Douluo Jueshi: Fainted at Xiao Huo's Parents' House at the Beginning

Little Huo Niang

For those who don't quite understand the book, I'd like to introduce the main plot of this book. The author and I have been friends for many years, and he doesn't want to talk about this, so I'll tell you. This book has a total of 7 main lines, so the plot will be more complicated. Let me list them first. 1 The Huo Yuxi line is currently being pushed, and there will be dozens more to come later 2 The Li Rui Wangdong line, a love line, is relatively short, and should be pushed through in a dozen pictures. 3 For the Gu Yuena line, there are currently a few pieces pushed, which will be linked to the main line later. 4 The main line of the main body is related to the soul beast. There are about twenty chapters, maybe . 5 The third line of Tang Dynasty will be opened after Huo Yuxi is finished in the mid-term. Currently, there is only one extra chapter to pave the way. 6 Li Rui's line is another line given to Li Rui. It seems that Li Rui is the author's biological son. 7 The line of the Holy Spirit is the core line of this game. The other six lines all revolve around this line and are also related to the ending. That's all for now, there may be new main lines in the future, so stay tuned.

Little Huo Niang

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Regarding these recent films, I can clearly feel the author's current problems. The plot is not compact enough, each picture has too much content, meaningless fighting descriptions, unbalanced plot rhythm, broken characters, the protagonist is too thin, not fleshed out enough, has no character arc, and is false. Let's talk about what should be done next. First, quickly start the main plot, and temporarily cover up the shortcomings through the excitement of the main plot. Then reduce the number of fighting descriptions. This does not mean that you cannot write, but you must choose the right time. Finally, write the character line and flesh it out. That's all.