Dragon Clan: Lu Mingfei Really Doesn't Want to Live in the Sims

Very good

When will I come to Benlao Road and play the novel about Angers head as a ball? It will be fun. Everyone who sends it now regards Angers as a treasure. Niang Xipi, in Angers original novel, is the same as Lao Lu's parents, aunt, and Nuonuo, which is even worse.

This book should be called "I, Su Xiaoqiang, cut off Hu Lu Mingfei at the beginning"🤣

In fact, the original novel of Dragon Clan was very short The plot is even shorter. The book looks thick because of Jiangnan's writing style. . . . When many authors write fan fiction. He just played some supporting roles. Random talk. Water plot. No way. The plot of the original work is too short.

Overall, it's okay, but there are a lot of awkward spots. For example, if you don't want to spoil the story, you don't want to spoil it. As a result, the protagonist has to hold a simulator that predicts the future. In order to keep it fresh, he doesn't look at the details and only looks at the general process. You may say that it would be fine if the simulator did not have this function, but it would be stupid to not use it if it does. Also, Lu Mingfei's physical fitness greatly increased after awakening the Golden Eyes, but he seemed not to be aware of it and only reflected it inadvertently. Isn't it possible that the perception of this thing is so insensitive? This is due to physical fitness, not verbal ability. Other than that, it's okay. The emotional line is not a big problem at the moment. Since the combat power is not written much, I don't know how round it will be in the future. Considering it's only forty chapters, I'll read it later, it's a watchable Dragon Clan fanfic.

