Across the Seven Seas, Start as a Pirate Merchant

The rules on the island were emphasized earlier. In the end, the male protagonist committed a foul and was not killed yet, so it was really hard to watch! Pirates are just trying to protect a dispensable rule. The protected area exists only because of safety. Otherwise, who would come to this island to spend money? ?

The plot is a bit too rushed and dry, and the character of the protagonist is not well established. All I saw was an alcoholic.

How should I put it, it was a bit boring. I only read eight chapters, but I didn't understand anything about the main plot. The protagonist is sent out by the Chamber of Commerce to open up the market, and the boss wants to kill the protagonist. I didn't see any supernatural power at all. When I watch Western Fantasy, don't I just want to see different extraordinary systems? Your dryness means nothing. And the protagonist is also a prostitute! If you open a harem, I can accept it, even if you go to a romantic place, but the people in an island brothel are really hungry.

As long as the protagonist has enough gold coins, the plug-in is almost omniscient. As a result, he becomes a maritime merchant. I really don't know what he thinks. If he just asks where there is a gold mine, won't he become the richest man directly? There must be unowned gold mines in such a big world, and there are also rare objects. This is obviously extraordinary power. This kind of thing is either man-made or born naturally. No matter which one it is, extraordinary power must exist. Just ask how to learn extraordinary power. It is not as powerful as being a sea merchant. I don't know what the author thinks. It feels like the protagonist is hitting mosquitoes with a cannon. It is a pure waste!

After reading five chapters, I took a sip when I had nothing to do. It was a bad wine at that time. A modern person likes to drink it so much. It's really weird that it slipped away.

What I wrote above is pretty good, but you feel soft after seeing a ghoul child? So why don't you abandon the ship in a critical situation? I know you may be trying to lead to the follow-up plot, but this Madonna plot has already conflicted with the male protagonist's character, turning an old captain who has gone through many storms at sea into an indecisive male nanny who doesn't care about the lives of his own crew members.

Western fantasy nautical novel? Come on! ! ! I really like reading this subject! !

It's 80,000 words long. There's no main plot. It's all about conflicts to make up the word count.

I've read Chapter 10 and the writing is pretty good. But I felt so aggrieved that I risked my life to be a maritime trader and depended on others even though I had a pig's foot hanging. It would be safer, more refreshing and more profitable to just become a pirate. In fact, there are many ways to choose from. There are many ways to make money that are safer than this. Why choose this maritime route? The price/performance ratio is so low.

On the surface it looks like there's something there, but if you look closely it's boring.

The character creation, plot setting and even the promotion of the plot in this book are actually not big problems. There are only two main problems. One is to start directly from the captain + the chief steward of the chamber of commerce, because generally speaking, the most enjoyable part of this type of novel (not the best, just the most enjoyable) is the initial stage from starting from scratch to establishing a firm foothold. As a result, the book skips it directly. The other is the hanging problem. This hanging is too embarrassing. It is said to be weak. In this sense, this cheat is even equivalent to omniscience. If it is strong, it will be as if it does not exist. This makes this cheat more like a deus ex machina for the author to find a tool for himself to supplement the plot rather than a help for the protagonist integrated into the plot. This is often the result of being greedy for everything. Instead of setting a cheat that you cannot control with your writing power, it is better to set a cheat with greater limitations but no conditions for use.

Why not just ask how to develop supernatural abilities or quasi-supernatural abilities?

It's very flavorful of the Age of Discovery. It feels like watching a novel version of a live-action movie (Pirates of the Caribbean). The writing is very good. A book of fairy grass

I only read the beginning and would like to ask if there is a transcendent system? To be honest, I don't have the patience to read the history of a mortal's hard work.

The characters are well created and the story is quite exciting. A little bit. In general, novels can be divided into two types. One is the kingly way, where things push people. For example, in the classic stories about mortals cultivating immortality, the protagonists are usually decent people. One is domineering, in which the protagonist is the strategist, usually the villain. In this kind of book, people have to push things forward. This book obviously takes the latter approach. The protagonist also has the Book of Answers, a great planning tool. In the end, it ended up being written in the first way, which was too peaceful. It is better for the protagonist to have more subjective initiative, just like the protagonist in the previous article proposed to give the pirates a piece of news worth ten thousand. Couldn't he have taken down a similar ship himself? When there is a book to succeed, where there is a storm, where there is a shipwreck, where there is treasure, who has talent, what noble is in trouble, what pearl is gathering dust, what is the weakness of the warrior, the weakness of the king... I can think of ten thousand ways for the protagonist to become famous. The protagonist stumbles. It's not that it's not good to write like this, it's good to write like this. The main character is so excited that he flies into the sky. What's the point of the book? But in the current book, it is said that he can open it but cannot? Is he stupid? Either write down the limits of the answer book clearly, or add qualifications. For example, useful information is extremely expensive, for example, the answers given in the book are ambiguous and confusing, for example, how many times can it be used in a day/month. For example, this book is growth-oriented and needs to be developed gradually. For example, the information in this book comes from the protagonist, everything the protagonist sees, hears and knows. For example, using this book will consume other things besides money: life span/luck, etc.

It's so well written, come on 🤓

Seeing that drifting to America is no longer possible, retreat first 😥

Maintain this quality and it will become a classic. Pirates of the Caribbean, if you read it carefully, you just can't get enough of it. Looks like I need to save some. In addition, I look forward to having it translated into English and updated on Qidian International Edition. Foreigners will also like it.

The content feels very similar to a pirate-themed game I played before

Just because of the niche, this monthly pass is really a bit bleak. The author doesn't know if he will stick with it.

I've given it to you, come on

I just saw that you were a mess, c. I thought it was good, but it was a waste of time.

There is still no monthly ticket, but five recommended tickets a day are given to you. Come on, update, it's too slow.

I haven't read it yet, so let me ask, is there any Pirates of the Caribbean content in this one?