Traveling at the Same Time: My Name Resounds Throughout the Heavens

Let me read about my feelings. I am a first-time reader. After reading about 10 chapters, I gave up. Author, your writing style is too literary, and it makes people feel like it has faded while reading. The author listens to my advice. With the way you write, you might still be considered a good man 10 years ago. But now, you can only follow the trend of the times. The feeling of being crushed by a person is that even though Wudi Wen crushed you, you didn't write about it. You didn't fully write out the conspiracy theory or the behind-the-scenes feeling of dominating the novel. It was like a cutscene. I didn't even know what the plot was about, so you just skipped it. When people read it, just about 10 chapters, one feels as if they are listening to what God is saying, ~What are you writing about~~. I finally understand why there are 1.6 Million words and not even a monthly pass. Author, let me share my feelings with you. When you write a book in the future, you will either write about the feeling of an invincible crushing novel, or you can write about the feeling of behind-the-scenes conspiracy theory to the extreme. It is still a bit too uncomfortable to be neither good nor bad.

Isn't this the man who gave Eri clothes to Lugou again and is still busy behind the scenes?

Apart from the founder, there is no one who is not a supervisor.

I suddenly felt that the reason why Dead Fire Sea was popular back then was because the names were easy to remember. Many of them still couldn't remember the names after watching them many times. The pirates' names were hard to remember but they took the initiative to give them easy-to-remember nicknames. The Shinigami just remembered the numbers. The Hokage just kept calling out the names and remembering them repeatedly. The names of the Holy Grail kings are so cute that it gives them a headache.

The first dozen or so chapters of this book were criticized too quickly by book friends. I can't help it. I always wrote this just to attract readers. First let the readers guide you on how to write most of the world, if anyone is interested. After reading more than 20 chapters, you will find that I am deliberately slowing down the pace. Basically, the pace in the future will be to either end a world, or to break off and change the world at a major event node in the world. So, don't scold me for writing too slowly when the time comes~

Tsunade is the only one left among the Senju. Where are the other clansmen? They have already been captured by Konoha F4 for human experimentation.

I'm really annoyed by this simultaneous time-traveling. I recommend several books every day, which are banned and unbanned, and appear frequently. The settings are all the same. You don't need to read this book to know this. Every time you finish writing a world, you change the world and write the protagonist. The key is that the same person is the same, or you can create a chat group to share talents and so on. The author can write which world he wants to write, the main line? Does not exist

The word "comely" is used. The protagonist of One Piece is over 2m tall. If you don't write a domineering face, you write a comely one.

Author, would you like to read the title of your book? To be honest, the 99 flow you wrote is neither irritating nor unpleasant. The title of the book is "Resounding Through the Heavens", and the content is all about the vests and the masterminds behind the scenes. There is no pretense. No matter how strong you are, you will always be submissive. I'm also speechless. If you're a 99-level player, you're so scared. When you're done, just go out and show off. If you can't beat them, just hide in the space. What are you afraid of? For example, Naruto and Pirates, you are almost invincible. If you don't mind, just put on a vest, and you can fight them openly and kill what you deserve, so there is nothing to be afraid of. The plot is to become stronger → put on a vest → become stronger. What about the climax? Let me ask you about the climax. For most novels, the climax is a show-off moment, and 99 Liu brings these climaxes together and uses very short foreshadowing (most of the foreshadowing has already been done in the original work) to show off the most exciting moments. It's not that I can't read Gou Daowen. For example, I have subscribed to all of Wen Chao Gong's recent novels, but they explained Gou from the beginning, and there are climaxes, but they are not particularly ups and downs. Talking about vests, there is no vest that you do like this. Others use the vest to cause trouble/pave the way for the main body to show off, or the vest to show off and then the main body suppresses the waistcoat to make it even bigger. What's the status of your novel now? The writing is okay, there are not many poisonous points, the plot is propulsive, the plot is reasonable, the protagonist is normal to become stronger, and there is almost no suppression and failure. However, the plot is too bland, too flat, there is no climax at all, resulting in it being like a useless piece of food, it is a pity to discard it.

The most important question is whether Shuangwen is unhappy. Too much planning. The beginning of the game is just a little better. Your Jiujiu Liu is fully shared, even worse than others that are not fully shared.

The sea of ​​dead fire is too dense, and there is no new life. As a time traveler without the innovative thinking of modern people, it is better to let the world feel the pain of the Chinese version of Naruto

Just know the world written in the introduction, pure💩

It seems like he likes to do things that are superfluous and for nothing.

Could it be that there are so few people who like to return to the world after reading so much?

The pace is ridiculously fast. The most important thing about Tongchuanliu is to embody the power system of this world and how to selectively integrate into the power system of another world after sharing. Then we mainly select more than ten main worlds as the main branches and describe them in batches, while lightly adding other worlds as supplements. There is no main world in this book, the pace is too fast and chaotic! ! I feel that according to the current situation, the book will collapse if it reaches 400,000 words at most! PS: The golden finger of this book is too big. It is destined that the power system of this book is too confusing and the author's writing power cannot be mastered. I suggest you read the 99th-rate Duke's book, the originator. This book does not throw all the powers together at once, and the rhythm is also very good.

Dragon Clan... I don't want to see it too much.

I think 99-flow should have one world per volume, with 20 or 30 chapters per volume. This way, the story line will be long, and the plots will be well developed and connected without being confusing. Changing the world after four or five chapters is too confusing, and I can't help but want to jump to another chapter.

I got a headache from reading the Dragon Tribe chapter and the One Man chapter, each in its own way. It's obvious that the author of the Dragon Clan chapter really wanted to express the adolescent arrogance of the original text, but his literary skills are not enough to write something completely different. The one-person chapter made me sleepy and I skipped it. The writing is bloated and inconsistent with the original work. It's terrible 🙂

After reading the first 3 chapters, I don't want to read anymore. Even though they have different personalities after wearing the same clothes, the names are also different. The readers are tired watching it, and the author is tired writing it. I really don't understand why this setting is made.

This is a book that I click on and don't want to read anymore. I'm just bored.

Memory sharing is poorly written. According to my understanding, it is multiplication, not addition. Total sharing is equivalent to personal experience. Every sharing is the erasure and creation of the previous personality. 5 People, after sharing 2 times, 5*5*2, 50 life experiences, the personality has long been changed beyond recognition. How could it be possible to change just a little bit? This is why this flow method is easy. It is better to write and share and only share the memories you want to share. Changing from multiplication to addition is better and more reasonable.

Sure enough, as long as the author is the author of the starting point, this kind of same-travel novel will be a cultivator in the later stage! Let's start with some anime themes! Invite those who like anime! In the mid-term, come under one person and start cultivating immortality! In the later stage, most of them are covering the sky or prehistoric! I don't understand, what's so good about one person!

The power system of each world is in chaos, there are a lot of messy things, it is a completely self-motivated and retarded article, and the plot is also confusing.

The sassiness is okay, but from the current perspective, it lacks some features, and the later development is a bit taken for granted; overall, it was an excellent mid-to-upper level novel during that period.

The main reason is that the combat power collapsed too quickly. The well-known migrant workers in the manga became invincible during the free period. There was no sense of excitement of development, and there was no horizontal push of invincibility. It was very strange.

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