Let me first say this. This is just my feeling as a reader. It is full of personal subjective feelings. If you have different opinions, I hope to discuss them rationally. Also, I would like to mention that I have only read 1-4 of Dragon Clan, and I have not read the so-called serial content at all. Let me talk about the conclusion first. I personally think that the plot rhythm and emotional line of this book are half broken. First of all, there is the problem of the rhythm of the plot. Cheats such as simulators can be called the ultimate embodiment of cool writing, but the speed-up ability of simulators means that there are very few simulator stories that can end smoothly. This article has consciously controlled, including the early information concealment, and the extremely fast death when simulating Eriyi. However, the title of this book destined that the simulator cannot be invisible throughout the whole process, so the plot of Old Tang and Xia Mi was directly accelerated. The simulator almost knows the plot in advance, allowing the plot of Old Tang and Xia Mi to pass almost without any disturbance. In the original work, there are six books in total from 1 to 4, with Old Tang occupying half and Xia Mi occupying one. In this work, the plot of Old Tang is almost the same. It's only ten chapters, while Xia Mi's appearance from appearance to showdown took almost ten chapters, the suspended animation plan took almost ten chapters (the plot length was estimated by me by looking at the catalog, there may be deviations), and the plot of Bai Wang has been close to one hundred chapters now, and is still being updated. Compared with the White King, the Fire King and the Earth King are too short; compared with the Fire King and the Earth King, the White King is too lengthy. But the problem is that the plot line of the original work is not enough. Only the four kings of fire, earth, white and wind appeared in the original work from 1 to 4. The first two have ended, the white king is in progress, and the wind king has also completed half of the plot. If the previous plot rhythm is followed, this work may be completed in less than 300 chapters. Of course, this kind of plot rhythm is not without solutions. Whether it is introducing new plots such as the content of Long Wu, or spending more time on the emotional line, it can be solved. Regardless of whether new problems will arise after being solved, at least the plot length issue can be managed. However, this raises the second current problem, which is that the emotional line is half broken. In fact, what I pay more attention to in this game is the emotional line. The core plot of the free chapter is basically Lu Su's emotional line and Lu's growth line. I guess that most readers of this work should be attracted by the relationship development between Lu Su and Lu Mingfei with the help of the simulator. However, I personally think that the most fatal plot is here - Su Xiaoqiang rescues Lu Mingfei at the graduation party, still using the method of the original Nono. Everyone who has watched Dragon Clan should know how much impact this graduation party had on Lu Mingfei. It almost made Lu Mingfei set his heart on Nuonuo, a married woman. But now, the same method is used, but the person who executes it has become Su Xiaoqiang. Although Lu Mingfei has indeed grown up, those who have watched the previous plots should know that the main perspective of the early plots has always been Su Xiaoqiang. In the entire early plots, she has always been the one who has the leading power in the plot. Lu Mingfei's growth scenes in the early stages are very few. This leads to the fact that even if Lu Mingfei has made progress, at least he did not go to the graduation party to confess, he is not the one who broke the situation. In this almost milestone plot, the one who carries is Su Xiaoqiang, and Lu Mingfei is still the one who is saved - just like the original work. It's the same as the original work, it's too similar, which means that readers will subconsciously draw Su Xiaoqiang to the position of Nono in the original work in Lu Mingfei's heart, and she is single, likes Lu Mingfei, and is better than Nono in all aspects. Even if there is no formal confession, who would think that their relationship is still limited to good friends? Originally, this is nothing. It is okay to write a single female protagonist and sprinkle sugar. But the bad thing is that this is a multi-female protagonist novel. Such Su Xiaoqiang has almost blocked the way for other female protagonists. In fact, in the chapter about the graduation party plot, some readers are already worried about the difficulty of entering the subsequent heroine. The premise is that there are multiple female protagonists, and the plot of the graduation party, I can imagine the plot design, either Lu Mingfei breaks the situation alone, shows enough growth, and has the courage to do it all later, or pulls the plot of Zero or Eli Yi, and develops enough feelings with other female protagonists first, and then at the graduation party, Su Xiaoqiang breaks Lu Mingfei's heart in this way, leaving him in a dilemma. After that, adding a new female protagonist will be much easier. This kind of plot design routine is a bit routine, but it should be much easier to operate. I read this book mainly for the simulator and emotional lines. Although the plot of Bai Wang has 100 chapters, Hui Liyi's emotional lines are actually not that many. I felt bored at the end of last month. At that time, I thought that Su Xiaoqiang's positioning was too high and Hui Liyi's entry was blocked. Although Eriyi is very popular, the plot logic problem led to a poor viewing experience. I looked through the table of contents today and found that this month's update seems to be mainly about the plot. In the end, I didn't have the desire to click on it. I think maybe I came to this book for the simulator and the love line in the first place. Tell me some personal advice. I can't make any suggestions regarding the plot, because I haven't seen the later stages of Dragon Clan fandom, so I just hope the author has a relevant outline for the ending of the plot. As for the emotional line, my suggestion is to show that Lu Mingfei maintains restraint and distance because of Su Xiaoqiang, and then arrange a plot that is heavy enough and extreme enough (the level of the original Eliyi's death) to break Lu Mingfei's heart. I would like to emphasize that Lu Mingfei has grown a lot during the graduation party and decouple this work from the party plot of the original work. Otherwise, Su Xiaoqiang, who was positioned as Nono in the original work, was too invincible, and this work could barely survive the positioning. Let's write more about the emotional interactions between Lu Mingfei and the three female protagonists later. Actually, I tend to focus on the emotional line later on, but it can only be regarded as a suggestion. It is best for the author to only refer to it, otherwise it will be more explosive if the plot outline is messed up. Once again, this is just a subjective opinion as a reader. The author can refer to it but do not listen to it. It is best to make comprehensive adjustments based on the plot outline and background reader data

I used more than a hundred pictures to tell the story of the sweet life of the little goddess and Lu Mingfei. They just confirmed their relationship and turned around to take a solo mission for her. It was obvious that they were tired of the Bronze City incident before, so they suddenly came out alone to do it. It felt too disconnected and boring If you ask me, I still respect the original work The old Tang brothers died under Lu Mingfei's knife Xia Mi followed Chu Zihang's corpse to become the Masked Odin Zero got close to Lu Mingfei after listening to Lu Mingze's order But Lu Mingfei was still a coward, still helpless as he watched Eli Yi being sucked to death, still implicated his only remaining friend to death, still despairingly lost his mother on the ice field, and still couldn't escape his fate

