Douluo: the Phoenix God Descends and the Emperor's Flame Burns the Sky

Personally I think: I can't see a little bit. Anyway, I personally can't see a bit. I don't know about other people.

Add more scenes to Shui Bing'er. Don't open too many harems. Don't force me to beg you.

Has the TM person changed? Is the writing level of the same person before and after this?

First of all, let's talk about the progress. There are now more than 110 chapters. After reading it, my personal conclusion is that it is relatively excellent among Douluo fans. The protagonist's plug-ins are also relatively reasonable, and the protagonist's heart also has a reasonable change process, and it is not the type where the temperament changes drastically as the strength increases. I don't want those mass-produced fans to have inexplicable malice towards passers-by in the world (I haven't written about Tang San yet, so I reserve my attitude towards Tang San) Then there is a negative issue First of all, I haven't determined the problem of the heroine. I have been trading stocks among several women, and they are all half-hearted. And I suspect that the author really likes the wife type, otherwise Ye Lingling and her mother will have too many scenes. The second thing is that the author always describes the protagonist as being very good-looking, knowing that you will look better every time you reach nirvana, but it really feels weird if you describe it too much. And the protagonist hasn't gained strength yet, I feel like the protagonist is like a 🦆. But considering the plot, appearance is indeed useful, and this is the land of love, so it is reasonable to feel uncomfortable. The rest is nothing. In addition, this article is one of the few that is kind to Dugu Bo and Ye Lingling's family. It is not the kind that is purely exploitative and greedy for health.

Just one female protagonist, just Shui Bing'er, a female protagonist is fine.

Although many people have given you bad reviews, I think there are no big problems overall. Come on

In terms of content alone, excluding the emotional line, this book can get a pretty good rating, but the emotional line is a bit unsatisfactory. Female characters who don't accept it should not have so many imaginative descriptions of body parts. Just express the characteristics of the character. Every time they appear, they have to describe the body again. It is purely seductive, and... Again. Should I say it or not, Dugu Bo is considered an epic enhancement in this book. He is the chosen one and has constant adventures. The ending is pretty good, I hope the author will keep up the good work

The first part is okay, but the second part is watery and bad.

Great, it would be even better if there was a real person reading it.

On the one hand, Ma Junhong was compared with Phoenix's noble talk, and on the other hand, he took the Blue Silver Emperor soul bone for his own use, explaining that it was to settle Ah Yin's life and make a deal. Can't a transaction be consensual? This is not a forced sale. If you just saved the Blue Silver Emperor and gave you a soul bone, I wouldn't have said anything. I found someone who couldn't resist and said that I saved you, so I want your soul bone. What's the difference from Tang San. The protagonist described in the article is for the soul bone. In this case, don't write that the protagonist is made of Phoenix Gao Jie. Isn't this the same double standard. On the one hand, he was talking about his noble character, and on the other hand, he was buying and selling in the name of my good for you. He still found someone who couldn't resist. And the explanation is unreasonable. At least Ah Yin does not need your rescue according to the original description. If you can't do that, don't focus on the character image and deepen the description. The previous article was written about how good the protagonist is and how demanding he is about himself, just like a phoenix. How come a hundred thousand year old soul bone instantly transformed into Tang San No. 2? One is pure and pure, and the other is as noble as a phoenix. Isn't this right and right?

