Cultivation by Shared Empathy: The Path to Immortality

Isn't it all about imagination? I want to see your amazing antics, not your slick, gangster-themed fantasy or urban pretentious stuff.

The premise isn't great. It would be interesting if the cultivator was male, but a male and female empathy is ridiculous. Unless it's just a feeling connection with no actual impact, it's fine, but even injuries can cause empathy. That's just too unrealistic. What about having children? What about their penises? What if you just cut them off and one is fine, the other a eunuch?

I feel we could change it so the cultivator is male, and then make the protagonist a cultivator. As for the Earthling, make him a minor character. When the Earthling and the cultivator establish this supernatural connection, the Earthling is instantly refined by the protagonist, who then gains a cheat ability and acquires control of the Earth.

The synopsis was very appealing, giving the impression of a wildly imaginative concept, but in reality, it was quite ordinary. It's not that it's bad, but it definitely felt deceptive, and the gap between the description and reality was too big. I was fooled by the synopsis.

The Great General has come to cultivate immortality. 😁

If there's a well-developed outline, or if it's generating a lot of buzz, there's no need to change it. After all, if it's going to be popular, why bother modifying it? You can read about how a cluster of heavy artillery bombarded cultivators. Your positioning is incorrect.

My current impression: The plot arrangement of ancient-era online novels.

@Reader_eunba, please write another historical novel with a female protagonist.

It started off quite well; but later it took on a strong ancient artifact vibe. The plot moved too fast without any build-up, and I'm worried about how it will develop later.

Are you kidding me? Taking a concubine? What the hell?