Rebirth in 2009, Starting from the Mobile Internet

It's a pity to see Chapter 241 I don't know if the author doesn't quite know what the readers want to see. In fact, the previous content is still based on a certain degree of authenticity. The pace is faster and faster as I write. Every exciting point is directly taken away by a simple structural logic of explanation. In fact, there is a lot of content that can fill in the details to stimulate the readers' emotions Various bosses, in order to match the aura of the protagonist, forcibly lower their status and change their status. As a paper person, the protagonist could have been described in a rich way. That kind of unitary expression has been repeated many times in the scenes. In fact, there are many ways to express a feeling But now for those who have read it all at once, there are many repetitions If possible, it is possible to write each feeling in detail, to make the characters full and to make the events reasonable, which may bring a much better experience to the readers.

Seven pictures

The business writing was pretty good before, but suddenly you copied the songs and licked the actors in the entertainment industry. You are a business boss, and you still call each other a sister, which is so low.

In fact, the overall situation is still good, but it is a failure that the pig's feet are kept in the school. . Moreover, the founders of Internet projects must expose the pig's trotters company and the pig's trotters. Entrepreneurship of the kind behind the scenes is not suitable for Internet projects.

Tell a joke, Internet platform founder, to please celebrities

There are no eunuchs in this book. The protagonist written by the author embodies the weakness of human nature to the extreme. This book is no different from the Alliance of Tan Yuan. It is obvious that the competition is going to win, but the result is to surrender directly, merge with the company under the competitor, and let the opponent be responsible for the operation. What is the difference between the Northern Song Dynasty and paying tribute to the Liao Dynasty? The typical Confucian weak-minded begs for mercy, and the master does evil. There are too many other plots that are pretty much the same. In short, this is not a cool novel, it is a typical surrender novel.

If you start a business, start a business and interact with celebrities. Where is your sister? A future Internet giant, connecting with celebrities? What about your sister? Ask Ma Huateng to lower his style.

1. The career line is actually written quite well, but it is too smooth and has no conflicts. If it is written this way, it will basically become a running account until it is put on the shelves. 2. The author tried to add a little conflict to show off, but the effect was not as good as not adding it. It was a bit forced. This book is originally focused on the career line. In fact, there is no need to forcefully show off. Your readers are not here. 3. The emotional line is a pity. The author seems to be unable to understand the meaning of these characters. First of all, when I saw the first female protagonist appeared, I thought it was a dog-licking rebirth + heroine regret flow, this classic and traditional gameplay, but obviously you are not the first female protagonist to regret the flow. It is a pity that you don't use such a good tool. Don't think it is cliché. Nowadays, books with slightly better results are all done like this, because some people like it. Secondly: Let's not talk about how the author wants to portray the heroine. If you get the first heroine so quickly, you will have to play with the emotional scenes later on, without any sense of expectation. So 3 suggestions. 1. Don't let your career line be too smooth. Only by adding conflicts and accidents can you write a long and ups and downs. 2. The tool attribute of the first heroine must be fully utilized. For most novels, the regret of the first heroine is the core motivation that supports readers to catch up with the novel. 3. Emotional scenes must be drawn out. The new heroine should be established to create a character and give readers a sense of expectation. Never take down the heroine. If the sense of expectation is lost, this type of writing can easily turn into a passing novel.

Have a harem and have fun. Just inject some energy, it's weird to find someone from the entertainment industry to be the heroine.

In 2009, I was still ordering alarm clocks, stealing food and parking spaces. . .

It is recommended to adjust the shares of the protagonist's roommate. If financing is needed later, it will be difficult to operate.

I just don't understand. It's a better phone than the iPhone 4, and the starting price is 1,999. What do you think of this assignment? ? ?

The author's ability to write stories is okay, but there is a real problem with the development of the protagonist. He has to do everything. It has only been reborn for more than half a year. Games, game platforms, wolf incubation centers, Weibo, and online shopping are all the protagonists are doing, no matter how much capital they have!       ，，，，，，，，！ At the end of writing, the entire China Mobile Internet is dominated by the protagonist!

Is this book out of date? There are no chapter reviews at all. I can't stand it anymore either. This protagonist has to master everything, and the time is so short, I don't know where he got the time and energy to do it. And now that I'm not good at it, I managed to get a good point during the press conference, Brother Liang Wenfeng, but the climax turned out to be a bit unpleasant and boring. Gone for now.

