Twin Cities: the Prop Master in Zaun

The writing is very good, and the characters in the fan novel are the closest to the original work. Other fan novels basically have more or less OOC, but there are only so many fan novels, so I reluctantly accept it, but the characters in this one are very close to the original work, and it looks very interesting.

Very good, he is a time-traveler and aboriginal who doesn't know anything 😂 A combination of a time-traveler and an aboriginal, right?

The rat charm turns a still life into an animal, not death into life.

I don't understand why people say this book is not good to read. Anyway, I personally think it is a good book. It introduces the profession of the protagonist before time travel (police) at the beginning. It also explains that because of this profession (study), I have seen less animation works, so the effect of the props is not clear. After time travel, Hilko saved In order to repay Hilko for working for him, during this period of time, due to modern people's outlook on life, he saved Bao Bao (he couldn't bear the child to be killed) and at the same time gradually felt that what Hilko did was unacceptable (using shimmer without restraint) was contrary to what he had been told when he was a child to save Zaun, and instead poisoned the people at the bottom of Zaun. There have been conflicts and verbal conflicts in public, all of which I think are very reasonable, because the protagonist is originally a person from the past of modern civilization, and the current behavior is based on this identity, including gratitude and kindness (talking about the Holy Mother, who asked the child to be saved by Bao Bao? Big bonus points!!), The focus of the current plot is on the conflict with Hilko's ideas, and the fact that he concealed the fact of saving Bao Bao, which violated Hilko's orders. The protagonist's character is well created, and I look forward to the subsequent interaction with Bao Bao and the change of his personality. At the same time, it is precisely because the protagonist has not watched the Two Cities anime that the author's protagonist is more agile. Rather than just liking this character or liking that character, he inserts a plot inexplicably. Although it is unavoidable, it also depends on whether the description in the book is reasonable. There is no doubt that this book has achieved this (because the protagonist has modern people's three views). I think this book is very good-looking, because when I saw the comment section, I just sprayed props without knowing the effect. There is also time travel but I don't know the plot. I said it is some kind of indigenous people, and I feel that the comment area is too violent, so I want to say something. I hope that if the author can see it, continue to work hard, and don't be influenced by those people. People who like your works will naturally like it. At the same time, I hope that if you like Shuangcheng's works, or if you like making dumplings (I'm a dumpling party), you can check it out, and you won't be disappointed.

I am also an experienced Shennong for more than ten years. So far, this is the fan work with the most Twin Cities flavor among the Qidian Shuang Cities fan works. Don't miss it if you like to read the story carefully. Knowing the plot but not knowing whether there is a cheat or not will not affect the author's ability to write a story or a novel. What can be affected is the author's own writing style. After seeing the latest update, I think the author has the ability and writing style to write a good story, and the writing is also very tasteful. Personally, I think writing a fanfic that doesn't know the plot is the most challenging thing for the author. The author has handled it very well so far. There are thousands of cool stories at the starting point. If you feel uncomfortable, you can change it and read it, but you don't have to come to the comment area to deliberately disparage it. This kind of delicately described story, I also want to eat this kind of fine chaff when I get tired of the rough grain of cool stories! !

The writing is so good, why don't you really try harder? You are one of the few Shuang Cities fics I read who is willing to portray characters and weaken the protagonist. Everyone in the comment section is waiting for you to develop the follow-up plot.

Can the author fix the following update time every day, otherwise I will always refresh?

It was so damn good to watch, especially the plot between Baobao and Hilko (you can watch it for yourself, no spoilers), which made my scalp numb. This plot has its ups and downs. You deserve the monthly pass

Don't cut it, just write slowly. You are the only one who can read the book on the setting of the Twin Cities. You are the only one in the bookshelf. Update 2 chapters a day, with a total of 4 or 5,000 words, just release them at a fixed time, and keep the rest as manuscripts. It is almost the Chinese New Year, so you should keep more manuscripts in case of emergencies.

In fact, the author's writing is very good, but maybe the outline is not well written. It created a big problem of not being able to make a circle. It also misjudged people's requirements for online writing in the current era. At the end of the day, what we want is entertainment and fun. We hate failure and tragedy. There will be some people who like deep tragedies, but the vast majority of people probably still like "shallow" and "enjoyable" stories. At least that's the case for most people who read online articles.

This book is really good. The pacing is also very good. Goldfinger blends into the plot without seeming stiff. I love reading it.

The author pulled a big one. Although it was reasonable, the author repeatedly abused the protagonist. Old unfortunate Hilko fell in love with you two.

On the first day of the new year, come back and burn incense!

The progress is relatively slow, but the advantage is stability. The key is that the writing is smoother than other fics, and it doesn't give people the feeling that it will be over after 10 chapters.

The main reason is that the speed of following new updates is too slow and there is no future for singles. If the author does not force himself to maintain quality and quantity, there will be fewer and fewer readers. The fewer readers, the more immobile he will be. Then he will enter the palace.

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The writing is quite interesting. Why don't you write more? It's not necessary to make dumplings to be able to match the character of the original characters. You can continue writing when you are in a good mood.

Shang Xiang, if the author revise and revise again, I feel like I can come back to life.

Jinx and Hilko are the most vividly written among all the fanfics I have seen. They are completely different from other templates that have dialogues and NPCs. What a pity.