My Father Is Still Alive

What kind of crappy novel is this? I want to write one without a heroine and a childhood sweetheart as a squad leader. The protagonist's father is more like the protagonist. He has a wife and an old enemy from his past life who traveled through time and fell in love with him.

I suggest everyone to block this book, it will disgust you to death.

No, buddy, squad leader Qingmei died like this? You write an invincible-like novel, and the people around the protagonist die at will? Can you hold on to this until it's on the shelves?

The writing is like AI. The squad leader will die to take revenge even if he dares not to repay the invincible article.

Is Jiang Qi just like this?😰😰? You sent out the lunch box too fast!

Normally, he and his little brother would have nothing to do with each other over trivial matters, but when something big happened to his brother, the master wanted to accept his brother and asked him to contact him. He couldn't just refuse for his brother. When he heard that Buddhism wanted to cut off the mortal world, he happily agreed, but the person who accepted the disciple refused to change even if he wanted to.

It was a bit sudden from Inner Demon, and even more so now. It suddenly went before Jiuzhou. Obviously, there are many plots that have not been finished before. The author didn't want to play a time loop, right? It would be boring if the protagonist struggled in Jiuzhou. Look at the title of the book.

Please! I will do anything to pursue my studies! !

I said why something seems wrong the more I look at it It turns out I was deceived Crap

I haven't read a few chapters, but this introduction almost made me think it was a book by another author that I had read before. I asked the author if the inspiration came from the book "The Immortal Just Wants to Lie Down". It felt too immediate.

? The first chapter gave me a sense of déjà vu in "Uncle from Another World"

After the release of "Fragmented Continent", the writing was very messy, and there was no visual experience at all. It was like a running account

The early stages of the book were pretty good. It's not impossible for my son to be the protagonist. But if this is considered a light-hearted novel, it still doesn't match up a little bit. Jiang Qi described it in so many words and thought that there would be some reversal, but in the end it died in such an unclear way 😅. Come on, author. I can't keep chasing. See you later

Can anyone tell me if the squad leader really died like this? I didn't understand that I went offline so quickly.

Will the protagonist have a group of stepmothers from another world?🙂

Isn't it a story about multiple female protagonists in a harem?

When I wrote it, I felt like I was writing it as a passerby, but obviously the effect was not what I thought. I will pay attention to this issue in future books and will never make it again (kneeling down)

I can see it, but only a little bit🤏🏻. Because it is difficult to support the dual protagonists, the support on the shelves is very blue.

Isn't this Uncle from Another World?

How rare is it for a protagonist in a fairy tale to have both parents?

I like this idea! Come on, author! 😆Please update it, Oh Nei should

Author, what happened to Jiang Qi? Missing?

Damn it, what did I see?😡