Eternity Begins with Swallowing the Stars

It's too poisonous. There are wind and time in front of you. When you get behind the world master, the clones don't realize it. They carry it all with them. Becoming immortal is the law of earth, and reaching the venerable is the law of space. Shouldn't wind and time be more suitable for you? These two clones are not the same. , The Venerable ran to the Universe Sea again, and saw the man himself introducing the Lord of the Sky, saying that he did not die fast enough 😅😅😅😰😰😰 There were too many divisions,

My big account has been banned from the whole book for seven or eight years because of the key certificate. You are the first to tease me into opening a small account to review the book. See if the original work is so difficult? You are here to write a fanfic. The Law of the Lower Level of Eclipse Fire recognizes 30% of the enlightenment. According to the calculation of the ten-story Tongtian Bridge to achieve immortality, let's decide on a three-story Tongtian Bridge, but Ten Thousand Lines of Flow, buddy, the teleportation of one of the three branches of the Space Law, the route of enlightenment is the basic The law of source recognizes it, and then there is the Ten Thousand Lines Flow. Teleportation corresponds to the 19th floor of the Tongtian Bridge, the superior law recognizes the 15th floor, and the universe-level original Tongtian Mountain 13th floor. Let's give the Ten Thousand Lines Flow a level, and then demonstrate the gold content of the seventh floor of the Seven Towers of Genius Battle. Forget it, the original work did not write about the small branches of the higher law. You decide a time jump under time acceleration. This is no problem. However, the original work has a clear setting for the upper law. Understanding a small branch is the approval of the original law. Astral level, less than 50 years old, born in a remote area, only received training from the highest feudal lord level immortal of the giant ax fighting field branch of the superior universe country, and his law understanding has reached the point where the 15th level of time law is recognized. What kind of genius is this? You are a genius who has never been seen in this reincarnation of the original universe. You also let a lot of immortals watch the live broadcast and let them guess that time is accelerating? Believe it or not, the next moment is when the Kingdom of God teleports the Lord of the Alien Universe to personally take soul control and kill the protagonist. You are such a god

Speechless, I was very optimistic about it. Many Devouring fandoms have been ruined in this way. Too much writing has been written on people who don't want to do it. Not many of the opponents in these genius battles are useful, so don't write too much unless they will appear frequently in the future.

You're so tough-talking. Is it difficult to read the original work while writing?

I didn't even understand the original work, so I wrote a fanfic

Le, the domain lord's expatriate, one of the top assassins among foreigners, two disciples of King Assassin who killed Giant Ax. The King Assassin actually had time to launch several waves of killing moves. The people on Giant Ax didn't even send a disciple to protect them. It was the first time I saw such a stupid Devouring fan.

There have always been a lot of bugs from the beginning, and then on the extraterrestrial battlefield, Hong Meng was able to find out the identity of the protagonist. What did you think of the original work? City Lord Luo needs to protect his identity. If you just kill the king as the leader of the human world, and then Hongmeng can directly know the identity of the protagonist, wouldn't that force the other three tribes to directly go to the battlefield outside the territory, dispatch at least the Venerable to kill the protagonist directly!

There are too many ideas, and I can't write them well. There are a lot of poisonous points, and the routines have been written to death. I want to write some new ideas, but they are terribly poisonous. The two geniuses written in the book are worse than Cody. In the end, Immortal Commentary has seen many such geniuses, and that's it. You must know that most of the 1008 Universe Nation leaders are immortals. The protagonist and Eclipse written by the author are already the top geniuses of the human race. They have a high probability of becoming a venerable. However, the result is just like that in the mouths of these immortals. I really can't stand it. Either you don't write with such great talents, or you surprise these immortals and feed them to your mouth, and you can't even write it.

Was it written by AI after it was put on the shelves? Where did these two ethnic groups in Hongmeng come from?

There is a big problem with the introduction. I remember that the Great Ax Arena held battles between the strongest, not geniuses.

I haven't read the original work at first glance. I might as well find a job in a factory if I have the time.

It can only be said that the author did not understand Swallowing Stars at all before writing this book.

A gift of wind and time. I chose the Cosmic Chaos Monument and passed 7 levels in three years. It's really ridiculous.

It's really awesome. A person who is at the threshold of the law of the Wind House can suppress the geniuses of the entire universe and dare not speak. It's so awesome. Niu Niu Niu

It's so unbearable. A genius has written dozens of chapters, wasting his pen and ink on a lot of people who are not worthy of supporting roles. Is he sick?

Immortal vs. Lord of the Universe, you are so awesome

Come on, let's be funny. What did the author write down the original law?

What the hell are you writing? Under the Lord of the Universe, one hundred times the gene limit is the operating rule of the original universe. Nothing that breaks this rule will be born in the original universe and the cosmic sea. Before Luo Feng, the only person who could break the one hundred times gene limit was Emperor Yan, who was also related to Zuo Shanke. Luo Feng broke through a hundred times the gene and was not given any talent or secret method. He just took away a special life with a clone. This is a crazy second set.

If the author can't write it, then stop writing it. Find a factory and go to work properly. Don't leave it here to embarrass yourself. I don't want to curse, it's just random writing that I haven't read the original work.

? In addition to the inconsistency, it is completely following Luo Feng's path. Can the original protagonist's name be changed later?

He is not strong enough and still wanders around. He refuses to listen to other people's advice. He has been saved by others many times, otherwise he would have died long ago. I really should have let him die a few times and lost all the treasures.

Take the opportunity of Luo Feng, and instead of choosing the Youhai clone, choose World Tree

Thoughts after watching I am Luo Feng in Swallowing the Starry Sky. Luo Feng, please don't show up.

When writing fan fiction, at least read the original text carefully. The numbers are unclear. Space is written square. It is recommended that you read elementary school again. Moreover, readers who want to watch Swallowed don't need to read about the heroine, the original text is just a passing glance. There is no need to be brothers with Hong Lei Shen, and have more content of my own.

After reading it, I found it to be very ordinary, with no particularly big poisonous points. The highlight may be that it is early in the timeline and original. Moreover, the first few chapters seem a bit inexplicable. There is no explanation of where things like Locke's divine water come from.

The lower law recognizes the level above the eighth floor of Tongtianqiao, and the upper law recognizes it as the lowest 15th floor (the level of Huyanbo). You only have the recognition of the lower law plus the recognition of the upper law to reach the sixth floor of the Tianqiao?

Refined

I saw the early and middle stages of the first original work of Swallowing the Stars. Is there such a person? Not impressed at all. What's so special about this person?

Isn't it Zhutianliu? Why is it always swallowing?

Jia Yi who swallows the stars, please collect and support!