Industrial Cthulhu, Starting with Island Lords

It was very interesting at first. I watched it at two in the morning and am now up to date with the latest updates. But after the island disappeared into the sea, the author began to use a lot of Riddler writing methods. From time to time, he inserted content that had nothing to do with the previous chapter and started to slow down the pace. I wrote about a hundred chapters of this plot. The name is Industry Era What I want to watch is also the industrial torrent sweeping through another world. It is not about the author fighting the inexplicable fish people and sea urchins. The so-called industrial revolution is actually not much of a revolution. There is no sense of excitement at all. There are all kinds of messy foreshadowings that make people's brains twitch when they read them. The writing of the foreshadowing is not very good either.

Nice! The more you write, the better. I look forward to success! I just suggest that the author reconsider the title and introduction. Nowadays, such book titles and introductions are too biased to attract industrial parties. At most, they will attract some gram fans and hammerheads. Moreover, books that slowly unfold the world view will also persuade some of the more impatient industrial parties to quit. But in fact, readers who like mystery and surprise are also potential book lovers, and they may like this tone more. In addition, the author's writing skills are now relatively mature, so he may consider going back to polish and revise the first few dozen chapters. Personally, when I read it, I felt that the writing skills were still a bit immature at the time, the timeline was a bit confusing, and the development was too fast within a month and was unreasonable. Moreover, some sensational slogans appeared too early and too concentrated. In addition, in these early dozens of chapters, there are a lot of complaints from book friends, so the outstanding ones can be dealt with. Only if more and more new readers can read, collect, subscribe and stay, can this book go further and further.

Letting go of the same type of witches, we can also see that the author wants to create a large-scale world view, and the style is also very mature. It should have been a masterpiece ten years ago, but now it is not satisfactory And I don't know why, after reading these dozens of chapters, I don't want to continue reading, but I want to revisit witches and mysteries more and more.

After reading it, I feel it's okay. Overall, it is difficult to say that it is a very exciting work, without a particularly impressive climax. But the characters are a very good part of this work, and most of them are likeable. Maybe they are not that complicated, or even a little labeled, but they are all very lively. Combined with the behaviors and words of some very comedians, the works are easy and fun to read, giving people a sense of warmth. What makes me a little regretful is that the daily life of the characters is still less described. Like Nora's writing is very good. But Ash describes very little, and the rest is almost purely guarding. Beatrice was originally expected to have some romance elements, but as a result, there was almost no such person until the end of the fountain. And what about Hughes's life, how to compete with Nini, what kind of afternoon tea will Connor prepare... These characters have distinct personalities, and I feel that there is still a lot of interesting content to be written. I hope I can write a side story.

Nowadays, the rules of the book review area are corrupt and traitors are everywhere. This is due to the lack of updates. If the author diligently updates 10,000 words every day, then the traitors will be afraid and retreat, and the moral gentlemen will rejoice. This is a feat worthy of praise by Yao and Shun! I have heard that calves born in sheep pens do not behave like sheep when they grow up. You are at the starting point and your computer keyboard is often used, but you have lost interest in updating it. Is this reasonable? Qidian is strong because it has inherited the etiquette and skills of its ancestors. Stop breaking the news, there is nowhere to release the pressure, and instead you become tired. Isn't this the same as abandoning the roots of the tree and pursuing the treetops? If this continues, great disaster will surely happen! The reason why Bai Jin can have tens of thousands of royalties and not be harmed by villains is because they are willing to listen to what upright gentlemen have to say. However, Poujie cannot get royalties and is even looked down upon by his girlfriend. This is because they are close to evil villains. I hope you can think carefully about the difference. There is one thing for which the author can cry bitterly, and six things for which the author can sigh. Since ancient times, when posting, the words are often very passionate. If not passionate, it will not touch the heart of the author. Harsh words are akin to slander. Author, you should think carefully about whether such a thing is right or wrong. Those authors who rarely updated, delayed updates, or missed updates had no time to feel sentimental about themselves, so they were drowned in the torrent of works, leaving only later authors to feel sentimental about them; later authors were sentimental and did not learn from it, and future authors were sentimental about it! yours

I have read more than two hundred chapters so far. Haha, this novel is mixed with world views such as the Lord of Mysteries, the Taoist Immortal, and the Sword of Dawn... It still looks a bit like Song of Saya. Who is the monster? 😠 I hope that the follow-up can coordinate and deal with so many elements. After all, it is an industrial farming novel... 😅 Overall, it is rare to find anything new, keep up the good work.

