
The Unrivaled Tang Sect: Starting by Spiriting Wang Dong Away
绝世唐门:从拐走王冬开始
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- Completed
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- 1.9M Words
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- Light Novel
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- Fan Fiction
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- Qidian
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How should I put it? I tried too hard. Although I knew it was a single female protagonist, the protagonist acted too studly and it felt like there was no need to make it so purposeful.
Why don't you read the original work with a single heroine?
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Wang Donger
You are the one who indulges others and curses them, my friend, you are the real one.
I read the beginning again. The main problem was that the relationship progressed too fast and was inexplicable. Wang Dong started to get jealous just after they started running. There was no plot to enhance their relationship. Why did Wang Dong start to like the protagonist? Compared with Haodong in the original work, this is more like a spiritual suggestion. I suggest the author change the beginning, otherwise he will really persuade him to quit and he will not be able to persevere.
It's okay for Wang Dong to be jealous, but it's unreasonable for your protagonist to kneel on the washboard. Now there are two men. And isn't it a bit too obvious and too fast? It feels like the emotional line is jumping a bit.
No one should have watched it anymore, right?
Good news, but the rest of Qiankun Wenqinggu is a complete mess. The main character is very strong and very well presented, and I feel like the author has gone too far. The main plot feels untouched, and the quality of the extras cannot be said to be good.
I'm not bad at looking like this in my divine clothes
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30% to level 15, where does the energy go?