Fengyun: Three Points Come from Strength, Seven Points Come from Hard Work

Come on, I feel like you have succeeded. You finally have a martial arts novel that is not an online game but is systematic. In fact, if you are writing a fan novel and do not want to follow the plot of the original characters, but write more fully and fill in the things that the original plot has touched upon, it is already good. Don't worry about whether Jianghu is dark or not. It depends on the author's writing style. Jin Yong wrote a great chivalrous person who serves the country and the people. Gu Long wrote about the intrigues of Jianghu and the love between children. Everyone has a martial arts world in their heart. Don't pay attention to those people's nonsense. Look at the current martial arts system. If you don't have a system, you feel like you can't survive. What kind of realm is the ninth level? Just write about the realm. There are no plot and fighting scenes. If there is no fighting, it is still called a martial arts novel. It is all about fighting the realm. Before the fight starts, it starts to introduce the realm. Can it still be called a martial arts novel that represents fighting? Take Emperor Shitian as an example, how many grades would you give him with his thousand-year cultivation? This was also beaten by Wu Wudi in his prime. Cultivation will never be the representative of combat power. Cultivation, resourcefulness, and combat experience can only be written in order to show the strength of the characters. There are very few authors who write about these now. Many authors now like to simplify martial arts, and there are not many outstanding books anymore.

Just the character of the protagonist, is he still dominating? The author is looking for scolding for writing this character and then traveling through Xiongba!

I just can't stand Chapter 1. It's said at the beginning that all three martial arts are already mastered, but as soon as I get started, I only know Pai Yun Palm and I'm restrained to death. Are you kidding me?

This kind of martial arts fandom... Everyone likes to watch awesome ones. What you wrote is so frustrating and unpleasant, no wonder so many people gave negative comments, hahaha

This Wuming is an undercover agent. He used his sword to kill the martial arts people in the Central Plains and killed the martial arts people in the fault line without mercy. But he showed mercy to the Japanese people by showing mercy. And every time he faced off against Japanese people, he would always fail, but he would never die, because he could always escape from the prison and wander around. No matter how you look at it, there is an inexplicable tacit understanding with the Japanese people. As a result, he became the most powerful hero in the Central Plains! This comic is hard to describe.

I remember that many years ago, there was a writer who wrote about Xiong Ba. In the end, he slept with Bu Jingyun. My jaw dropped. Isn't this also a male bronze?

This Xiongba is really poisonous. He practices nondescriptly. There is no need to establish the Tianxiahui, but he insists on following the original work. I don't know what he did. If he doesn't follow the plot, he won't write it, right? Let's just change the title of the novel to Time Travel to Become a Xiongba. The protagonist is a bear.

Miewu is a completely stupid idea. You know that when we were invaded, we relied on martial arts to have a certain degree of confidence and be able to attack? Without martial arts, there would be no oppression? Fortunately, the protagonist is still a modern person. Just like SB, I think he was completely influenced by destiny. And the Central Plains destroyed Wu, what about the foreign countries? What do you use to fight foreign invasion? I don't even know what kind of outrageous thinking this is. You might as well say you want Jiazi to slay the devil. We also want to destroy martial arts in order to take revenge on the person hiding behind the scenes.

This first chapter is about poison. At the beginning, three points have returned to Yuan. When you go back to fighting, you will only be able to use Pai Yunzhang. If you are restrained, you will die from the poison.

Why are you using the name Xiongba Zhou Zhuoyuan interchangeably? Either give up the name of his previous life and directly change his name to Xiongba, or he can not use Xiongba's name and change his name to Zhou Zhuoyuan. It's really annoying when you use these two names together.

If you don't practice your martial arts well, you'll have to fix some messy things.

I suggest changing the written word to "Being a softie through the wind and cloud"

The last time I saw such a poisonous book was twenty years ago. If I remember correctly, it should be called Nine Transformations of the Golden Body.

I haven't read it, but I knew it was a bad bomb when I read the reviews. I suggest the author give it a try. There aren't any good reviews 🙂

It's so special. I've read more than 100 chapters. If the protagonist doesn't strive for world domination and doesn't study martial arts well, what on earth does he want to do?

What is this book about? The protagonist is like a loser and has no autonomy.

Can't the names be unified? I don't know the meaning of switching between the two names. Is the author's real name so reluctant to part with this name?

People have to grow up slowly. The protagonist is just a soul-piercing Xiongba, not a real Xiongba. Of course, Xiongba's character will not suddenly become the protagonist's character. If the protagonist is to be the same as Xiongba, it will be driven by the law of heaven and through a series of unavoidable things to push the protagonist to an unparalleled domineering character. But to be honest, I don't want the protagonist to be the same as Xiongba. If they are the same, is it still the protagonist? Isn't the final ending of the protagonist the same as that of Zhen Xiong Ba? The protagonist should have a domineering side (as he continues to grow, his position will become higher and higher, and his domineering self-evident), he should also have his own side. This is the protagonist, and the final ending of the protagonist will deviate from the tragic ending of the original domineering one.

This protagonist is really weird. We don't know if the author wrote it to reflect the domineering nature of the protagonist or something. Some causal plots can obviously be avoided. He just wants to be as involved as the original plot. When getting along with his daughter, he is a tough talker. Alas, he is just pretending. He just can't open up and talk to his daughter. He just wants to have conflicts with others. He is naturally overbearing and ignores it. I can't understand it. Maybe this is the legendary overbearing.

This is nothing to break the start. He has the experience of being a top tyrant, but it's still so hard to defeat a senior brother.

It is a good book that goes beyond the plot of the original work.

Reading this book was a waste of emotion. In the end, Xiao Sanxiao and Xiao Sanxiao's two sons were not killed, but they were transported through time. The character I wrote about before changed into a cowardly character.

Alas, if you want to write about Guo Jing, don't use Xiong Ba as a gimmick! I can open this book of yours, which one is not for Xiong Ba?

Niu Niu Niu Niu I don't know what to say about you.

The writing is too bad. If you like the sloppy writing, you can read it. Anyway, I gave up.

You obviously know the original work well, why are you pretending to be innocent? Senior brother is going to kill you, and master doesn't care. You have to be careful when a native like this comes, and he writes like he knows nothing about it.

The first place in the Fengyun World Strength Ranking: Nuwa The second place: The Great Sun Tathagata The third place: Half God The fourth place: Amaterasu The fifth place: Liancheng Zhi The sixth place: Bu Jingyun The seventh place: Nie Feng The eighth place: Jian Yue's complete body The ninth place: Mo Kui's complete body The tenth place: Xiao Wu The eleventh place Name: Xiao Sanxiao No. 12: Daytime version of the Great Demon God No. 13: Big Master No. 14: Bai Suzhen No. 15: God of Immortality No. 16: Wu Wudi No. 17: Emperor Wenlong No. 18: Dragon Yuan version of Duanlang No. 19: Sword Master Long Er is No. 20: Emperor Shitian

I haven't read Fengyun, but this novel is okay. At first I thought the descriptions, dialogues, and language were a bit rough, and I really wanted to complain about it, but it gradually improved over time, which is good. In the later period, I directly transferred to the Xianxia dungeon. I felt very confused. I read several chapters in a row without a single comment. I felt so lonely 😰😰😰

Why does this taste like a mortal cultivating immortality?

Sometimes I know the original work well, and sometimes I know nothing about it. It looks like a big head. Especially letting Yan Ying live with her daughter is extremely poisonous.