The conclusion should be placed at the beginning: the beginning is average, and the more you write later, the better. You can feel the dissonance in the opening part, and you can clearly feel the author's growth in ability along the way. The following is an analysis of purely subjective data. Looking at the data, I guess the average reading is currently around 3300. I read at noon every day. About 12 hours have passed when I read today. I have read more than 170 people. The 24-hour reading rate may not be too high. I personally think that this data does not match the current quality. I have two immature ideas and suggestions for the author and everyone to criticize. 1. Modify the beginning to add new readers. Although the growth of Junding is also related to recommendations, we can see that when reading, some readers think that the beginning is a bit dissuasive. People who are dissuaded by the beginning cannot see the excitement later. If there is free time during the update, and after communicating with the editor, can the beginning be reworked? Many books are very good at the beginning with a few hundred thousand words. Even if they lose subscriptions later, they can still get subscriptions until new readers read the previous content. On average, the average is not bad. The current revision requires looking at the 24-hour reading data of the new chapter. Perhaps there is also a reason for wanting to restore the latest real readership data for this part of the work. 2. Add updates to improve follow-up reading. With the current number of updates, if they don't develop a habit of following updates every day, many readers may read more and then read, or choose to skip subscriptions to read. Judging from the current push algorithm, the data may not be so ideal, and it is impossible to strive for a better position among similar products. But this part depends on the author's own reality. Some humble opinions, I hope the work and author can be better, and I hope readers will enjoy it more comfortably.

A very high-quality story about lord farming in a steampunk world. The protagonist is a tough-talking prince with extremely high morals and consciousness. If you have read too many anthropomorphic protagonists, reading this book will help you cleanse your mind. Every supporting role has its own role, and I can see that there is no such plot character with unclear meaning yet. The protagonist was formerly an engineer. After traveling through time and becoming an evil god, he can seize four bodies: The first body is a worker. He likes to impart knowledge to the workers who live in pain, telling some abstract stories (Cao Cao cooked wine and talked about heroes, invented the steam engine), improved the steam engine, and then was knocked out by an investigator with a Warhammer Mechanicum style. Shorter. The second body is that of a border town noble, using science to explore the extraordinary world. There are two big reversals in it. I won't spoil it in detail. There is a slight change in the painting style in the middle, but it has little impact. A very good book. It is the first time that I see that the author writes the concept of science correctly, but it is a bit slow. If you are impatient, you may not be able to read it. (A brave new author dares to write a slow-paced book in the first one. This book is the best. If it is not completed, the next one is best to write a fast-paced one. Accumulate some readers who are willing to follow and then write an epic)

Let me give you a general review first. It is considered a good book, and it suits my picky appetite for reading too many novels. It is the first time for the author to write a book, so his writing skills were a bit poor in the early stage, but he improved rapidly, and the multi-line narrative in the middle and later stages has become very mature. Worth a look. Detailed review below. The plot unfolds slowly in the beginning, and the construction of the industrial system is not very specific. Moreover, since I just started writing, my writing skills are not good, so the opening part is weak. But with the expansion of the worldview in the mid-term and the outbreak of events of all sizes, the story becomes interesting. The extraordinary power system and power background are very interesting and scalable. The Poseidon part in the mid-term can be regarded as a phased climax, and the overall quality is good. However, the transition to the Blood Harbor part after the end of this main chapter feels a bit smelly and long. Based on the author's comments, he is probably in a relatively confused state and cannot grasp the appropriate direction. This is where I gave up on updating. After saving for a long time, I picked it up again and got to over 600 chapters. Afterwards, the author of the Northern Territory chapter also found a direction, and the writing technique also changed from the incomprehensible group of supporting characters in the Blood Harbor section to a more rhythmic and intersecting narrative style. The main plot and dark lines blossomed at multiple points, and the foreshadowing was revealed and exploded. Then, various intelligence gaps lead to poor understanding of characters in various regions, which is quite interesting. Then, it finally started to use the evil Cthulhu industrial system to pretend to the indigenous people of the other world. Finally, the core of the industrial novel was written out. Unlike common online articles, this book requires more time and space to make the whole story grand, complete, and interesting. It is not suitable for continuous updates, especially when the author has a limited amount of updates. But as long as you save it and read it, the reading will no longer be intermittent, and the whole story will be quite enjoyable to read. This book review will be written here for now, and I will add more when I think of it.

