
Douluo Jueshi: Get the Sharingan at the Beginning!
斗罗绝世:开局获得写轮眼!
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- Light Novel
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- Fan Fiction
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- 1y ago
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①Theme: Fighting II ②Introduction: The protagonist joins the Noumenon Sect, sneaks into Shrek to dig out his disciples, participates in the Soul Fighting Competition, captures the Ten Thousand Demon King, deals with the beast tide, goes to the Sun and Moon to learn soul tools, and participates in the second Soul Fighting Competition, which is unfinished ③Plot: He is quite diligent in collecting the harem, and he does not accomplish anything ④Characters The protagonist is coy at first, but then the harem takes off with no details, causing trouble everywhere. His strength is not bad, but his level is not high, and he has not accomplished anything big. How can he believe in becoming a god? ⑤ Advantages There are no obvious advantages in my opinion ⑥ Novelty points It seems that there is nothing special about it. There are quite a lot of Sharingan elements, but I am not familiar with them ⑦ Demining points You don't need to read it since the second competition ⑧ The author's writing style is just a waste of money later ⑨ Real reading experience Overall not good
I think this book is quite good. Dou Er fanfiction is much more difficult to write than Dou Yi. Personally, in my opinion, there is only one Sun and Moon Glory that is well written and completed. The others are either unreadable or too eunuch. Big boost from the author, now it looks like it is very promising to become a high-quality Dou Er fanfic. Never be a eunuch 👍
No, buddy, to be honest, the mission issued by the plug-in in that chapter left quietly after going through a series of plots. He left as soon as you left and he left quietly. Are you afraid of that old guy Yan Shaozhe?
Recruiting heroines!
This article is about multiple heroines. I plan to write about five heroines. In addition to Ice Emperor, Snow Emperor, and Wang Qiu'er, I am also planning to recruit two more. Too many heroines may involve a lot of daily life and are difficult to control, so I will write down a few more popular ones with less controversy. Of course, even if the protagonist does not accept them, they will not be given away. If you think there are others, you can also write them down, and then I will select the two with the highest number of likes.
How should I put it? It's not pure. I feel like it's enough to use the Sharingan's original martial soul to practice mental strength. The author added other attributes to him. The age is a bit too high. The main thing is that it's not pure. It's uncomfortable to watch.
First of all, the improvement of Sharingan is from one magatama to three magatama, and the ability it provides is insight and copy illusion. From here, it is reflected that it can improve one's own reaction and visual ability, and observe the flow of soul power and mental control. Then behind is the so-called Mangekyo Sharingan, the eye of spiritual reflection. According to the Hokage's setting, powerful fluctuations in emotions cause a rapid increase in mental power. The ability to fuse chakra to form Yin escape and powerful beliefs in the heart becomes the Mangekyō Sharingan and Mangekyō. According to the author's setting, the protagonist does not absorb soul rings and improve his mental power. He still relies on emotions to drive the evolution of Sharingan's pupil power. Therefore, we need to arrange a special plot for the protagonist to enhance his mood, and when he improves, he will get what kind of abilities based on his mental state. Here I will mention to the author a few mental states obtained by the Mangekyou Sharingan ability in Naruto. Obito gained the ability to tear apart space because he did not believe in Lin's death and wanted to escape from the world. And he didn't want to believe that Lin was really dead, and wanted to create a world with Lin, a different world. Shisui wanted everyone to coexist peacefully and did not want conflicts between the village and Uchiha, so he gained the ability to modify his will. So the author needs to bring abilities to the protagonist later, and it is best to reflect what kind of mental state he has. However, you can become blind before the Mangekyō Sharingan reaches it, so I sit here and look at the arrangement. Either the martial soul evolves just to reach eternity, or it is the characteristics of the Sharingan, the improvement of mental power, the improvement of pupil power, or the purple-gold magic pupil obtained by the protagonist, which absorbs the power of the moon and recovers. And the Sharingan is a thing that absorbs spiritual energy, as can be seen from the Nirvana technique in Naruto. The Uchiha family created it based on the characteristics of the Sharingan. From this, it can be concluded that the protagonist is not afraid of the soul beast's remnant soul running at high speed through the Sharingan and forcibly attacking and absorbing it with mental power. As for the techniques for using the