Taoyuan Fairy Mansion

There seems to be no distinction between these names. I'm confused.

The type that is tasteless when eaten, is a pity to throw away, and just goes with the flow.

Write less family stories. We are watching the protagonist slowly become an immortal, like Han Li, instead of pretending to be a mortal and write family stories. Even dogs don't read family stories.

In this sect, every day when entering, the high-level boss scans his consciousness and finds that the door is locked and no one is inside. After observing, he doesn't act immediately.

1 Did the one named Song die like this? Even if you write that he was killed when he went out, it would be better, or you could poison him and say that he died because he went crazy. It would be too bad if he died within the sect and there is no explanation. And the sect behind the one named Chen who was sent to Daping Village by the sect's outsiders didn't send anyone to investigate? If people are killed casually without sending anyone to investigate, where is the majesty of the sect? 2 Also, is this a family story? You have spent so much time describing the family, and you have made three surnames form a family and then spent so many resources on cultivating it from scratch. . . . Are you planning on having the main character be a nanny? He is only at the third level of Qi Refining 🤔 and if he causes trouble later and runs away, what will happen to the family? You've made both those who like reading family stories and those who don't feel silent. 3 There is also a mortal heroine who appears out of nowhere 🤔 How do you plan to arrange it? Are you taking her to cultivate immortality? 4 The worst points are only the above three for now, the others are pretty good. If you write a good book about a single person cultivating immortality, it is easy to write a masterpiece. If you don't understand the family culture, don't get involved in it. Later, Liu Qingyuan will feel that his career is hopeless and just go back to look after the family.

The themes of this book include management, farming, ordinary people, and group portraits. Business people have it, mortals have it, but the group portraits have not been seen. What about farming? The protagonist's biggest Golden Finger Fairy Mansion is basically just a decoration. The protagonist was originally promoted through farming, but as a result, the land was not cultivated and became ruined by practicing every day. I learned how to make talismans in the past and then completely lost it. Then why did you learn how to make talismans? You write whatever comes to mind, and it completely deviates from the theme. Sometimes the protagonist's role is basically dispensable. This kind of writing cannot retain readers, and I really can't stand it anymore. Sorry to bother you, I wish the author better and better.

Good news: A round of recommendations is here. Bad news: The new book list and smart promotion are gone. Thank you to the book friends who helped me to read it. Please keep me in mind in the next week. I also hope that the new book friends will read it. Whether the book will be put on the shelves with 200,000 words, 300,000 words, or it will be recommended to be put on the shelves, it all depends on you, thank you!

My brother's name is Shunliu, Tao Baichen's brother's name is Liu Qingyuan

Book lovers, please don't keep books. Please read them every day and take care of the little seedlings. This book is a traditional cultivation of immortality and farming, with new fighting settings and professions added! The rhythm is slow, no system and no panel.

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Many of the protagonist's reactions are the same as those of ordinary people. Many people will not like the protagonist.

The standard mortal flow can be said to be the template of the mortal flow. It's not bad at all, but it feels too standard. I've watched too many mortal flows. This is the only mortal flow that I feel I can learn from and copy.

I haven't watched it yet, but I would like to know what level of Qi training the protagonist is at now?

Come on, author

As long as you don't write family stories, your book will basically become popular. You can use family stories as a springboard in the early stage. If you don't know how to write, you can read Haoyu Zhenxian for reference.

The main character and supporting characters are all male, and I immediately lost my desire to watch it.

There is a male protagonist and a protagonist. What does this mean?

Why can't my account invest in new books now? Isn't it possible to invest in new books after just ten minutes of reading? I've been reading for half an hour and there is no movement. Can anyone tell me? Thanks

The protagonist has a lot of connections with the people in the village. Is this going to be about a family story?

The current literature on cultivating immortals is too serious about killing and killing. They just go at it with weapons and magic tools, and there is no trace of immortality at all! It's ordinary farming, the plot comes naturally, and articles that don't deliberately advance are rare! I feel like the only fairy-like article now has to be Kissing Fingertips. His fighting skills are full of fairy spirit.