The only idealistic industrial revolution I've seen so far, it blends fantasy and science fiction very well. The overall plot rhythm is relatively comfortable except for the slow development in the early stage. At present, the first major crisis has just been overcome, and everything is ready to flourish, but this is the time when it is most likely to collapse. I have read another farming novel before, and it seemed that the early development was very rhythmic. Once the technology exploded, the entire story line collapsed. A large number of branch plots were described in order to open up the world view. This will lead to readers who are following up on the story, whether they read it or not. Secondly, it is now a time when the island is about to develop greatly. Technology will advance, but we hope that this will not directly cause the combat system to collapse and enter the boring stage of setting boxes. In short, it is a rare and excellent farming article. It may have some flaws, but once you get into the idea of ​​the book, it will be great.

Creative and beautiful😁

When I wrote the title of this book, there was a fire in my heart. I want to write a story about the torrent of industry that overwhelms demons and demons. I want to write a story about the collision of technology and the extraordinary. I want to write about the indescribable and incomprehensible feeling that the creation of the industrial assembly line exceeds the limits of human understanding. He doesn't care about your fear, and what does your worship have to do with Him. This story lingers in my heart and makes me think about it day and night. Then I actually wrote it and submitted it. At that time, I had nothing but an interesting story. My heart was burning and I couldn't wait for you to see it. It took me a long time before I could publish the book. I was too bad at writing and I had to practice for a long time. I uploaded it with confidence, but the data was very poor. I searched chapter by chapter and found that as long as I wrote about farming, development, and the original story, the data was not good. Ashamed to say, I am a weak person. I will write whatever others say. If it's not good, delete it. If someone criticizes it, change it. If you think about it carefully, it all makes sense. As I write, I find that this story is a bit unfamiliar to me. I asked the editor that the data for this chapter was missing again. Did I write it poorly? The editor teacher talked to me a lot, but I only remember one sentence. "Do you want to write a book with overwhelming early data, or do you want to write this story well?" I suddenly remembered that I had come up with a good story, so I worked hard to practice coding. I want everyone to see the fire and light in my heart. In Chapter 53, it is not Hughes who is lost, but myself. I ran too far chasing the data and couldn't find my way home. I suddenly understood that I still had nothing but the fire in my heart. Even if I failed it, it still never dimmed for a moment. I took some detours. But I have thought about it, I will write this story no matter what, no matter what. I want to write this story well. Next, I won't look at any data, and I won't go back and forth anymore. I will just write my story. I am going to write my Industrial Cthulhu. Everyone, I have a wonderful story in my heart. Please listen carefully.

In fact, I prefer the setting of Industrial Magician to Industrial Cthulhu. There used to be a saying that when a man reaches the age of thirty and is still a virgin, he will become a magician. Why? Because you don't fall in love until you are thirty, where did your energy go? If you spend money on the four engineering subjects of machinery, electrical, computer, and communications, you can change to an industrial magician (spell summoning category). If you spend money on biochemical ring materials, you can become an industrial magician (alchemy potion category). If you spend money on breeding, animal husbandry, veterinary medicine, and breeding, you can change to a modern archdruid. Those who study medicine and nursing are modern priests and pastors. Industrial monks who study civil engineering, water conservancy, surveying and mapping, geology and mining. Those who study intangible cultural heritage, architectural design, and textiles are industrial bards. There are also industrial knights who study transportation and aerospace and can use mechas, and industrial paladins who can use nuclear-powered mechas. And so on🪖

The introduction is quite interesting, like looking at the industrial era from Don Quixote's perspective.