Sharingan, it is unknown whether the Sharingan can see the perspective of another dimension if it is running at high speed, or it may be running at high speed to improve reaction ability or something like that. Then let me tell the author again, the principle of the Purple Gold Magic Eye is that the gentle purple light radiation in the morning is guided into the eyes first, and then runs through the meridians connecting the eyes and the brain, so it can both exercise the eyes and enhance mental strength. Then let's talk about the Samsara Eye. If you want to improve the Eternal Mangekyō Sharingan, you must open up the ability of all things. However, this world is Douluo and there is no Yin Dun or Yang Dun, so the soul beast in Douluo Continent is the best solution. There is a soul beast in Douluo 4 called Chaos Yin and Yang Bird, which possesses the power of yin and yang chaos, or it absorbs the power of ice and fire in the Ice and Fire Eyes and uses the power of yin and yang to comprehend. Then let's talk about god-level combat power. In the world of Douluo Continent, according to the setting of Naruto, there is the Samsara Eye but the combat power and life level are not as high as those of the Six Paths Sage, so you need to have the Ten Tails. So the author either gives the protagonist the representative elements of the seven chakra attributes. Or crazy stacking of mental power to enhance the Sharingan, and then drive up the life level. Therefore, having the Samsara Eye is not necessarily a god-level one, but it is possible to have a semi-god-level combat power, and when the Samsara Eye is turned on, one can gain new abilities. The second is soul skills. First of all, Douluo Dalu's soul skills are formed by absorbing soul rings and causing the soul rings to form meridians in the body in a special way. It is for this reason that one can have self-created soul skills. Therefore, the protagonist's three magatama can completely form a replicating state. As for whether it can be released, it depends on whether the protagonist has the soul power attribute of the replicating soul skill. So it can be concluded from this that the protagonist only needs to absorb the spirit beast soul ring with spiritual attributes and other elemental attributes. Secondly, let's talk about Sharingan ability insight. This is an ability that can quickly adapt to combat and combat awareness, and improve combat capabilities. Therefore, the protagonist does not need to waste too much time on fighting. Then we talk about what kind of soul ring the protagonist can get in a fight. The first is the spiritual attribute, which is definitely the best. For the rest, just choose some special categories. First of all, the first choice must be the evil-eyed soul beast, or the protagonist can kill the evil emperor and obtain a soul ring when he has the ability in the future. The soul skills must be the mental interference field and the light of time and space, and he can obtain the big eye of the external soul bone to open the third eye. The second choice is the million-year-old soul beast Tianmeng Ice Silkworm, but unfortunately it has been absorbed by Huo Yuhao. If it is absorbed by the protagonist and the soul ring is obtained, the soul skills should be soul freezing, soul detection, soul seizing, mental interference, external soul bone, Tianmeng Skin has mental simulation interference, and has the effect of water and fire invulnerability, and the soul skill Skyworm Transformation. The third choice is the Dark Demon Evil God Tiger, but it seems to disappear after Dou Yi. It depends on whether the author wants to make it. Depending on the evil attribute, it may be given the Sharingan, which will be greatly improved, and it may be more likely to be able to obtain the Space-Time Eye Technique or Soul Skill later. The soul skills are based on the space duel field of the Dark Demon Evil God Tiger. You can get a space world soul skill similar to Obito. The second is the Dark Demon Evil God Thunder Spirit Attack, a spiritual attribute attack with dark evil thunder attribute damage. The attached soul bone can be wings or wings with a spine and tail, which can fly in time and space or wind and thunder flight speed and the Evil God Sting Soul Skill. The fourth choice is the mermaid. According to the characteristics of the mermaid family, the soul skills obtained should be to improve the illusion, or increase the level, or create mental fluctuations. If you have a soul bone attached to the outside, you can get the Mermaid Royal Family, a special type of golden heart. The soul bone attached to the outside has a golden bloodline, and the soul bone skill can enhance the body and spirit. The fifth option, the Yin-Yang Chaos Bird, also has the Yin-Yang Chaos attribute, which may give the Sharingan the ability to gain all-encompassing powers in advance. And you can get a similar balance of yin and yang, or a yin and yang clone soul skill, or a spiritual attack of yin and yang divine light. Currently, these five soul beasts are the best. Then let's talk about grass jelly, which is suitable for the main character to see through autumn water, and then there are some things