In Tokyo, I Draw Cards and Become a Great Yokai

Tokyo Tokyo Demon, it should have been good three or four years earlier. After all, the game Onmyoji was not dead at that time. Now looking at these Shutun, Qingxing Lan and so on, I only feel helpless and sighing. This morning I still vaguely dreamed about the number I used to have when I was the dormitory leader, hehe.

Have you ever turned into a big monster? Some things are scribbled and taken for granted. I have references, and if it is not academic misconduct🤓 just write it

I feel like the results shouldn't be so bad In fact, unexpectedly, the quality is pretty good I feel like Imagawa Yoshimoto is cuter than the heroine

At the end of the first volume, it finally has its own style. But Akaiki, the co-ownership of ghosts and gods with Prajna + Shikigami + Sword + Thunder is too strong. Although it looks like that meal replacement, I still look forward to the follow-up

There are various reasons for becoming a god in this book, but they are all rejected by the author himself. As a bookworm of more than ten years, my threshold is very high. The plot, characterization, main plot arrangement, training system, and conflict arrangement of this book are all remarkable. Author, you just want to be lazy. How can there be so many good things about wealth and freedom without being tired?

The author's writing is pretty good, and he is a mature writer with his own style and ideas. At this stage of the book, the book should use its strengths and avoid its weaknesses. The author's writing of the interaction between the male and female protagonists is very interesting, but the interaction between the protagonist and the supporting characters is not satisfactory. The author should put more thought into this aspect of the plot. 👍 The last word of advice is not to let the protagonist be too far away from the readers. Add some interesting inner drama to the protagonist without affecting the coherence of the plot. Writing hundreds of chapters is not a problem. 😎

The overall pace is slow. On average, half of a chapter is about setting. There are large jumps between words, and the connection is not natural enough. In addition, the author will occasionally be awkward in certain places, and the slightly pretentious writing style makes people feel a little embarrassed, but the overall flaws are not concealed, and it is not a big problem to jump and read. If you can keep updating, you will still read it to the end.

I went, but no one watched it, and no one stole the pirated version, so I had no choice but to come over and watch the original version.

I don't quite understand what is the charm of Lilizi At the beginning, there was a setting that she would become soft and cute without the sword, but she has never been seen again except for her first appearance And now she has become a real bitch, and she is obsessed with confidence all day long, she really feels like a brother She can't really be the heroine, right?

Let's turn the Hundred-Eyed Ghost into a lolita! Since the race can be changed, it is naturally easy to change the gender. I want to see the protagonist's serious face. Transforming into a loli, a disapproving look is the most suitable. It will not ruin the character and satisfy everyone's hobbies. ... The plot of the transformation is different😠 ... Only the plot of the transformation is different——! 😡 The plot of turning into a girl... Is different from any other content. 😌 Because the plot of transforming into a loli is... Very interesting. Just thinking about it makes me excited. That was the most exciting episode in the world... I didn't want to miss it. 🤗 … … … If Ounei doesn't change into a loli again…Wadaxi😭