In the cold universe, we are mechanical slaves, In the endless war, we are steel warriors. O great Omnisiah, grant us strength, let our engines roar, let our ammunition be loaded, for your glory we will fight to the end. We are your followers, we are your believers, We will prove our worth in the war. O Omnisiah, please guide our paths, let us find light in darkness, let us gain victory in battle. We will forever praise your name, We will always be loyal to your cause O Omnisiah, our god of machines, please accept our prayers and let us fight for you! Knowledge is the supreme manifestation of divinity, and all other creatures (basically limited to humans) and technology are the embodiment of this divinity, and therefore have sacredness. Under this belief, a person's value only depends on the total amount of knowledge that person has, and this person's body is just a simple organic machine that can preserve this knowledge ==Preface to the Holy Code of the Adeptus Mechanicus== We know that every passing life form is a gear in the great mechanism. Get rid of the frail flesh and receive the glory of the Machine God. We know that the great secrets that the Mechanicus reveals to his followers will eclipse the weaknesses of mortals. Our hands can create everything in the universe. Knowledge is everlasting. Knowledge is solemn and sacred. Knowledge is power. Knowledge is hope. Life is the vector The soul is the cause of life Perception is the ability to acquire the value of knowledge Intellect is the understanding of knowledge Perception is the basis of knowledge Understanding is the right path to understanding Understanding is the key to everything Ohm Messiah knows everything and understands everything -Warning- Alien machinery is a misinterpretation of the right path The soul is the conscience of consciousness Only the Ohm Messiah can bestow a soul Knowledge without a soul is the enemy of all things Ancient knowledge cannot be questioned The machine soul guards ancient knowledge The body is fallible, and rituals respect the machine soul. To destroy the ritual is to destroy the faith

In the name of the sacred binary, loudly praise Omnisiah, and all glory be given to the God of all opportunities! May the gears of loyalty never rust!!! Ring the bell once! Push the lever to activate the piston and pump. Ring the bell twice! Push the button to start the engine, ignite the turbine and breathe life into it. Ring the bell three times! Sing in unison, praising the God of all opportunities! From the mediocrity of thought, Omnisiah, save us! From the lies of the infidels, circuit, protect us! From the wrath of the beast, steel, protect us! From the temptation of minced meat, silica, purify us! From the ravages of the Destroyer, Machine Soul, protect us! From this creature's rotten prison, Mechanicus, set us free! Omnisiah! Omnisiah! Omnisiah! Omnisiah! There is no unchanging truth in flesh and blood, only decay. There is no lasting strength in flesh and blood, only weakness. There is no eternal stability in flesh and blood, only decay. There is no certainty in flesh and blood, except death. From the mediocrity of thought, Omnisiah, save us! From the lies of the infidels, circuit, protect us! From the wrath of the beast, steel, protect us! From the temptation of minced meat, silica, purify us! From the ravages of the Destroyer, Machine Soul, protect us! From this creature's rotten prison, Mechanicus, set us free! Omnisiah! Omnisiah! Omnisiah! Omnisiah!

