Hogwarts: The Beginning of a Wizard's Cultivation Method

The subject matter has great potential, but unfortunately the writing has a little room for improvement, and the time jumps are a bit too random. I feel like I might consider practicing writing. It would be nice to restart this book after I finish practicing.

Wizards and cultivators can be said to be the most powerful and broad manifestations. They have magic and spiritual power and can directly skip the problem of materials. It can be said that the more knowledge, the stronger the strength! After dividing the advanced training system and constructing many multi-academy learning systems that have been eliminated at all levels, if the wizard system forms a civilization, relying on hundreds of years of theoretical technology and those legendary wizards (scientists) standing at the top of the pyramid can directly push it to the level of third and fourth level civilization in the shortest time. The higher the theoretical technology is, the stronger the wizard civilization will be.

Except for the writing style, everything else is very good.

I just saw a little girl die after eating magic food. I feel like the weird radiation wizard setting is put on the Harry Potter wizard. The magic will never disappear and will cause the death of Muggles. Aren't those who marry wizard wives like the Chosen Melon wrapped in magic every day? He would be risking his life by fighting for his son's mouth. Those places where Muggle shielding spells were cast would have people and animals exterminated.

But the content is neither materialistic nor romantic. So it doesn't attract me very much

It takes twenty-one days to brew Polyjuice Potion, and it takes twenty-one days of correct and repeated practice to form a habit This is the Twenty-One Day Rule A Muggle traveled thousands of miles to Hog Woz, find a girl, then ask her to help you brew Polyjuice Potion, and ask to accompany you during the process Oh my god, I only know that you are chasing to become a wizard, otherwise I would think you are confessing.

I've finished reading it. The idea is really good. It looks good. It's a pity that the writing is in vain.

Although Harry Potter is a children's book, it is not a problem if it is too childish.

The subject matter is good, but the writing is so poor that I have no desire to read on. Especially the three golden chapters, there are no plot points that catch the readers' attention, and it can even be said to be weak.

The ideas are good, but many of the plots are not rigorous and a bit intellectually depressing.