I also look down on visiting brothels. A real man should open his harem openly and not be dirty even if the bus touches him? But there is absolutely no need for you to use this to belittle Ma Hongjun and elevate the protagonist. Just kill him if he is unhappy. In terms of personality, the protagonist is the reincarnation of a modern person in his thirties. Ma Hongjun is a native of the feudal theocratic Douluo. His three views are naturally completely different. The protagonist, an adult in his thirties, cannot bear the pain of being burned by evil fire. What does a six-year-old child expect him to do? In terms of sexual indulgence, if a 6-year-old child doesn't listen to Teacher Soul Saint's vent, should he listen to a child who is also "6 years old" in his eyes? In terms of evil fire control, the protagonist can only survive one round even if there are cheats. From the second round, it is completely dependent on Ye Qingxian, the continent's number one healing soul master, to survive the second round. As for Ma Hongjun, what do you want him to do? Burned alive? Without controlling the plot, the protagonist and Ben would not be able to connect with the Dugu family and the Ye family through the Bilin snake venom. If you can't get online, where will the immortal grass tempering come from? You can't pass the third round of evil fire tempering at all. What's the point of saying over and over again how bad Ma Hongjun is? You come from a humble background, and a rich second generation says that one hundred million is a trivial matter. Do you still want to belittle yourself and talk about why you don't work hard? And if you follow the original work, the Dou Er Wuhun theory has been developed for ten thousand years, and Ma Xiaotao, relying on Shrek and Super Douluo Teacher, has not been able to solve the problem of evil fire. It is really meaningless for you to criticize based on the world view.

In a novel that defies heaven, Flanders asked the protagonist to let out his evil fire and would rather die than prostitute. He didn't want a clean one or a commoner. He turned around and started to consider marrying the granddaughter of the patriarch of the Po clan because of his knowledge of fairy herbs.

I've always used the character design of Phoenix Gao Jie, why do I need to create more female protagonists? It feels a bit too serious and established, and the writing and secondary creation are also average.

There is something wrong with this book. The front and rear, the left and right brains interact with each other. The male protagonist is typically sick and thinks he is noble. In fact, he is no different from Tang San. They are both superficial and have no self-awareness.

Chapter 1 The reason is too childish. You can say that the heart of a strong man does not want to indulge in desire. Don't say it is dirty. You also claim to be highly educated. But it turns out that what you taught is noble and arrogant?

This is the first time I have seen children's literature. The writing style seems to be like reading a student's composition. I have traveled through time and become a child. I talk and act as if I am a child. It makes me sick to death.

Not only do you blindly change the settings, but you also use your left and right brains to interact with each other. You can let others level up quickly while you level up slowly. You also try your best to hold down the level. Isn't it a top-notch one?

A common problem in Douluo novels is that in order to break away from and fight against the protagonist group, they often like to portray the original protagonist group in a very bad way, which in my opinion is all bad. I personally feel that the author has to stand on the opposite side of the protagonist and target the original protagonist group every day. It is completely due to his inability to write too many plots that are divorced from the original work, and he writes plots that abuse the original protagonist group to make his work less dry. I originally thought that this would not happen with such a good result in this book, but such a plot appeared in the first chapter, which is really disappointing.

This protagonist is not that good. In the first chapter, I suggest writing him to death and then traveling to a less noble character.

The left brain fights the right brain, and the personality and behavior are completely different. Character: I won't do that dirty thing. The truth is: I just don't like it. A fight with Tang San, even more awesome than Tang San. In your book, I feel that Tang San is really pure and pure.

I wrote about the protagonist Gao Jie at the beginning. Many readers didn't buy it Author, when you want to put a positive label on the protagonist but it makes people dislike it You should think carefully about whether your writing is too blunt. . .

The protagonist thinks he is very noble but is actually a low-end version of Yi Xiaochuan

This is the book where the left and right brains are fighting each other.

The score of this book is quite good, but Chapter 10 is too poisonous. A 6-year-old dares to talk about the flaws of Dugu Bo's martial soul. So many people read it. Is it because the rest of it is so good?

You are running around the world at the age of six, and when others see you, they will immediately give you a second. Are you still looking for Dugu Bo? Also teach other soul emperors who are over 60 levels how to catch soul beasts? ? ? ? ? ? ?

Everyone despised Tang San. . But after traveling through the past, everyone became Tang San. . .

When did the threshold for quality products get so low? 🙄

Everyone despises Tang San and everyone is Tang San. These people write about Douluo.

Poisonous, it's a martial spirit, it's the ultimate martial spirit, Ice Phoenix is ​​the ultimate martial spirit, they're all here, I always like to add my own settings

I was persuaded to quit in the first chapter, and it turned out to be a high-quality product, each costing more than 2,000 yuan. I don't understand. When I speak, I feel like I am young and have no brains.