Neither Industrial nor Cthulhu

The comment section said that it gets better and better in the future, but it was already a bit unsustainable in the early stages. If it is an industrial novel, the feeling given by the science and engineering protagonist and the text should be rational and precise. However, in the early stage, the feeling given to people is emotional and childish, as if the world and NPCs are playing house with the protagonist. The most typical point is the ambiguity of quantity and time, not to mention that the number of banshees that appear many times is very small. The small number means that it is easy to count, but the specific number is ignored every time, as if to facilitate the possible plot later. In the first month, there is no specific quantitative explanation of the progress on the island. It is just a general development. How many islanders, how many are hired for construction, how many are workers, and how many children go to school. These are all taken for granted, without any data support. They all have received nine years of compulsory education and have specific concepts about infrastructure. Without data, it gives the impression that there are many people on the island at one moment and very few on the island at the next. Not much, not enough to support so many projects starting at the same time, but too much, judging from the specific data on the taxes paid to pirates on fish catch and wine brewing in the early days, not enough to support this statement. If it is farming and development, it is essentially a process of expanding the limited quantifiable data little by little. Unfortunately, I did not see this in the early stage. It was more that I thought it was going to be built, so I built it. Industry is not extraordinary, but idealistic enough to break the rules in a moment of thought. This is also the charm of science. The author's settings and descriptions of extraordinary aspects are very interesting. However, just like the title of the book, the "industry" that forms the core of the book is not shown. There are many "awkward" plots in this chapter, and the emotional and psychological changes of the characters are somewhat taken for granted. For example, the banshee's thousand years of servitude can break through the shackles, but these thousand years of belief in the prophecy are easily broken by the protagonist's words. This is very counter-intuitive. Since it is such a strong spiritual power, how can it pop like a bubble? If it is true, as others have said, that the author's later writings are getting better and better, then I suggest that the author revise the front part. As far as my personal reading experience is concerned, the front part feels like a wall made of unhardened concrete. The back part is painted white and pasted with wallpaper. It looks good, but I always inevitably think of the mushy appearance of the unhardened concrete.

The most poisonous point is, will this book reach thousands of people later? Thousands of people engaged in industry? Chapter 80 didn't mention the key point, it's all nonsense! What about population? What about territory? What about food? Basically no description!

Moaning for no reason. I can't stand it. Since you are sitting on the throne, and the Virgin insists that you are not a god, what are you doing behind the scenes? The bunch of good reviews is pretty funny too. It's both Moji and Holy Mother, but there's no main plot yet. Say goodbye

The throne of the protagonist smells like Ziyuan Castle, the industrial iron series, especially the development in the beginning, smells like Sword of the Dawn, and the setting of the banshee is even a low-end version of the Sword of Dawn Siren. The more I read this novel, the more difficult it becomes. I will read a few dozen more chapters to see what happens next.

The story is average, Goldfinger is quite interesting, some of the sensational writing is very awkward, and once there are parts about science, this chapter becomes awkward. It is recommended to skip this chapter, otherwise it will not save your brain. If you can tolerate the awkward text, this book can be considered a food source, more than enough to pass the time. Considering this is the author's first book, it's quite good.

Three-meter-tall heavily armored banshees, mechanical skitarii, and even political commissars🤓☝I understand this is Holy Terra

