Douluo Jueshi: the Opening Golden Reincarnation Eye!

I always feel that the reason Douluo fics are not as good looking as other fics is that the world of Douluo is too rubbish and any game will be too big and boring 😥😥

It doesn't work at the beginning. The martial soul awakened by his biological son is not his inherited martial soul. What about the mutated martial soul? The beast martial soul rabbit mutates into the weapon soul pen and the original martial soul eyes. It is better to set it as an adopted son. From here you can see the level of the author.

If you don't want the Soft Bone Rabbit Martial Spirit, what kind of rubbish is the Tenseigan 🙂

The protagonist is just like a native

After reading three chapters, I couldn't bear it anymore. The author named that pen Luobi. Is there any explanation? How else did you come up with this name? If there is nothing to say, I really recommend changing it.

It's a bit loose. How could a child know so much about the secrets of the Noumenon Sect's martial arts? In the original work, Huo Yuhao only found out after entering the inner courtyard.

The first martial spirit should be the beast martial spirit, because even the second martial spirit can improve physical fitness.

Impression

The last book was originally well written, but you ended up being like a bad eunuch. There were a bunch of epic honey sinkholes that you didn't even try to fill, and it ended up being completely unfinished. Tell me what you did 😒

Familiar taste, I also do this with eggplant.

The heroine of the author must have Qiu'er. If you see it, please reply.

Male protagonist

When I saw this pen, I subconsciously thought it was the pen used to draw the long scroll of destiny in the legend of Aoqi. It just so happened that Huo Yuhao created himself as the God of Destiny in many fans. Maybe it is possible to try to master the rules of destiny during the second period of Dou Er.

Also, if the protagonist and Nannan are tied together, the relationship line should be longer. Don't be too anxious. The relationship between brother and sister is quite good now.

As I looked at it, I realized that the writing was very messy.

I am a native dog and I love watching

It's too abstract. The rabbit mutated into a pen. It's better to say it was picked up.

The twin martial arts are made into the left reincarnation eye + the right reincarnation eye. That's okay. What kind of martial arts pen are there?

To be honest, I feel that if the harem party doesn't enjoy pure love and still eats shrimps, the protagonist might as well start from a pure love god of war.

Do all the novels you open have multiple female protagonists?

Doing the Hokage thing every day, I don't know what's so attractive about the fight between two villages.

Don't look at it, it's a mess, you don't even look at the money you posted.

What you wrote has Noumenon Martial Spirits around you, and there are people from Noumenon Sect around you.