Coiling Dragon's Twelve Golden Saints

The entire story is in a state of being involuntarily, and life and death throughout the story are in the hands of others, which shows that the protagonist is too stupid to do anything he doesn't want, and his survival depends entirely on the coincidences arranged by the author. They are all mechanical coincidences. Any idiot knows how to keep developing. Without the author's arrangement of coincidences, he has died countless times. The result is that the plot has no logic!

Why do you always have to gamble your life when you have a golden finger? At the fourth level, you have to gamble your life to plan the dragon egg. After the twelve opportunities, you must first find someone who can barely use it. Isn't it better to get closer to the sanctuary and then take risks? And when you are weak, human society is definitely safer and has more opportunities. A pharmacist can poison several ninth-level warriors. Isn't it easy to mess around in human society?

In the original work, no one has so many clones. If they are not hidden, they will be easily targeted by all the main gods. The plant clone can disguise itself as someone else and secretly obtain the godhead. Since god clones can switch races, each clone can be given the identity of a super divine beast. The dark type's first choice is the god-eating rat. After the Destiny System, there is also a Will Power reward for ten consecutive victories in the plane battlefield. It is almost invincible. Can it still be written in the Linley Era?

I don't know if it's just me, but I always felt that this book seemed a bit confusing. . .

This book is written in a confusing way and is not enjoyable to read. No wonder it is so popular.

There is no Great Perfection among the nine main gods. They are pure waste.

The text is too jumpy. In fact, the plot design is very good, but it is too jumpy to understand. The way the plot looks in the author's mind is different from how it is written, dear

It's too hard to watch, I really can't stand it

The biggest problem with this book right now is the transition. In fact, there is no problem with the transition, but after you transition, the person who picks up the protagonist is actually in the third person, and he is very confused.

The plug-in idea is awesome, but it is not suitable for the world of Panlong. This world is suitable for mutation, and technology cannot do it. If you have this idea, you can write other articles that are worse than this one. It is better to finish it as soon as possible.

It's pretty good. Come on, update more, so that everyone will be motivated to give you monthly tickets or something.

It's too much to write in one dungeon, so finish it quickly. With this plug-in, other laws will become gods as soon as possible. It's so cool to upgrade the dungeon.

The characters appear too frequently, and few are explained clearly, making it confusing. If I can't write so many characters, I'll describe the ones with more plots and introduce them clearly. Those characters who have only shown one side of the story don't suddenly participate in the plot. There is no characterization yet. Who knows what this character is like. You frequently use new characters that are not introduced clearly, and you don't even know who the supporting character you wrote is. You must be clear when you write, after all, you know it in your heart, but the readers who read it will be very confused and don't know the situation of these characters.

No, when the protagonist is fighting 1 against 6, it should be 5 and the main god's clone together, right?

Finished, vote. 🤓🤓🤓

To be honest, the front is fine, but the back is a dog💩

The imagination and plot design are good, but the writing style is a bit uninteresting. Come on more

There are too many typos and the punctuation is sometimes confusing. It must have been uploaded without checking, which somewhat affects the reading experience.

Is there a strength gap between the mid-level God Ling-Rong Three Mysteries and Ling-Rong Five Mysteries? Or is it just a matter of means? Does fusion of alien mysteries and the use of fusion divine power require soul mutation?

You calculated it wrong. The lower god of the three series has only 1.6 More power of will and cannot beat the middle god.