The author himself is quite candid, but as for the work itself, I just hope that the work can be implemented smoothly. To be honest, I felt it had a big-eyed flavor when I first read it - the possession of the captain, the development of the fiefdom of the satellite spirit, the high status of the protagonist... It's really similar. But the author is obviously a newcomer, the rhythm and details are poor, some parts about industrial development are too smooth, and the relationship between the characters is too flat. All the characters are puppets in the hands of the author. Unfortunately, the author's string manipulation skills are not very good... Then the author's comment area blew up. Courage is commendable! In Yuan Tong's works, many places have been foreshadowed, and many technologies have been invented before him. The role of satellite technology is to avoid detours in development and to implement it firmly from the perspective of those who have experienced it - after all, in the real world, we have taken many detours. In this regard, Gao Wenling's development speed has also been accused by book friends of "technological cheating", and the book friends are right, it is cheating. At the same time, Yuantong is good at inserting the reactions of supporting characters in large paragraphs to shape the characters and expand the world view. For example, what a supporting character is doing brings out the past years. A supporting character is assigned a certain task because she is the perfect candidate for the task, which leads to the character's past experience. At the beginning of a certain chapter, the current situation of the villain group is described, what the protagonist has done is presented from the perspective of the other party, and the villains' coping strategies are written to arouse the readers' expectations - the two sides are going to collide next! And they didn't know anything about each other! In addition to the writing techniques, Yuantong's rhythm is also very good. There is an ultimate crisis in the background. At the same time, there are continuous small crises in front of us. Finally, the small crises are safely passed, and we can develop steadily and accumulate strength. After making progress, another big crisis quietly comes. The power accumulated previously came into use, the overall lineup strength improved, and the ultimate crisis went further. After repeating four or five cycles, the final crisis detonates, and the flowers are finished. I will write a few more chapters and talk about it later. At present, I hope the author can at least think about the ultimate content at the end, and then think about how many chapters can be divided into. To what stage can the protagonist's power progress in each chapter, and who is the enemy to face in each stage? My current feeling is a bit mixed. Not to mention the protagonist's impact on the entire world, even the impact on this small island is difficult to quantify. I always feel that the protagonist is good, the protagonist is powerful, and there are breakthroughs in the protagonist's thoughts and consciousness, but it is too vague and too white. This is the author's shortcomings in writing. After the protagonist can say that his wishes have come true, a problem arises and the crisis becomes unsustainable. The satellite spirits first woke up due to the demonic tide and faced the development of a small territory, then there was civil strife in the kingdom, and then they faced off against another country. Then they initially came into contact with the truth of the past, studied the elves, and then the dragons, and finally reached the final truth of the gods, and then came the coming-of-age ceremony and the final demonic tide. The crisis is from small to big, and it is a matter of course. But in this book, I'm really afraid that the author can't control the rhythm well, taking too many steps at once, and ending the book hastily. The smoother the development, the faster the pace will be. Don't step on the accelerator to the bottom and focus on productivity - now there is a faint tendency. The reason why I mention so much about Yupu is not to ask the author to write a Satellite Master 2.0, But because the great master is indeed outstanding, and some techniques will indeed make the work read more smoothly. Ping Feng is good at leveraging my strength and sent me to the Qingyun. In the new stage, trying to reproduce a mature and market-proven work is a fast way to grow. After a thousand words of nonsense, I hope the author can keep the fire burning in his heart longer. I wish you will become a god soon. ps: If the author can take the time to leave a message in the latest post every day - even a word of thanks, it will leave a few more passerby readers. In addition, it is also important to condense the long comments at each stage so that subsequent readers can understand the opinions of other readers.

After reading Chapter 17, I have a question. Can these pirates really control a large area of ​​​​the ocean for a long time? They have a Gemstone Bay, and they also collect sea tax. Isn't this an island country, but it doesn't look like it. The article does not specify the management method of the pirate-occupied areas. How do these pirates ensure sovereignty and deterrence over a large area of ​​sea? Where does their economy come from? I remember that there were no long-term oceans controlled by pirates in history, only some short-term ones, and most of them had an official background. The description in the article is a bit exaggerated. After reading it, I kept thinking, why?

I'll give you a pen to read hundreds of pictures and write an opinion. It's really annoying for you to write.

I feel good after reading two hundred chapters. It's just a bit slow . . . . . . . . . . . . . Also, this world is too rough, and it is actually idealistic. It is like saying that the wolf is coming, and everyone believes it, then the wolf will really come.

The setting and characters of this book are good, and the plot is also good, but the rhythm of plot development is a bit strange: halfway through the development of Karst, the archipelago suddenly encountered a crisis of the Poseidon; when the power of Karst spread to the Blood Harbor, the crisis of the evil god suddenly occurred in the Blood Port; when the power of Karst spread to the north, the crisis of the expansion of the white disaster suddenly occurred in the north. Each time, things happen suddenly (the reader has no expectations), and they end hastily (the climax is not satisfying enough), which is really puzzling. I hope the author can do a better job of connecting the continuation and integration of the big plot.

Borrowing the words of a book friend in the book review, I originally thought it was "Industrial Cthulhu", but I didn't expect it to be "Industrial Cthulhu". My imagination was a bit deviated. The former one is a normal island farming template of developing industry and then going directly to it, while the latter is the author's wonderful innovation of integrating "Cthulhu" into industry. It's not that it's bad, but it's definitely not my type.

The book slowly gets better starting from Poseidon Crisis This is a big event However, the author did not control the Bones Incident in the North well and wrote it too simply. It should be as big a book as Poseidon Crisis.