that strengthen the body. It would be best if you can eat Acacia Broken Heart Red, which will improve all aspects by 10 times. Then according to the principle of the Sharingan, swallow the dragon soul and take the ice and fire soul bone, or absorb it later when you use the Samsara Eye. The basic skill of the Samsara Eye is to absorb the soul. Then now, the protagonist automatically gets some exercise equipment for exercise during Shrek's improvement exercise, or he is a fitness expert in his previous life or the exercise method obtained by watching videos. Training one's own reactions and treading water and trees to exercise soul power control, and then controlling whether the soul ring is released, or whether the soul ring changes color, this is the use of mental power. Then find some soul beasts for illusion training, as well as the classic Rasengan to further control the soul power. The protagonist is at the back, how to improve? Either find a new way of cultivation, or get the soul core. And I wonder if the protagonist's Sharingan can also have ultimate spiritual attributes. Then we recommend the protagonist's subsequent soul ring and soul skills. Try to choose spiritual attributes, or soul skills that increase body percentage. First of all, Sharingan definitely has no shortage of attackers. Mangekyo Sharingan and Rinnegan have at least nine attack methods. The second is Douyi World's spiritual attack illusion, which is also a dimensionality reduction attack. The only thing he's afraid of is a mind-immune skull similar to Bibi Dong's. And it is also necessary to explain at what stage the Sharingan spiritual power reaches the intangible and insubstantial stage, the intangible and insubstantial stage, and the tangible and insubstantial stage. In addition, if the protagonist knows how to operate the five senses, he will be able to make waves. So all stacked amplified eyes reach the same level as the kaleidoscope and are invincible. The level is higher and one can be replaced. They are all ants, and the mental power of the spirit beast of the same level as the protagonist may not be as strong as the Sharingan. The spirit beast is the main body with low spirit, unless it is a special spirit beast, and the protagonist. If you are bold, directly mind control the hundred thousand year spirit beast to sacrifice. It can only be said that Dou Yi's mental attack is a dimensionality reduction attack. There is no need to play with adding another soul core. So under normal circumstances, the Sharingan only lacks some resources and thugs in the early stage. After turning on the kaleidoscope, there is nothing missing, and you can start looting directly. The mind-controlled nobles can get whatever money they want, and then they can live without seeking death. When fighting, fight with spirit beasts to improve your awareness of fighting methods. Coupled with the Sharingan, this cheating ability is too easy to fight. I hope this can bring some help to the author.
The male protagonist's fighting ability and other aspects are all very good, but the plot is inexplicably enough to raise my blood pressure 😥
Tsk, the system transmission broke down halfway, and then the Tianmeng Ice Silkworm disappeared. I didn't go to stay in advance for three years. This arrangement is quite poor.
Can you play less bad jokes?
Can you play less bad jokes? When you see those bad jokes, you feel a little uncomfortable and have a strong sense of separation. Can't you be more normal?
Puzzled@author
This mental control is really comparable to Blue Silver Coil, because the passive ability of the Sharingan becomes a skill that requires a soul ring to activate, rather than a noble strengthening skill or resistance skill.
I don't understand the reason for competing with Huo Yuhao to set up a grilled fish stall?
The plot is too protracted. I wrote dozens of chapters about the competition in the Star Luo Empire, and I actually wrote more than a hundred chapters about the competition in the Sun and Moon Empire. There is no plot advancement yet. How many chapters does this book have so far? Count it yourself, author. The original plot of Dou Er is that San Gouzi puts a leash on Huo Gua, and the second is to find a chance to become a god. The soul of creation during the period. The Holy Spirit Religion, the war between the two continents, the conflict between the soul beasts and the human race, the meaning of Shrek's existence, A Yin's erosion of the golden tree, the rat becoming the master of the plane, and the three dogs' arrogant manipulations in the God Realm. The author has not seen the shadow of what you wrote. You only wrote about kittens and puppies biting each other in the ring. It makes no sense at all and is not interesting at all. Suggestions: 1 The author can blend Naruto and Douluo together, walk around Douluo's world in the mission mode of Naruto, find opportunities to improve strength, and show the power of the Sharingan. 2. Use Sharingan book development to promote the climax of Douluo's plot 3. The role of the villain must play a role, and the plot and strategies during the period should be written more to set off the protagonist. 4.......
