Be Invincible from Lizhu Cave Heaven!

Big guys like Jian Lai are all wandering around in the novice village, as if the center of the world is Chen Ping'an. Even the sword master of the fifteenth level has to admit that he is an ant. From here, it is not difficult to see what the story is. 😁 This kind of ancient crooked-mouthed dragon king + sadistic version of Shura God of War is suitable for friends who like to read cool articles.

This is really fucked up. Where did you get your rebirth? If you are aboriginal, this is even more ridiculous. If you travel through time and don't know the plot, you don't know anything. Just know the name of a sword. The rest don't even know a thing. Isn't this nonsense? Isn't this?

If you don't vote and I don't vote, when will the author come forward? If you don't read it and I don't read it, who is the author writing the book for? Recommended monthly pass, the stuff is good, the author has read it and people have added it. Encourage criticism and give more suggestions so that the author can be motivated. Collect and read, the price keeps rising, the author will not run away after signing the contract. Thousands of rivers and mountains are always full of love, can you leave some footprints? ∗︎˚(*˃̤൬˂̤*)˚∗︎

Didn't the protagonist travel through time? Why does it feel like he doesn't know the plot?

If you accept all the girls, it will be in vain if you give them away (my younger brother is no exception). Unknown supporting characters can be given as gifts, but the well-known ones are of course your own. I don't like self-discipline articles.

? ? ? You have read so many chapters, I don't know what you wrote is so messy,,,,

I read a few chapters and found it strange. The characters and backgrounds are so different from the original work.

Jian Ma gave it away, and the book was gone after she vomited it.

I suggest the author re-open a new book. The first three chapters are extremely poisonous, but the second chapter is completely inconsistent and the character is completely divided. Have you never dealt with it?

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I've only read the first three chapters, but I still feel like there's something wrong with it. First of all, has the author actually read the original work? How come Ruan Qiong has known the protagonist for ten years? Secondly, Jianlai's book is to be written as a fanfic, and it doesn't mean that it's just like the Dragon King. Book lovers may not like it or Taoist friends may not buy it. Arranging the protagonist to be Chen Ping'an's relative, to be honest, felt that this was the most difficult thing to write. Because the original book begins with Chen Ping'an's suffering. The above are only my personal views on Jianlai and his fan works.

I've never seen Ning Yao talking to the protagonist. He called me "Brother Changsheng" and it made my scalp go crazy. It felt very character-breaking 😥😥. Can't we just call the protagonist Chen Changsheng normally? Isn't it possible to call the protagonist by his full name to express a sense of intimacy? 😥

The first quarter of the anime has ended. If the author has not read the original work of Jianlai, the follow-up questions will be very troublesome, because many details are completely wrong, including the first part. There are many pitfalls. The old eunuch's actions were calculated by the national master behind him, and the Wang family is not an anime at all. In that case, to put it bluntly, I am not afraid of Zhengyang Mountain at all. There is a backstage. At most, it is just a one-time event. As for Caixia Mountain, unless you leave the cave and go directly to the 10th realm, there is no talk of destroying it. Also, the book itself is pure love. If you write about the harem, it is the way to die.

The writing is okay, but there are many language errors, and the setting of the fierce god feels a bit out of place. Old man Yang seems to be the East Prince of the old heaven, there is no reason why he can't recognize it.

You dare to accept Ning Yao, what you wrote is really heartless

I'm stuck on this one.

I don't understand. I don't know if the protagonist has any memory about Jian Lai. I look at it for a while and then don't.

Since we have written about the lotus and the world of swords, let's write about the Green Lotus Sword Immortal. To this day, the author is still tempted to use ✊. The only reason why humans are different from animals is that they have learned to use "weapons".

To be honest, I don't blame you if the writing is not good. I just blame the setting of Jianlai for being too awesome. The worldview and twists are not something ordinary people can control, so it's not easy to write Swordsman fan fiction.

Why is the male protagonist treating Cui Dongshan so badly, not knowing that he will become his brother Chen Pingan's disciple in the future, and shouldn't the male protagonist find more allies now instead of making enemies everywhere?

Personally, I feel that Li Liu and Chen Pingan are better together. Chen Pingan is close to everyone and Chen Changsheng is the elder brother. How could he not find a wife for his younger brother? It would be best if he added He Xiaoliang or Xiaobaoping. After all, Chen Pingan is too tired in the original work. As an elder brother, he can help him deal with those 1415 mirror bosses. Chen Pingan can solve small problems by himself so that he can grow up.

This is the only Jianlai fanfic

I'm a little confused. Isn't the male protagonist a time traveler? Moreover, where the male protagonist's skills and skills come from are not written, and he doesn't even know how to practice the skills.

It would be better to add a water god Li Liu as the heroine.

The author has not seen Jian Lai. He is determined to urge Dongshan to do something. The truth is that it was not Cui Han who killed Mr. Qi, but someone else.

Personally, I suggest that the male protagonist, Ning Yao, the former woman who raped his younger brother Chen Pingan, should compensate Chen Pingan and find him a fiancée. Personally, I feel that one of the water gods, Li Liu or He Xiaoliang, is best suited to Chen Pingan. Li Liu is the water god, and He Xiaoliang has a deep blessing.