In Bleach, I'm Not the Evil of This World

You always claim your family has sinful blood, yet you still live in the family home and eat the family's food. When the family needs your help, you say you can't stand the family. You have talent but don't work hard to gain a voice or change the family. You're truly something else.

It's a bit unclear what the story is about; there's no clear focus, and the protagonist's personality isn't well-defined. He does seem somewhat hypocritical. I even think writing someone like Shi Tan would have been better—a pure villain and a fun-loving person. With this one, I really can't figure out what the protagonist is doing; he just spends all his time shopping.

Suddenly I know why: the protagonist's name is Shi Chen (辰), it's all Shi Chen's fault.

This isn't the author's first Bleach book, so hopefully the author will put in more effort. The main family names of the Shihōin clan are Yoruichi, Yūshirō, and Chihiro, which are numbers plus time. The main family name of the Shiba family is Kaien, Ganju, and Kukaku, which are birds. Ichigo's father was from the branch family, so his name was Shiba Isshin. The main family names of the Kuchiki clan are Ginryo, Sojun, and Byakuya—names that contain suggestive connotations.

The Xia Dalu family worked so hard for you, and you just turned around and sold them out? People say your perspective is determined by your own self-interest. You've betrayed your own class. It's disgusting.

The writing is really bad. The protagonist's motives are unclear, his personality is ambiguous, and his actions are illogical. Add to that the lack of any special abilities, and the protagonist is basically inhuman, almost like a mentally ill person. Whether it's for love and justice, the pinnacle of power, transcendence, or even just for fun, there has to be some purpose.

Another guy who doesn't know where he stands; he's just plain stupid.

Author, I suggest you delete or revise the latest two chapters. I used to defend you when people said the protagonist was Tang San, saying it was fine for the protagonist to be a villain. But what you've written now disgusts me. Damn it, you kill your underlings who do things for you? How can you be so hypocritical? If you had killed that Grim Reaper, no one would have said anything.

It's terrible. The early parts were poorly written and unengaging. Even if it stabilizes later, how many people will actually stick with it until the end?

Looking at the novel's title and synopsis, and without even reading the content, my first impression of the protagonist is that he's seriously ill. The title, "I Am Not the Evil of This World," made me wonder what the protagonist had done to be mistaken for a villain. But after reading the synopsis, wow, born into a high-ranking noble family, does he simply believe he has evil blood?