Abyss Invasion, I Have the Legendary Taoist Priest Profession

I can't understand your introduction. 100 Million people are selected every year, and the protagonist's identity is exposed and snatched away? So the world where the protagonist lives has a population of one trillion? ? ? ? ?

It's too long-winded, and it's more than ten chapters worth of nonsense about summoning a skeleton (not counting what I saw and didn't see later). It's a skeleton that won't die, and its experience increases when killed, and the cost of summoning is not high. In the end, the protagonist said he couldn't bear to let it die, hahahahaha

Generally speaking, it's okay to pass the time, but the interaction with the skeleton always has the feeling that the author is underage and has no brains, or the author is underage and thinks that the readers have no brains... Wouldn't you like to play the game well? So I miss my student days. You can just start in the academy, so I can leave directly. Forget it, stop scolding, it's boring, let's go.

How can I put it? The setting was quite attractive to me at first, but in the end, I kept talking to myself, and Rory was so sarcastic that I couldn't stand it anymore. .

He is particularly verbose and talks a lot, and can repeat one thing three times or more... The character of the protagonist can be referred to the weakened version of Tang Xiaosan

The author keeps thinking and talking to himself. It should be the first time he writes a novel.

Write less about reality. If you want to do it, do it. If you don't want to do it, refuse to do it. Be decisive. Who wants to read it?

Find a good subject and write it like this

If someone kills you, it is a heinous crime. If you accidentally kill someone else, it means the other person's life is bad. This author's views are so distorted.

I don't understand. Forget the verbosity of the skeleton, what do you mean by hesitating for a few chapters on a woman? Whether you like it or not like it or just say a word, you are an abyss walker. You said you can marry as many as you want, and you don't plan to be a eunuch. What are you doing here?

We don't know who gave these people the courage to write about people's hearts. If you don't have the writing skills, don't write about intrigues and intrigues. It would look like a primary school student.

There is nothing wrong with the topic selection and the structure of the worldview The protagonist has traveled through time, and then inherited the cause and effect of being killed from his predecessor, and is now in hiding But this book is very wordy, every little character has a name, and they have a lot of thoughts in their hearts. Even a skeleton baby can write three pieces of clothing to buy it. You want this skeleton to be your father and let him go to school well, right? It looks like something written just to make up for the word count. It's very wordy and makes me sleepy. I don't recommend it at all.

The protagonist behaves logically like a primary school student. Both childish and a bit silly.

I came to see the legend 🙂, not to listen to the chatter. I'm not happy. Goodbye.

The pressure on the pig's feet makes me sick to death. Forget it, I can't see it.

What are you writing about? The plot of Ji Fei didn't even develop at all, just the repeated intrigues.