7 Recommendation votes + 9 monthly votes. All voted for you. Give it to me➕Spirit Let's talk about the advantages first. Lu Mingfei in this book is okay. Isn't it like getting cheats in other books and seems like a different person? Does Lu Mingfei lack strength in the original book? No shortage. Then why do you become a different person immediately after you die? So the writing in this book is pretty good. Through dozens of chapters, Lu Mingfei slowly changes his feelings towards Chen Wenwen. It's still a bit of a bad boy, but it can be seen that the change is going on. It's about this kind of slow change, not becoming a different person in one sentence. Let's talk about the shortcomings. The author's writing style is pretty good. It can be written more fluently, and I don't have the feeling of embarrassment while reading it (for example, the p-nickname of "Zhe Tian "The Cruel Emperor", which made me confused), but the reserve of jokes is relatively small. For example, in the few paragraphs that I complained about in the novel, I added some Kamen Rider jokes. Why. . . Why. . . Why. . . Parallel sentences of popular novels are more exciting than the novel in the comment section. But how do you get readers to comment? It's what you write. The baggage you throw out will make readers want to complain. Share the pictures. At present, the first 30 pictures of this novel are not big problems. The writing style and typos are all okay. It will not make people die. Come on.

So will it become a harem later? Now there are more than 100 chapters, and it feels like it's just a one-liner about the little goddess, and Lu Mingfei is also devoted to the little goddess. If it becomes a harem later and it feels like Lu Mingfei cheated, other female characters in the harem should appear earlier. Even if they don't meet the male protagonist, they must be described first.

In fact, Lu Mingfei and Su Xiaoqiang still have a chance to get together even in the original work. Long Si Lu Mingze gave Lu Mingfei a chance to make a choice and let him go back to 18 years old. The mixed race has nothing to do with him anymore. But Mingfei gave up for Senior Brother Chu. If Lu Su had not been for Mingfei's special status, otherwise Mingfei would really be an S-class hybrid. After graduation, Mingfei would almost 100% be assigned to return to his hometown to take over Chu Tianjiao's job. At that time, Lu Su had a 90% chance that the two of them would get together and become the second-generation version of Chu's parents. Moreover, after they gave birth to a child, Lu would probably make the same choice as Chu Tianjiao. In order to protect Su and the children, he divorced Su and the children would be left to Su.

So are you really planning to write about a harem? You've already kissed each other and you're not sure about the relationship? Why don't you play with your child if he doesn't understand?

I don't want a harem. I finally found someone who doesn't have a harem. Su's strategy bar is almost full.

If you talk about the combat power setting, a lot of people will be furious, but if you talk about the emotional line of the dragon family, there will be something to say. Jiangnan? A long story about the hunchback who can't walk. If you really want a long story, you have to be a second-tier author of various types 🤫

More than a hundred chapters of simulator processing, emotional scenes with the little goddess, and entering the Lion Heart Society to perform tasks. Later, he directly became a member of the student union, and as soon as he confirmed with the little goddess, he immediately turned his head towards her...

The overall look is very comfortable, and I can intuitively feel the youthful atmosphere. The little goddess is really in line with the original work.

The writing is quite good, but I feel that the author may not be able to write well later.

On the free day of admission, I want to see Su Xiaoqiang hit in the abdomen by Frigga's bullet and fall into Lu Mingfei's arms, and then Lu Mingfei kills the whole audience!

Added a dog-licking character, not so licking. After Chen Wenwen's confession, there was no more drama. As a person whose father doesn't care about her, whose mother doesn't love her, who has been humiliated by her aunt for a long time, and who has been bullied all year round in school, the school belle said she would take you into a club to play with you so that so and so wouldn't be confused. Talking about the dog-licker I have a crush on, if my aunt hadn't spent the money, the domineering CEO would have fallen in love with me. If you pursue someone beyond your ability, you should naturally lick it. Otherwise, if so many people like the school beauty, what do you have? If they are the school beauty, you will be a joke.

There is no explanation for the interruption for so long... Who dares to look at you like this?

Alive🙂

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