The Person Is in the Wrong Place, the Opening Sword Soul Template

It feels too rigid and game-like to be unreasonable and illogical. Just like what the buddy said, in the real world, ghost swordsmanship cannot be just horizontal slashing, downward slashing, and upward lifting, with three axes going back and forth, right? Is it reasonable? Writing novels must also be logical!

Although I like fanfics that I read in the wrong place, I have to admit that this fanfic is difficult to write because the protagonist itself is the template for cool fanfics. Writing a fanfic can only be more boring than the protagonist, and more boring and difficult to control. It feels so cool, and it becomes invincible and boring at the same time. It is difficult to write later, and there is no sense of adventure and challenge in upgrading. Slow down the pace, and you will be scolded for not being able to upgrade the original protagonist quickly. Hahaha

By the way, the background level power of poisonous milk powder is much higher than that of ground fault, right?

When I first watched it, one thing that bothered me was that the Soul Calibur template was too game-like. The protagonist doesn't understand the principles and is just using skills, which is very rigid, because the protagonist is not in the game world, but in a different world. Using the skills provided by the system will only make me feel that the protagonist is a tool man. I suggest that when you learn skills, there will be some knowledge, energy and other things that can transform the protagonist's body. In my personal opinion, it would be better. Of course, this is just my suggestion. If the author originally wanted to write in a gamification style, just pretend I didn't say so.

Sword Soul should be the most obsessed with swords and be able to better utilize the sword's performance. Can we stop worrying about the indestructible sword? It's time to gather weapons for the ultimate move. The properties of the lightsaber, the bleeding of the sword, the hitting of the stick, the charging of the giant sword, let alone the short sword. What can I do if I don't have a few more swords on my body? You are an indestructible sword that cuts from head to tail. It is hard for me to believe that you are the soul of the sword. It always feels like a stainless steel basin. When the weapon explodes, it explodes. How do you think 70,000 yuan a day comes?

Gold Ribbon Hestia

He likes to spend a lot of pen and ink explaining, and often asks and answers to himself. In this way, the plot has no content in the whole chapter, and I feel like I haven't read anything.

In Shuangwen, the male protagonist is seduced. Is this right? Bell was not even charmed. How can he still be charmed if the male protagonist is so strong?

Others write more and more excitingly, but the more you write, the more boring you become.

Don't underestimate the author's sliding and kneeling speed! ! It is the first time for a new author to write a novel, and it is inevitable that there are some problems until now. As for the protagonist's ability value, there is no rush to break through the current level. I am prepared to pursue the ultimate before considering upgrading the level. I apologize for the bad reading experience. This is also a question feedback post. The author will read all the questions posted here and correct them immediately if there are any problems!

Sword Soul is actually not very likable, because in the final analysis Sword Soul is just about strong swordsmanship. Many other worlds also have swordsmanship settings, which is not novel. It would be better to write about ghost swordsmen. All schools are combined into one. The power of ghosts and gods and the power of fluctuation are almost unique. Berserkers are also much rarer than the swordsmanship of the public.

The more I read, the more boring I became, so I stopped from Chapter 92. I wanted to see what you were like, but it's not why you haven't done it yet. Don't ask, it's just that we have stopped, so why haven't you done it yet?

What are you writing about this battle? It's really written according to the game. It's obviously a training system, but it's based on a few skills.

This book looks weird

After reading the first few chapters, it seems that the protagonist is taking Bell's name and following his plot line. Is this the same in the later chapters? I feel more like reading the if line of the original work 🤔

Protagonist, you seem to have forgotten that we players also start with a straight branch. What should I do if the equipment is broken due to cutting 😌? I suggest you find another one

It's quite boring to directly add the skills that you know to the protagonist's favor. The skills of the land bug are usually passive or active buffs. Things like triple slash can only be regarded as skills and should not be included in the skills.

Chapter 150 or so is enough. A casino that can take out 30 billion doesn't even have a thug above level 5.

The vicious cycle is invincible. During the Chinese New Year period, the update would be stopped for a day from time to time, and then the results would rarely be worse than the update. If you have fewer books, others will have to keep books, and if you keep books, your results will be even worse. If you know your grades are poor, you should work hard and update more every day to see if it has any effect.

The writing is so bad, please post the rest quickly so I can see if there is any room for redemption.

Follow-up reading is very important for this unpopular book. I hope all readers can click on the latest chapter and see the last page😭Kowtow

Swordsman

In fact, combat quality>skills and magic, there are not even any 1-3 magic slots (unless you use a magic book). What if the current protagonist suddenly loses the template? Counting the attributes of a first-level supermodel, it is a more powerful lv2. The template is for the strong to master the power, so even if the template is gone, you can still use the skills you have learned. If you don't add points, you can't do the three-section slash and you can't practice the five-section slash by yourself? Essentially, if you can endure it physically and mentally, you can continue to connect, and the sword energy still needs to be shut down. Isn't it that you can't master it even with your own strength? What's great now is that the protagonist of the template is an ordinary user. Just like a driver, who is better between ordinary people and professionals with the same configuration? The author can let the protagonist fully master the skills he possesses without relying on skills. For example, One Piece understands slashing. The stronger the slashing, the more powerful the slashing can be used until the stamina is exhausted and the sword can no longer be lifted🗡️. The protagonist has to rely on skills to have sword energy. If he doesn't want to use it, he has to turn it off. To put it bluntly, it still relies on skill mechanics rather than mastering skills. Just like automatic transmission cars and manual transmission cars, the protagonist now uses automatic transmission, but he won't be able to do it if he switches to manual transmission. Those whose moves are dead are alive. In fact, most novels with templates will have this phenomenon. They seem to be strong, but they will decline seriously after losing the template. I have read a comic with the template of the Priest series, and the author handled it very well. After losing his template, his physical fitness was average (he used to rely on his skills in battles). Later, he was suppressed and beaten in a battle to protect others, and he sensed the power contained in his body on his own. He was the first to comprehend the Blue Fist, and later relied on himself to comprehend the lost power, and then relied on his own practice to completely master the Priests and Avengers.

I think you can unify swordsmanship into ghost swordsmanship, and then give a bonus through the favor system. The sword soul system and the favor system are two different systems. Since the skills of the sword soul can be displayed by the favor system, they should have unique effects and at least have bonuses. Moreover, the skill introduction of the favor system is a major feature of Dicuo. The same skills of Dicuo can also be recognized by the sword soul system as unique sword skills. This way there is interactivity, instead of using the favor system simply as a physical accelerator.

Liu Li Ang

It's not meaty, and there aren't many exciting points or twists! You can basically guess the content just by looking at the chapter names.

After all this time, I am still the number one book friend.

Author: Why do you feel a little cold?

I feel like the storyline of Somo Familia is very problematic.

Author, if you continue like this, can I still support you?