The theme is good, quite novel, legendary skin + soul time travel + semi-master god-chosen call flow + portable system + dual system + modern super blue star world view. I haven't seen Legend Pi's novels listed in the category recommendations on the Qidian web version for about two years. People who like them should like them very much. 1️⃣I won't discuss the plot first. First of all, the world view is very grand but does not throw out a bunch of settings. It is well done to attract people. The protagonist's background is explained very clearly, starting from the smallest details, and there are also foreshadowings behind it, which is also good. In the beginning, you fight zombies in the city, which feels a bit like the dark summoner mode. Fang Fang, a vampire, dreams back to 15 years ago. At first glance, the fighting scene looks like nothing. It doesn't matter if the author is not good at it and he won't make mistakes if he doesn't write it. 2️⃣But the three-dimensional portrayal and external personality expression of the characters are really bad. I have only seen 40 chapters, and only about 3-5 supporting characters appear, which is good. The characteristics of the characters are also shown, which is also good. But their appearance and exit have no impact on the protagonist. For example: the supporting character named Tian's performance in the article is even more inexplicable. From being close to the protagonist when doing dirty work at the beginning, to proactively proposing to go back to look for the protagonist, and then becoming alienated later, what is the significance of this character? Is there any branch plot behind him? Does it mean someone has a change of heart? Has the protagonist learned a lesson? In addition, the author likes to intersperse a lot of soliloquies, profiles and psychological descriptions. Alas, water, I can't see the meaning of such a supporting role at all. 3️⃣The protagonist, the Lone Ranger, has nothing to interact with and only interacts with the skeleton he summoned. It's too watery, the writing is too detailed, there are too many psychological descriptions, profiles, and speculations, and it feels like it's just watery. The last book I read that was so bad was the Super Dimensional Warlock. It took 5 years to write. How many months has passed since the plot? (Probably?) You can intersperse one or two small exchanges of a few hundred words in one chapter, but you have to write about the interaction with the skeleton in several consecutive chapters (emphasis added), and this interaction is one-way. The main reason is that there is no sense of humor (go check out Black Sail, Crazy Lich), one-way communication (interacting with ordinary skeletons with the "mentally retarded" entry is a failure), and the endless template characterizations make people feel like they are stuck in their throats. You can definitely learn from the vixen in the new book with big eyes. She can remove her ears and have a multi-functional tail. The supporting characters should have their own characteristics (emphasis added) and be vivid and distinct. Only when the supporting characters interact with each other will readers not feel bored. 4️⃣The Legend Leather Sleeve is too rigid, and the settings that completely copy the level and skill requirements of the Legend game are too rigid. There are also 20 experience requirements for level 7-8, and experience requirements for level 30 upgrades, which gives the impression that the level is low and the combat power is suppressed (especially the excessive experience at level 7-8). Isn't it good to use the experience attenuation mechanism to lower the level? Also, you wrote that you can use 10,000 points to learn the mage's fireball technique. Why don't you learn it? Is it because the level is not enough? Chapter 40, I have only seen a few functions of the two systems, which are the attribute bar, skill bar, mall, and a little career setting. . No, buddy, you have already written the system, but the functions of the system have not been clearly demonstrated. Skill levels, upgrades must be clear, and there must be obvious improvements. Semi-gamification, semi-master flow, and semi-portable system flow are all written in this way. It is really frustrating that your skill proficiency is suppressed and cannot be brushed, and powerful skills are not available. . Skills, a lot of useless potions dropped, skill proficiency cannot be refreshed, and monsters have to be purchased in the system. Monsters in the main world do not drop any drops, but only summoned monsters do. The most important thing is that there are no fighting scenes. It is not fun to watch Goudao Liu, and the writing is uncomfortable. The author is very good at it. 5️⃣Here is an opinion and a book that provides reference: To write a game copy, you can definitely find a book of the same type. I think it is good. The most important thing that this book lacks is the sense of fun! ! Game for All: The book that started hanging up at the zombie apocalypse. There are many small events in its book and the plot advances quickly. In this way, readers will not seize on the loopholes in your worldview, or the fact that you are so bored that you pretend to be a skeleton and go to school; instead, your boring self-talk and psychological description take up half of the chapter, and the other half is just a throwaway setting. This will only drive readers away. When it comes to professions, warriors, mages, and priests are meaningless. A huge blue star with a population of trillions. Give me the entire old-fashioned Western fantasy setting from 15 years ago + the built-in legendary Taoist priest system. Beaver? Is the setting of the muscle mechanic bad? If you want to write about companions, Director Wei's book is good. If you copy the legend later, it will be meaningless. It's not that it's badly written, but it's really old-fashioned. When writing entries and skills, I really don't target Master If I write values, it's structure wizard When I write system fusion, another world is the game mode

Really ink stains. Can you imagine that buying a piece of clothing can cost two chapters?

Rory, what are you looking at? I threw it away.

I'm really speechless. You can still watch the Taoist priest upgrade at the beginning. Later on, I started to let myself go. It was just a running account and nothing to see. Give it up, bye bye

If anyone has subscribed, please tell me how the girl is doing in the published content. Is the protagonist still that pretentious?

Well written! Wait for the update! I'll give you 7 and 13 months first! The author quickly coded the words! Otherwise, the Dacheng spell will be rewarded to you!

I saw Chapter 58 and I can't stand it anymore. It's rubbish.

Don't watch it, it's very witty

Don't you have any manuscripts at all? These few chapters are just for support.

Vote for you, come on and update.

Ten monthly tickets, please update

It's a legend, just cut it off, it's nonsense

Once my style changed, I wanted to win over a woman, but I immediately lost interest and stopped reading.

That's so mean. Is this protagonist a modern person?