Literary Master: Great Britain 1820

Brian's Graduation Ceremony Photos at Oxford

Okay, okay, Akaashi Chi also gave me food and grass in the new book section.

Don't deviate too much from the main point, writer, don't "shoot the target". It's okay to feel emotional and indignant, but don't fall into it.

The two issues in this book were very difficult to read. One of the timelines was extremely blurry. After reading it for a long time, I almost had no idea how much time had passed in the book. After the beginning, I didn't even see a mention of it until the newspaper serialization started to get people talking. A month had passed. Then it continued for unknown years and months. Another point is that there is often no transition between the two plots and scenes. Just after finishing one sentence, the next paragraph will change the scene instantly. It's a good habit to keep your word count short of nonsense, but there's no need to save a few words. You still have to write what needs to be written.

After reading Chapter 17, I found something that made me feel a little strange. As a time traveler, it can be said that the integration into the original body is too harmonious. All of a sudden, he became a thoughtful and talented British guy instead of a time traveler. The professor and Newman behind him have directly become the protagonist's friends from my perspective. Although men make friends casually, is this an inherited network of connections? Just introduce your background, nothing else. The characters are too thin, with men in their thirties and teenagers fooling around together. Is the relationship between the three so close? What's the reason? For example, you can talk about your college roommate, background introduction, character introduction, or events related to his character. After that, I will have an impression in my mind, and the interaction between the protagonist and the supporting characters will be very clear. Speaking of housekeepers, the positioning of tool people is very clear. Currently, I have a very vague impression of these two supporting characters. Some of them are quite lengthy, and they are positioned like the main supporting characters, but they feel like passersby, A, B, B, and D. From this, I felt that the plot progressed slowly. It's working, but it feels watery.

It's not the Victorian era yet, 🙅🏻‍♂️🙅🏻‍♂️🙅🏻‍♂️Don't use the sword of the previous dynasty to kill the officials of this dynasty. (In addition, the changes in prices and income during the pre-Victorian and post-Victorian periods were very large, so don't just find a bunch of numbers to make an argument.) The monetary system and income issues have been released as Easter egg chapters. If you are interested, you can take a look.

The previous part is okay, but starting from the school diagnosis, I felt that the protagonist's character was a bit problematic. How should I put it? Maybe it's because I didn't like the school part. It felt a bit immature.

This field is relatively blank and satisfies my curiosity. Write more solidly!

This introduction is quite interesting 😍 It reminds me of Conan Doyle's unboxing when Sherlock Holmes died 😁

The signing was successful, keep up the hard work, the writing is very good, keep up the good work

It's a very good book. I want to say so much, but I don't know how to say it, so I might as well stop saying it! Maybe it's better not to say anything.

There are supposed to be appearances of saints in front of people, why do you want to skip it? I am not familiar with the British celebrities in the article, so it is not fun.

The author knows the story well, but currently the plot is almost entirely driven by dialogue, and the space changes too quickly, giving me the feeling that the pace is too tight. It is recommended to add character movements and some descriptions of the environment, and to change the line of content in some places. Generally speaking, the flaws are not concealed.

Is this a text copy? The copy section is too little.

This topic is very interesting. I hope the author can write it more thoughtfully. The number of words is still a bit short right now, so come on, author!

There are so few people reading it. Can the author persevere? I will continue to order.

Maybe it's my problem. I can't stand the chapters about being educated anymore. I can only pray that there will be less chapters in the future. (I will still support the author)

If you have any new opinions and ideas, you can write them down. I hope this book will be more exciting.

Is this book the heroine? Generally speaking, novels about scholars and scientists do not have a female protagonist to adjust their lives. If not, I won't read it, but I can contribute to my collection and add it to my bookshelf.

As long as there isn't a big thunderstorm later, we'll book it all

Understand. I understand your confidence. After all, plagiarism is much easier than originality. I'm even more curious about how the protagonist writes the novel. There must be differences in writing styles, and how can a social creature become a great writer? I don't know how the author plans to deal with such small details.

1 Pound = 340 grams of pure silver, and now silver is 6 yuan/gram, That is 1 pound = 2,000 RMB = 300$ The Boer War fought by Britain in 1900 cost the empire 220 million pounds in military expenditures, and the most powerful Queen Elizabeth-class battleship in World War I was only 2.52 Million pounds, Victorian Era Income and Expenses Generally speaking, a single woman with an annual income of 100 pounds or a couple with an annual income of 150 to 200 pounds can hire a young maid. A family with an annual income of 300 pounds can hire a handyman maid and a nursery maid to take care of the children, but the hostess of the family still has to do a lot of daily housework, including cooking. If the annual income is 500 pounds, you can hire 3 servants: cook, housemaid and nursery maid (if you have no children, you can hire a part-time maid instead. Her job is to help the cook and housemaid when needed, or hire a footman who can clean boots, run errands, do some porters, outdoor work, etc.). If the annual income is 750 pounds, you can hire 4 servants: cook, housemaid, nursery maid and footman. With this kind of income, the hostess of the family does not need to do housework and only needs to manage the servants. An annual income of £1,000 is an important watershed. You can hire 4 maids (1 cook, 2 domestic maids, 1 babysitting servant) plus 1 coachman and 1 groom. At the same time, they have 1, 2 horses and 1 carriage. A family with an annual income of £5,000 would even employ up to 24 servants, including: housekeeper, cook, valet, nurse, 2 housemaids, laundry maid, pantry maid, nursery maid, kitchen maid, scullery maid; butler, valet, footman, coachman, 2 grooms, assistant groom, 2 porters, 3 gardeners, and laborer. The following is a statistical table of the annual income of various classes in the Victorian era: The richest noble 30,000 pounds Other nobles 10,000 pounds Wealthy merchants, bankers, industrialists Small landed gentry 1,000-2,000 pounds Some clergymen, doctors, lawyers and businessmen Most middle class: £300-800 Doctors, lawyers, civil servants, senior clerks Lower middle class: £150-300 Clerks, principals, journalists, shopkeepers Highly skilled craftsmen £75-100 Skilled workers, including cabinetmakers, typesetters, carpenters, train drivers, high-end tailors 50-75 pounds General semi-skilled workers and skilled women working in factories and shops 45 pounds Seamen, dockworkers, certain servants 25 pounds Farm workers, soldiers, typists 12-20 pounds The lowest level clerks, servants, embroidery workers