Starting from Martial Arts and Martial Arts

The beginning is good, but the writing in the next few pictures is a bit silly. He knew the trap and was not sure whether he could survive it. After killing two people, he was seriously injured and passed out. He was saved by the woman who came over. If the woman died before she came over, it would be better to change it to serious injury. She still had the last bit of resistance. The woman came to help bury the body. This kind of plot is better.

This is very similar to a book I read called Goldfinger, but the main character is a bit stupid

There are too many descriptions in my mind, which seems a bit cumbersome

If the protagonist hadn't died ten times, he wouldn't have had a trump card.

Name: Tian Rong Age: 19 years old Identity: Traveler, martial arts beginner in the world of Daqian Appearance: Medium stature, slightly thin, but with tight muscle lines and a sense of tenacity. With a delicate face and a hint of confusion and determination in his eyes, he has both the childishness of a young man and a maturity beyond his years. My hair is slightly long and often tied up randomly, with a few strands of hair in front of my forehead fluttering in the wind.

😰Did the author enter the palace as a eunuch?🤤

"Fantasy Variety Martial Arts: I am a cultivator of immortality, but I am a servant of others"

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First, the introduction is good, but the content is too little.