
Forgive Me, This Is the Last Time
原谅我吧,这是最后一次了
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 152k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Original Fantasy
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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Forgive me, Sasse, this is the last time.
Looking at the introduction, I thought it was Weasel and Erzhuzi.
Regardless of the writing style or the thinking, just say that for each age group in the introduction plus ten years old, it looks like a person.
No, you are a eunuch again. If you are not a master, write slowly. Just practice more. If the number of words increases, people will read it.
Old thing reincarnated? Or is the father-in-law returning to the sun? Let it rest for a while and then take a look
Brothers, I heard that the author is the one who wrote about Li Zhuangsheng, is it true? If so, I will blacklist this book 😥😥😥
Can't we write at a higher age?
It's over, it's over. I'll see you at the eunuch's head on the shelves.
A baffling experience.
This type of novels has shown me from experience. It is impossible to read a book and support the book and reward it. You can still subscribe a little. When will you die if you don't protect everything?
I got a big Tang Uchiha weasel.
Personal identification
To put it simply, I have read 23 chapters of this book so far. I personally feel that the main problem is that the author did not write the relationship development process with the heroine well, especially Gu Xiayue and Shang Gong Wan'er. The root cause of this should be a length issue. Your chapters are too few and the range of description is limited. If this is the case, the protagonist would have no reason to kill other people named Li. Is it for his sister? Deep feelings? But you wrote a few chapters, meeting, looking at the lights, and others. In this way, although a long time has passed in the story, the readers will not feel much and have little emotion. If it is to complete the systematic task of raising the protagonist, then the female protagonist should also write more about the male protagonist's growth process. Otherwise, the motivation is still insufficient. She is deeply grateful to the male protagonist. The female protagonist has it, but the reader seems strange. Is it so fast?
? ? Don't know the knowledge and technology of time travel? Keep simulating and get nothing? ? How is this different from writing nothing?
The empress of the Li family's royal family probably didn't kill as many people as the protagonist 🙂
Did you just cut one four days ago?
The plot is a little bit Nanban
The content setting is a bit messy and the character descriptions are weird.
Are you writing about the slave owner's eunuch?
I already said it was the old eunuch from Circle 123
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