Chapter 164 is not well written. He even made jokes on the battlefield. It smells like a thunder warrior. Just give Wu Feng a slap in the face.
It must be the power of choosing Yang
My subordinate kicked Uchiha Uchiha Uchiha. I originally thought that I could bounce back to level 30 at any level, but it turned out that only Contra went down. The protagonist himself can kill randomly, so what's the use of you, and God-killing cannons are no good. Although no normal person in this kind of game would be free to offend the forging and treatment support staff, but Yakuza is not a normal person. He even split his daughter in half like an enemy's earthworm, so to put it bluntly, the only option is the power of Yang.
This is the mainland of China, can five female protagonists do it?
Come on, use Kamui. If you are fast enough, you can defeat the old rabbit in front of the little Yakuza, but the combat power of Kamui will not be suppressed 🙂
Now in the Douluo bar, the most reasonable and highly recognized soul skill combinations should be: one, two, and three soul skills with amplification (preferably with a percentage increase), four, five, and six for control or attack, seven spirit avatars, eight attacks, and nine domains. In the later stage, the seven, eight, and nine soul skills are basically used. The one, two, and three offensive soul skills are really useless and have no appearance rate at all.
Being attracted by the Sharingan, I could tolerate a little bit of poison in the early stage, but I didn't expect that I got a big one in Chapter 18
This book becomes more and more like shit as it goes on, it's a shame I ordered so many copies 😅
In the later stages of this book, there was a section here and there, and it felt like I was reading a pirated version, and I couldn't even connect the chapters in between! Also, I didn't understand the ending, and I didn't even know what it was about!
You can still watch it without thinking. There are too many competitions in the whole story. Do you only have competitions in your life? He is so strong and can only compete and not cause trouble, so he is convinced. There is no one who is a game fanatic
I read it in one go, and so far the setting and content are okay. The only drawback I think is that the system obviously has a lot of intelligence. This system novel is very taboo about the system being intelligent, because if the system is not created by the protagonist himself, then the protagonist is just a slave of the system. It's no different from Huo Yuhao being Tang San's dog. I still hope the author can change it
Shennong: This is the author's first book, and there are many pitfalls that can be understood. Overall it's pretty good Let's talk about the issues: 1. The protagonist at level 29 can use all his strength to seriously injure the soul emperor who does not use soul skills This talent alone has attracted the attention of the dean, not to mention the protagonist's second thousand-year soul ring, it is not an exaggeration to accept him as a disciple. , But there is nothing. The protagonist is given a big fault, and a small one defeats the strong. Although the method is vicious, the other party is the one who caused the trouble first, and there is no reward. He just draws a big pie 2. The protagonist's attitude is not clear. He treats the original protagonist well at one moment, and the description is very poor at other times. It makes him dizzy 3. As the young master of the Noumenon Sect, how can he be secretly unprotected? What's more, it's Huduzi's noumenon sect? If something unexpected happens, it's straightforward. Thinking from the perspective of the Noumenon Sect, this is the future of the Noumenon Sect. How could it not be protected? What's more, the protagonist's master knows the protagonist's character very well. Being decisive and ruthless will definitely cause trouble Overall, it's very good. He has the brains to write a book.
No matter how good the writing is in the early stage, at least I still write it myself. From the beginning of the Mingdu competition, I basically didn't even bother to write. I copied everything from the original work and just changed the name. I didn't even bother to change the details. Half of the book was copied from the original work. It was hard water. In the end, it was not watery anymore and it was completely unfinished.
I stopped watching when I saw that the main character had to choose between three and not have innate soul power!
To be honest, I feel annoyed when I see the Sharingan now. There are so many systems to write about. Naruto is a household name but all of them are badly written.
Brothers formed a group! ! !
The group account is in the introduction, welcome to join the group,
Recommended book "Collecting Horses from Douluo"
It's so bad that I scribbled it later.
It's going to suck later. I suggest you don't subscribe.
Oh my god, author, how could it end like this?
Author, I really can't stand you like this, this ending, ugh 😒