Mystery: Fire and the Fool's Path

The author is not very good at designing plots. When the heroine is not short of money at all, she can't buy a Sequence Nine magic potion worth more than 200 pounds. She has to accept missions to exchange it. Moreover, it is too tough for ordinary people to run missions in other places, because it takes dozens of chapters to get started with Sequence Nine Hunters. Also, I don't know how to delete the plot, my writing is extremely verbose, my sentences don't make sense, and I often write about supporting characters' perspectives. And the heroine actually knelt down when she saw The Fool for the first time. Neither the original Tarot Club members nor the local aborigines knelt down, but a time traveler knelt down.

A male-to-female fanfic written by a female channel author. The protagonist is Gu Jue. Her parents are dead and she has a cold and doting uncle who protects her. My monthly pocket money is 1,500 pounds, but I cut 20 pounds to buy materials, and I went to Tingen to catch a fraudster for a person I didn't know at all. I want to laugh when I think of the protagonist lingering and having an affair with Klein later.

Who is the audience? ? ?

As long as I could read it, I was already able to accept the change of text. However, in the advanced hunter sequence (late stage of the plot), I had to change from female to male. . . Who is the audience for this book? What I watched at the beginning was a male transforming into a female, and in the middle and later stages of the hunter sequence, the female transformed into a male (it was already amazing to start the ninth sequence in Chapter 70) I can only say that adding a little yellow waste makes it look black. . .

666, Let me just say, why haven't you signed a contract for 110,000 words? You just sent 110,000 words of love. You won't send out all the deposits, right? This will greatly affect those who pursue their studies, and it will be more difficult to sign a contract. It will also be difficult to recommend you later.

The pace of this novel is very slow, even slower than the first volume of Lord of Mysteries. The writing is good. You can give it a try. It is very enjoyable to read The author can also mention the pace and not deliberately describe various details.

When you see the protagonist accepting a mission for the top 20 list and forcing the protagonist to come into contact with Klein, you won't write another plot? I am a person with a living expenses of 1,500, and I have worked very hard for these 20 lists. Moreover, I wrote about saving money in the previous article. I wrote that I am very economical and am saving money. This means that you have a sum of money that you haven't even clear your memory of in your own territory, so you go to other places. Fang, what is it for? You said you have the memory of this book, in order to save Old Neil. I can understand it. I thought it was a good novel, but I didn't expect that it turned out to be a big drug before I even read it. In order to meet Klein and forcibly detoxify me, I even connected the table. It takes a lot of effort to investigate a highly spiritual fortune teller. Normal people shouldn't just buy potions, drink them, and then learn occultism. Then digest the potions according to the acting method you saw in your previous notes, and then continue to study cheats and develop extraordinary gatherings. Alas, it can only be said that an author cannot write works beyond his knowledge. I want to laugh when I think of a rich person who has lost money that he may not care about for such a sum of money, but can hire rich people to do things. What a plot.

There is a narrative rhythm problem at the beginning of this book, with many meaningless details... But after 100 chapters, it has gradually gotten better. The pace may be slower than many refreshing articles, but as a reader who doesn't like refreshing stories, it is very good. In addition to the pace, another point that has been criticized by readers is how much the early pocket money of 1,500 pounds was. Do dangerous missions with a ten pound discount... If this is really Adam's arrangement, I feel that Adam is worse than a third-rate writer... Finally, as for the scene where the Fool kneels for the first time, I think it does not conform to the refreshing writing style. It is true that many readers cannot accept that the protagonist they substitute is not as good as Klein... But logically there is no problem with the protagonist being a Cthulhu lover. Overall, I think Chapter 100 is considered a masterpiece among the mysterious fandoms. The style is quite consistent with the original work. From this point of view, Su Huan is actually too fast-paced and does not feel relaxed. I offer 9 monthly passes and hope that the author will continue to work hard.

