After the Slam Dunk Injury

The author's writing style is really novice, and he must continue to improve it. The subject matter is good, and more content can be added. Take the emotional line for example. There are obviously not many emotional scenes with the heroine. You only write about how to help, but not much psychological activities. For example, what causes the two parties to have psychological activities, such as giving knee pads. You should describe more about the psychological activities of the male protagonist, and write about the female protagonist's own activities, such as shyness. If it is just a simple confession, it will not make any sense to others. And the relationship is progressing too fast, so I should write some dating scenes before confessing my feelings. Then there is the basketball aspect, which is too bland. Hisashi Mitsui is injured. You can completely write about the psychological struggles of the characters, such as feeling powerless when making a breakthrough, and feeling frustrated when being put down by the opponent. The charm of Xiaosan's character is that she refuses to admit defeat in the face of difficulties, and constantly overcomes her inner self-esteem and practical difficulties. However, everything goes too smoothly for the protagonist, causing Xiao San's character halo to completely disappear. The same is true for games. The specific point to be written is not to make a three-pointer with just a feint. The specific point is that the mistress feinted when facing the opponent's shot, successfully deceived the opponent, and then exploded the ball and stepped back to shoot and made the three-pointer. This will give readers a sense of the picture. Moreover, the slam dunk timeline is in the 1990s, and many modern basketball technologies have not been developed and can be fully utilized. To put it bluntly, if the author's writing style does not improve, this book will be out of date very quickly, within a few months.

Live a new life in the book, and you should not live like a "clear soup with little water"! Basketball doesn't have off-court news, gossip, or romantic encounters... Why does it become the world's three major basketball games? In particular, the NBA has countless off-court elements that make it the world's number one basketball league. When these are stripped away, readers will subscribe based on selling emotions in the early stage, but subscriptions will become less and less in the future. To write sports articles, you have to be able to write about gossip and off-field factors, otherwise sports articles will actually be boring! ! The Kardashian family has never harmed a player, and there has never been any scandal about marrying a player. Starting with Odom, there has never been a time when a player cheated on his wife, went out to nightclubs to drink, did not train, and even had parties with ulterior motives after getting married. In the end, the paparazzi media in the United States all There were no secret photos of them fooling around, but our fans gave them all kinds of insulting nicknames, describing them as people like Daji, Yang Guifei, and Feiyan Hede who brought disaster to the country and the people. Attributing all the decline of a player to the problems caused by them is a complete soft-hearted mentality! ! ! 411 funny Wang Xiaozhan who spends his life to digest data. Yossi, Diving Luo, Luo Dan, the little giant Larry Bird, Barkley, Drexler who felt that he was not good in his career, whether there are championships or not, which one will spend his life to get the data? Let's just talk about basketball. I played baseball for two years. After the second three consecutive championships, even if I don't win the championship, I don't retire. Is it easy to endure 511? Many Douyin netizens like to use 411 traffic, but 411 will always use braised egg traffic! After playing Slam Dunk for three years, I suggest you take your talent to the NBA so that you can write a great book. Otherwise, each book will be 56,000,000 words long. Don't you need to buy cigarettes every now and then? How could it be written as a great god🤔

You really don't get tired of writing 😅

I really want to read it. I will talk about the shortcomings after three chapters. It is too bland. The plot and the author's expression ability are really too bland. This is a matter of writing. I hope the author can improve his writing skills. See you again.

How should I put it, too bland. It feels like a running account, and the writing style needs to be improved. And at least the climax comes on the hour, otherwise it would be boring to keep running through the whole process.

Otherwise, I must contribute to the team list... Just having no names... Is too awkward.

A Mitsui with incomplete injuries looks unhappy!

The writing is good. I like Slam Dunk and Hisashi Mitsui. Come on!