too many Korean entertainment novels and am used to the heroine's love brain revolving around the hero. You really write about the heroine as a real person, which I admire very much. There is also the change in the male protagonist's emotional outlook, which is also handled very grandly. Women will only affect the speed at which I draw the sword. But the problem is that once this kind of sentimental view becomes scumbag, it won't stop, so what I want to say is that it's a pity that this kind of male protagonist should not be a scumbag, haha. I'm looking forward to the following plots, so how many do you plan to write for the heroine? If the only thing that seems a little embarrassing right now is the inexplicable creative desire and creativity. But there is really nothing you can do about it. If you set up a time-travel setting, everything would be easier to deal with. Otherwise, it would be a bit awkward to burst into song as soon as you play. But the problem is not big, and it is still within the acceptable range. Finally, I always want to see women pulling their hair, and I look forward to the collision between the heroines later 😍😍😍

This variety show took so long to write.

Hurry up and write. One page a day is enough for anyone. I haven't seen this kind of freshness for a long time. The author of the writing style has not been so comfortable in the past two months. Korean Entertainment Circle The heroine, I am full of sunshine. The heroine, pure love, is the coolest thing.

What readers want to see is the collision between a man and SNSD, not a group of gangsters colliding with SNSD. Besides, what is there to write about a group of Xiba gangsters? Don't tell me that you're going to write about SNSD developing a relationship with these gangsters in the future. It's almost done. What's the point of hooking up with the Eight Brothers? It's just a variety show, it's just a show.

Great, no need to say more, I just want to express my love for your book. No matter what your next book is, I will give you an initial subscription👍👍

Come on, look forward to the day it ends

I took a quick look at the more than 3,000 votes, and then looked at the 30 comments. It was so confusing. Then I looked carefully at the recommended votes, which are not monthly votes. Then I looked again, a great author, generating power for love! ! Since this is the case, there's nothing left to say!

Is the pursuit of reading bad? Why aren't there many comments?

I've read a few chapters of this free book and it's surprisingly good, but it's a pity that I don't wear it. In addition, Donglong, the teaching director, has a terrible sister Paula. This is a parallel time and space please answer.

After writing so much, is it still this variety show?

I understand your loneliness, come on

I just read this book today, and I have only read 90 chapters so far. Here are some of my opinions so far: 1. This book feels like the old books I read when I first watched Korean entertainment in 2017 and 2018. They are often fan-oriented, variety shows, centered around SNSD, with inexplicable heartbeats and emotional lines, and finally end with the complete collection of SNSD. 2. Regarding the career line of the male protagonist, after reading about Chapter 90, I only saw that the male protagonist is currently preparing to participate in a dance competition, chatting with PD about his future, and somehow seems to have something to do with JYP, as well as occasional bursts of inspiration (horse dance, happy). I didn't feel that the male protagonist had a clear goal or plan for the future. Of course, you may know that, but I seemed really confused. Although the male protagonist is indeed a high school student at this time, you might want to write about the confusion and struggle of high school students? 3. Regarding the emotional line, it is really a bit thin and conjectural. Is the male protagonist some kind of succubus? SNSD and the others have met so many idol trainees, how could they fall in love with the male protagonist as soon as they saw him? Inexplicably, I fell in love with Crystal, and out of nowhere, I started to get jealous. Even if it's love at first sight, there has to be a process. 4. Regarding the writing method of variety shows, I think variety shows should be written from the perspective of the male protagonist. Other supporting characters, including members who do not plan to be the female protagonist, can be written less. From what I've seen so far, I think you want to completely recreate the variety show, so you're trying to take into account all the characters as much as possible from a God's perspective. But what I want to see is just the plot development of the characters who have a relationship and bond with the male protagonist. Just like in a TV series, there will always be protagonists, supporting characters and even passers-by. In addition to positive descriptions of variety shows, a common way of writing is to promote the plot and even the progress of the male and female protagonists through audience feedback and evaluation after the broadcast. However, this book still focuses on positive descriptions. It becomes a bit monotonous after reading too much, and it is even difficult to distinguish between real time and variety show time. I think you can read some good similar books about variety shows to learn how to write. 5. I think you can add some psychological activities of the characters from time to time. Too many dialogues will make it tiring and rough. I can see that you want to write a good book. You can see that you have some skills in choosing words and sentences, but the writing is indeed relatively white, especially the emotional lines. This kind of book was not a problem 10 years ago, but the level of Korean entertainment authors has also improved in recent years, and readers' tastes have become more and more sophisticated, so it needs to be improved a bit. 6. The above content is just my thoughts after reading about 90 chapters. Most of them are based on my own feelings and point out problems. You can take a look at it appropriately and choose some references that suit you. Of course, I may have made mistakes, so please forgive me. It is not easy to generate electricity for love for so long, and I don't have the position to say too much, but I think you want to communicate with readers, so you have written so much. I hope these words will not burden you. Come on! I will read it slowly and wish you a happy life!

I would like to make a suggestion. The more adjectives and rhetoric are packed into the text, the better. Many chapters in this book are like this, which is very tasteless and looks very artificial. . . When your writing skills still need practice, then imitate and design the plot better.