Although part of the plot is indeed not particularly reasonable, for me, the flaws are not concealed (the following are almost all my favorite points, haha, they are what made me happy during the reading process. I have posted them everywhere 😂 I mainly hope that the author can see them and finish them according to the original settings🙏🏻) First of all, it is very consistent with the original work, and the writing style is also somewhat similar. Some people say it is "copying the original work", but I really like this kind of original work and personal connection. A mixed style of writing; I don't think it's a big problem if the world view is written again. After all, most people can't remember all the settings of the mystery, and it's not a direct copy and paste of the original work Secondly, I also like this strange setting. I really think it's interesting for a man to dress as a woman and then change into a man. From the content of the article, it seems that Xiao Gu and Xiao Ke will not be together (after all, they are both straight men, which fits the original setting). Never There are direct descriptions of Xiao Ke and Xiao Gu having a very direct and generalized love. I feel more inclined to the shyness and awkwardness brought about by the identity of a man and a woman, which is similar to the relationship between men and women, but the essence is the same as Xiao Gu thinks - a pure revolutionary friendship, a deeper dependence than generalized love, that is, soul mates I like this kind of sincere interdependence (probably because I like it) Like platonic love), it is more interesting than the secular love on the street, so I hope the author can maintain the original setting: after all, Xiao Gu and Xiao Ke were originally straight men. It would be weird to turn back into men and then return to secular love. It is even weirder for Xiao Gu to remain a girl and then fall in love with Xiao Ke, and it is also inconsistent with the setting. They were both men for 22 years. How could they be willing to be women just because they lived as girls for one or two years? It's very strange. I hope the author will not be affected by other influences, keep the original "Fire Setting", don't change the sequence, and don't come up with anything beyond the original setting (for example, Xiao Gu still can't change back to a man in sequence 4, it's just a setting to save the girl). After changing back to a man, he can get along with Xiao Ke more naturally, and continue to deepen the revolutionary friendship and become two male protagonists. (However, at first I saw that others misunderstood that the two were a real couple. It's very interesting hahaha, I hope there are more plots like this 🥰 Especially during Hermann's time, the scandal of the cold-faced adventurer is definitely very interesting hahaha) Then, I personally feel that the pace is just right, because I am a careful reader, so I couldn't read the original work for too long, and I would feel like I was forced to accept too much knowledge and couldn't wrap my head around it () I also took notes along the way, otherwise I would forget them quickly. But this book allows me to take my time and read it casually, and I feel quite comfortable Finally, I hope the author will not cheat 😭 I really like this book 😭 Some people say that the plot of the original book has not changed too much, but I think for a time traveler who does not know the plot of the original book, Xiao Gu has tried his best. Important historical nodes are difficult to change, not to mention that he does not know the inside story at all. This development is very consistent with the setting. And I like the changes he brought even more: Xiaoke is no longer lonely, the characters I love are no longer gone, and the changes in the East District also make me feel that the dark background of the mysterious world has a little more beauty and light. I even hope that this is the development of the original work. The original work is very exciting, but when I put it into context, the darkness and distortion really made me feel sad and scared. But this book gave me a little hope and comfort and made me feel beautiful. I am very grateful to the author for keeping my eyes open. Li Xin🙏🙏🙏 (Especially for people like me who are crazy believers in Xiaoke➕without CP, seeing that Xiaoke is no longer lonely and has someone to accompany him is really happy and touching. This kind of bond is really more interesting and reasonable than love😭so I really beg the author to keep the original setting and finish the story😭🙏🙏🙏)

Chapter 75 finally begins the much-loved gray fog session 🙂🙂, Jie Jie Jie (beware of spoilers inside the building)

Sequence 9 Hunter Main materials: 1 copy of 'Hunter' characteristic Auxiliary materials: 80 ml of red wine + 1 red chestnut flower + 5 grams of poplar leaf powder + 10 grams of basil Appearance of the potion: Appearance of characteristics: Very elastic and textured Feels like jelly; Sequence 8 Provocateur Main material: 1 portion of 'Provocateur' characteristic Auxiliary materials: 50 ml of distilled wine + 10 drops of honeysuckle hydrosol + 5 grams of grapevine powder + 10 grams of water fern powder Magic Medicine Appearance: Characteristic Appearance: A dark black 'stone' with a liquid-like surface and a strong stench Sequence 7 Arsonist Main Materials: Fire Salamander's Gland + Magma Elf's Core Or 1 copy 'Arsonist' properties Auxiliary materials: 50 ml of fire salamander's blood + 10 grams of magma pyroxene powder + 10 grams of red-crowned impatiens powder + 10 drops of holy star lily hydrosol Appearance of the potion: Features Appearance: A red object similar to a heart. The heart expanded and contracted slowly, and invisible flames spurted out from the small holes on the surface. Sequence 6 Conspirator Main materials: 1 pair of compound eyes for hunting black spiders + 1 copy of the human lion's brain or 1 copy of the 'conspirator' trait auxiliary materials: 1 venom gland for hunting black spiders + 80 ml of human lion blood + 10 grams of amber powder + 2 white oak fruits Appearance of the potion: Appearance of characteristics: Sequence 5 Reaper Main materials: The front claws of the gray demon wolf + the tongue of the jungle hunter or 1 copy of the 'reaper' characteristic Auxiliary materials: 80 ml of the blood of the gray demon wolf + 2 fangs of the jungle hunter + the venom of the colorful bearded horned lizard 10 drops + 10 drops of hornbeam essential oil Promotion ceremony: Plan a conspiracy, capture alive a target higher than yourself, show off the complete conspiracy in front of him, and take the magic potion in his fearful and troubled eyes. The more targets captured alive and the higher the sequence, the better the effect of the ritual; the more fearful and regretful the target is, the better the effect of the ritual. Appearance of the potion: Feature appearance: Sequence 4 Iron-Blooded Knight Main materials: Magma Giant's core + Disaster Stone or 1 copy of the 'Iron-Blooded Knight' characteristic Auxiliary materials: 80 ml of boiling magma + 20 grams of plant powder contaminated by the Disaster Stone + large 20 grams of soil penetrated by the blood of soldiers on the battlefield + 1 acorn Promotion ceremony: Form a team of at least thirty people, cultivate a deep comradeship with them, let them become stronger one after another, and cooperate with each other tacitly, be able to understand their own meaning based on their eyes and movements, and become almost one with each other, and then they will form a ceremony. The higher the strength and tacit understanding of the team, the better the effect of the ceremony. Sequence 3 War Bishop Main materials: Heart of the Biphasic Centaur + star core of the war comet or 1 copy of the 'War Bishop' characteristic Auxiliary materials: 100 ml of the blood of the Biphasic Centaur + fragments of the war comet + 1 Scarlet Tudor Iris + 8 grams of bark from the Flame Tree Promotion Ceremony Lead your own team to defeat a powerful enemy force in a war. The stronger the enemy force, the better the effect of the ritual. Note: The aura of an imminent war will attract comets symbolizing war through the spiritual world, which will streak across the sky at night and bring revelation. However, there are only a limited number of such comets that can truly have entities and can enter the real world. Sequence 2 Weather Warlock Main materials: Skull of Weather Giant + Core of Cloud Jellyfish or 1 copy of 'Weather Warlock' characteristic Auxiliary materials: 500 hairs of the weather giant + 5 crystals of cloud jellyfish + 1 branch of a tree struck by lightning + 20 ml of water melted by the first snow of the year in an area + 30 ml of blood each of three people who died in different extreme weather Promotion ceremony: Forcibly change the weather of an area in a short time without relying on external help.