It's okay to write routines. After all, Internet articles are inseparable from them, and there are a lot of articles in the world! It doesn't matter if there are many routines, as long as the routines are good, book friends won't be able to run away! But, an Internet tycoon, capital, licking women, and the entertainment industry? It's a bit of a drama! Don't you understand the value of a big boss? Friend?

It feels like this book is sewn together, and the level is constantly rising and falling.

It was already too late to develop chips in 2009. There was no chance. The supporting industry itself could not afford it. This was not something that could be afforded by hundreds of billions. Except for national support policies, it would have been in vain. There was still a chance decades earlier.

Can you please stop writing about your ex-girlfriend? You still have to show off to her after more than a hundred chapters. I'm really convinced! How much do you really hate your ex-girlfriend?

The last two chapters are...? Shouldn't we make money and expand the company? If you want to get involved in entertainment, there is no need to write about this inexplicable girl. If you fix Douyin, the entire entertainment industry will kneel down and lick you...

I feel like the author has changed. When I read chapter 230, I started to post awkward posts. Suddenly I became very middle-class, and I started to abuse commas. I wish I had 10 pauses in a sentence, which made people embarrassed. When I read chapter 275, I felt inexplicable. Why did Meizu suddenly become a big enemy? Your 1999 price is a cost-effective mobile phone, and the price difference of your mobile phone is 1000, which is not in the same echelon. Now you have to write about art inexplicably. It's embarrassing to watch.

I feel like the rest of the novel is okay, and some parts feel pretty good, as long as the rhythm is not too outrageous. After all, there are all kinds of urban novels, and there's not much to say. The heroine is Li Xue? Isn't that too much? How can I put it? I'm very unwilling! ! ! There is something wrong with your description. This is a rebirth urban novel, the heroine is a very important one, she has been reborn The protagonist you describe is still so good and talented in business, but the heroine feels that she can't support it. You either don't have a heroine and are purely engaged in business, or you have a harem, and there are more women. But if you are a single heroine, you must stand up. Either she is very beautiful and cute, or she has brains and strength, or she is even ordinary and just average beauty and strength, but if she is described as being unwavering towards the protagonist, giving a lot, being extremely gentle, etc., It is acceptable. That is, the single heroine must have characteristics, either she is extremely good, or she is of great significance to the protagonist and has to pay a lot. But you, the heroine, I only met when I started to gain momentum, and you are a real-life star with pictures. Yes, you are quite beautiful. But this is a rebirth urban business novel, whether it is reality or fiction, can she hold on? If you write about Liu Tianxian, would it be better than her even if you don't describe her very much?

Why are you giving shares? You think the equity is just cabbage, but if you give it, it's also an option. . . . Once you give the shares, you become a co-founder, how will you manage them in the future? . . My previous boss was also a member of the co-founding team of a listed company. He was also given options first, and later the reward ratio was less than 0.5 Points. He was also the only senior engineer on the team at that time who developed Tencent.

In the early stage, I have been seeing investment, e-commerce, Weibo, and mobile phones. I only saw investing in mobile phones and stopped watching. I kept investing. I didn't see how much money I invested or where the money came from. I just felt that the protagonist was pushing me.

You openly contradicted the teacher in class. You are awesome. You started dancing before your rebirth has developed. If your career develops and you jump, I won't say anything. After listening to a few chapters, I was really annoyed. The protagonist kept chatting with his roommate.

It's very interesting. Cheers to the author. I just discovered this book and support it.

The first part was okay, but the middle and later stages were awkward. Discuss ideals with employees and feelings with friends. Talk about everything but money. Let everyone generate electricity for love.

After listening to six chapters, I felt sick. It's a lot of nonsense. There must be so much. After six chapters, the protagonist's first career has not yet been decided. He spent half a day writing college affairs. You can try it. It really made me irritable. Just from the front, you can feel that the character of the protagonist is the kind of person who wants to give everything to him if others are polite to him.

Even the heroine is not too clear and watery!

The writing is pretty good, but I feel like the author can easily be fooled by reading the comments. You can give it a try.

After reading dozens of chapters, there are too many irrelevant plots and descriptions. I wandered here and there. I was doing well in making games and advertising alliances, but suddenly I wanted to cooperate with the forum, and later I started to invest. There were a lot of unknown plots in the middle, and then I didn't know where to go. There is no key goal to start with. At least you have done something, and you are doing other things.