Hogwarts: Hufflepuff's White Raven

Unique and a pretty good hp fan

This book should go to female channels, even if it has a male protagonist, it should go to female channels. The attitude towards the details of people and things, and towards oneself, is too weak. I don't have the mentality of a strong person nor the will to become stronger. It's easy to overturn if you follow the trend. It's a typical idea of ​​​​a female channel. The writing is enough but the direction is wrong. It doesn't look good.

1. Why the heroine? How to substitute in this way? Female Channel Book Bar Because I like all kinds of cute girls, and I never take on the role of the protagonist when I read books. I like to read stories, and I care more about interesting stories rather than the protagonists showing off one after another, so of course I followed my own XP system and wrote, and cute girls posted posts with cute girls, which is very good! ——So I will delete similar comments again. I don't like people who say offensive words without even clicking on the text. I don't like people in my comment area. 2. What do you say about updates? It's on the shelves. There will be a lot of updates on the first day. Let's see how much I can burn. Yes, I don't have any saved articles, so I plan to use one night and a whole day to burn myself, and show it to readers who are willing to subscribe. After the first day, I plan to update it every day. It may be due to lack of inspiration or accidental updates. Of course, it is best not to do it. 3. Will it be unfinished if my grades are so bad? I will write it with all my own efforts. As for whether it is a bad ending, readers can freely judge. Of course, if it does not reach 500 orders, I will definitely cut off many branch plots and only keep the main plot that advances quickly. After all, it has to be just right. 4. Banned? Delete comment? I only delete two types of comments. First, don't mention it after I said it. You must post comments about female leads who cannot be included. If you don't respect others, don't expect others to respect you. 2. Attacking and insulting remarks. In addition, the comment area is completely open. Whether you say my writing is bad, whether I comment on the protagonist's mental retardation, or whether the plot is shitty, I will not delete it. I have always adhered to the principle that I have an obligation to protect the readers' right to speak. Of course, it must be my readers first - you can't scold me even if you haven't seen a penny of it, right? That's it, I leave the comment section to you.

I have read quite a lot, such as changing marriage, changing singles, and changing hundreds. I have read them all Personally, I feel that the best way out for transformation stories is changing singles Bianbai and changing marriages are the same. The advantage of changing a hundred is that there will not be big resistance from the audience, while changing marriages can capture the additional audience of novelty-seeking people However, the basic audience base of transformation stories is not very large, so changing singles is better at attracting audiences outside the basic base.

It doesn't feel slow, but long-winded. It's okay if the setting is not a time traveler. After reading Chapter 27, I don't feel like a time traveler. I feel like a fool.

I've been waiting for a weekend and haven't changed the anti-theft at all...

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Let me tell you the original setting: Bella is over 1.85 Meters tall. In the original work, Harry, who is over 1.8 Meters tall, needed extra height to pretend to be Bella. The protagonist and Bella stick together, who is going to be the t?

It's rare to see a fanfic written in this era that still has the heroine Bella. There are also many characters who appear once or twice in the original work. It's very fresh. I'm curious about how to arrange it in the future. It's well written, so go for the author!

The actor's first appearance in the movie, I accidentally saw it when I was browsing the information... This inspired the idea of ​​writing the heroine Bella... What a cute and beautiful girl - I don't think the instant noodle head at the back is good.

Recently, there have been a lot of HP fans who have challenged themselves to write about female protagonists. With fan authors becoming increasingly rare, don't worry about the male protagonist and the female protagonist. Writing well is the most important thing. If there are too few words, just keep it up. Come on.

It's really hard to understand. You either don't update it or you update it properly. When you update, you just reread paragraphs, or the chapters are confusing. It's hard to tell whether you write books for hobby or to make money. If you continue like this, fewer and fewer people will read it, and the data will get worse and worse. The original writing is at a passing level, and it's really boring to keep doing it like this. After reading two more chapters, if it's still like this, just give it up, and I feel a little sad.

I have to say that the author has done a good job. I am a fan of Harry Potter. I have collected about 80 Harry Potter fan books in Qidian. The way and content you wrote are amazing. It doesn't look like the stories in today's online novels. In all my collection, ha Lee's current ranking is probably in the top three. I hope you will keep it up no matter what. I will read it every day from now on. Come on, author👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 I applaud you and thank you☺️. I hope I can bring you more interesting stories!

The most dramatic thing is the title of the last chapter: Is It Over?

Because the previous preschool part was not satisfactory, we made emergency revisions. Currently, four new chapters have been added, plus some minor details have been adjusted... As a result, all chapters have been replaced and changed. Except for the comments on chapters 1 and 2, which are still retained, the chapter comments on other chapters will disappear. Today's update will be written as soon as possible after the changes are completed... I am very sorry.

I'm not a buddy, but I found a book that I liked, and when I came over to look for the original copy, I discovered that you were a eunuch? Poet holds

Is it the main heroine story of HP in the beginning of Heavenly Collapse? It was a very popular theme twenty years ago (over the Green River). At that time, most of the time-travelers were self-reliant and striving types like the protagonist of this article, who had a poor background and did not understand the plot. Today's readers should prefer to read easy cheating articles about people who are familiar with the original works and come from a wealthy family, with systems (especially the magic awakening system), and whose talents are dragon blood or magical animal affinity.

Is it affixed incorrectly or is the anti-theft device forgotten?

I plan to watch it after the episode is over, but I'll tell you, the author, that you won't update anymore.