
I Asked You to Drive Ji Jia, but Who Asked You to Drive Ji Niang to Vomit?
让你开姬甲,谁让你把姬娘开吐了
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 81k Words
- Genre
- Sci-Fi
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Ancient Martial Mecha
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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38Chapters
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"That's not how the machine girl works!"
Deja vu
It seems familiar. I saw a cake about a girl driving a racing car before, but I didn't even finish the painting when it was put on the shelf.
It's not a good review, after all, there's not much written. After reading thirty chapters, it gave me the illusion of racing in a mecha. Most people still like to watch mechas fighting when they read mecha stories. One of the books is about racing, but it's different from mecha. Is the idea plagiarized? But racing girls and mecha girls are definitely better for you to write. After all, there are too many mechas to write about and the audience is much larger. 😐 If the follow-up is mainly based on the current slap-in-the-face plot and mecha competitions, I suggest that it be changed. The world view has not been spread out in the early stage and can be changed. Provide some expanded ideas from the author's current article content. First, folk mechas are an ecology, which can be a system for clubs, campuses, and black markets to profit from competitions or select talents. It can also be divided into local areas, core cities, and capitals. There is also the division of personnel after the college competition to distinguish various functional mechas and professional mechas. The second is the description of the official mechas, which are mainly military mechas. If you write a small point, it means a single world, if you write a large point, it means a sea of stars. Combat is the main focus. There can be individual powerful mechas, or there can be cooperative combat mechas. The third is the improvement of intention. You only change the means and methods of mecha competition. This is a new idea and new technology, which can completely lead to the innovation of mecha in the entire world, whether it is functional mecha, competitive or other. This is much better than just writing about the competition. After the qualifying round, you can play the auditions, after the auditions, you can play the qualifiers, after the qualifiers, you can play the preliminary round, after the preliminary round, you can play... And then intersperse various wild games, club games, black market games, betting games..., And even games can also play mecha games. My evaluation is that if this is the case, it is better to start early.
I think this has been written before, has it been reworked?
The feeling of fragmentation is so serious
The feeling of fragmentation is so severe! One day she is a mecha girl, and the other day she is a racing girl!
QQ Speed
I drive a humanoid mecha here (qq speed). 😜😜 This visual sense is too strong.