I found you, 🤓

The writing is pretty good, but it's a little too detailed and lukewarm. Even I, who can read hydrographs, are a little tired... But it's okay. The human psychology is written quite like a normal person, without any reference to architectural concepts or the old days of Outer Gods, which is really boring. He didn't act like a murderer or a master of wisdom, and he didn't treat himself as a human being. I hope to write more about the world and its customs. After all, what we are reading is a novel.

Come on, come on, does Gu Shi have a role?

This is unreasonable... I went to Tingen City to investigate an extraordinary person for 20 pounds. At this time, the protagonist is just an ordinary person! Isn't this courting death?

After reading it in one go, and looking back at the posts in the comment section, I felt it was a bit alarmist. As a fanfic, it has three-dimensional protagonists and supporting characters, an original plot, reasonable exploration based on the original work, qualified writing, and normal interactions with the original characters that do not deviate from the characters. It is already very good. There are indeed some unreasonable plots in the early stage, and the pace is a bit slow, but there are many free chapters! You can definitely see what happens later and then decide whether to continue chasing updates. If you don't like it, don't force yourself. In addition, it can be seen that although the protagonist was entangled with Klein in the early stage, he gradually developed an independent plot later on, and it became more and more original. After arriving in the Southern Continent Colony, it was basically the protagonist himself who played the role, filling in many of the blanks in the original work and writing it very realistically. I even think that if the protagonist of Suhuan had this style of spreading fire at the grassroots level, it might be more acceptable. Summary: If you can accept the styles of the two paths of hunter and witch, it is well worth watching.

​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​ To ​​suddenly think of a way to divert the battlefield away from the absolute auxiliary of the Mother Goddess who cannot be killed, regenerates blood quickly, cannot be sealed, and cannot be exiled. Judging from Lilith's state and the fact that the Brood has never died at all, instead of trying to find a way to promote Lilith to the Old One, it is better to directly let Lilith give up her uniqueness and part of the Sequence One characteristics, and restore the Brood to the complete Old One when the war begins. Then the Lord of Mysteries exiled him to a galaxy far away from the main battlefield, and then stimulated the desire of the Mother Goddess to gather, and drew the Mother Goddess away from the main battlefields. Under the pressure of life and death crisis, the Mother Nest would spontaneously resist and drag the Mother Goddess down without an agreement. Plus, the secret puppets and clones left by the Lord of Mysteries there, even if the Mother Goddess could fight two because of the symbol of the pillar, she would not be able to defeat the Mother Nest despite the interference of the Lord of Mysteries.

The plot is too long-winded and too cheesy. Although the protagonist doesn't know it, Pao Pao is better than Tianzun anyway. He insists on arranging the protagonist to be respectful to the Fool. They are all time-travelers in sequence nine. Can't they be arranged as allies? (I've only read Chapter 90, so I'm not sure if there will be any explosive vests later on. I only drank the potion in Chapter 90. The author is also a good writer.)

We've seen a lot of witches, let's have some ladies as protagonists. Let's take the path of the Mother Goddess.

The main materials of the Hunter Path have been completed

Honorable names of members of the Tarot Society

The protagonist takes the path of a hunter, so what's the significance of the protagonist's gender change?

The man turns into a woman and then the woman turns into a man again haha🙃

Inquisitor Path Potions Recipes and Ritual

From the Squid Loves Diving WeChat public account You can click on the picture and long press to save it

This article... I felt like there was something wrong with this article in the first chapter... A female video article? The protagonist's tone of voice... Ugh😮‍💨

I hope that I can jump horizontally during the high sequence, but jump back after jumping horizontally. I read this fanfic to see the transformation into a girl, and I cannot accept being transformed back later.

After reading the comment section for a while, I originally wanted to leave, but instead I became interested and asked me to try something new 🙂

It's a pity it's a sex change. Only lasted until chapter 9.

Isn't there a uniformity behind the name? Looks strenuous