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Let's take a look at Copper Coin and Qidian's new book. I hope it can surpass the one on Mechanic.

There is no room for a mecha planet. Your planet is so small.

The routine of writing a book is a bit old. It starts with a high school student. In reality, his parents are missing (leaning towards death). Because his parents are taken over by an evil organization, the original person dies. The protagonist travels through time. Gou Dao) (The author can rewrite it, it is interesting, but it is easy to collapse and tests the writing skills, but if it is written well, it can attract readers more (🐶Save life)) Two: The combination of mechanics and martial arts, normal development Summary: A little bit of a routine and old-fashioned food

The beginning of this is very dramatic, and as soon as it comes up, it is self-exposed, how silly is it?

Is it necessary to argue about what to prove in a mock exam? Just curse S13, then tell Shen Zhong and his mother that a lawyer will be waiting for them at the court, and then say to the principal and teachers, "I'm very disappointed in you, see you in the college entrance examination", and then you can go home and play games. He also made a set of test questions to prove it. It was really a rumor that the protagonist planned to run away and break his leg. The problem is that with so many students enrolling students, can the protagonist go home after completing the questions? Come on, author, tell me what you think.

People are on their way to death. Things grow and run away on their own. It's also a bullshit excuse.

This copy of Robot is too boring.

The author is short and weak, who agrees? Who objects?

Later, please ask the principal to find a lawyer to sue the mother and son for slandering the protagonist. It would be too cowardly to be so slandered and not have any temper. It does not fit the image of the young protagonist who has traveled through time and space. It seems that anyone can step on the protagonist. Of course, the purpose of filing a lawsuit is to make them pay the price. If the mother and son do not make arrangements, they will probably leave.

Everyone in Gaowu is so popular, what level is the mecha?

First of all, the author is a newcomer. It is difficult for a newcomer to get ahead. If the book is average, it will generally be difficult to get ahead with luck. The second theme question, modern wear high-tech, which generally focuses on technology, but you have another martial arts, and the focus is not chosen well. Super is mainly about personal power, and your mecha and martial arts are not very coordinated. It would be better if modern wear extraordinary and use technology as a golden finger in ancient times. Pursue the extraordinary power of martial arts or use the advantage of martial arts to drive mechas. This way, it will be more satisfying and the gap will be enough. There are some ink marks in the third plot. There are several chapters of ink marks on the supporting character in the admissions department. The supporting character is only the first in the school, and he is also a literary student. Why does it have to be him? Two teachers paid to recruit him. There are so many people in the country, and they usually recruit from the collective. You are paying for your own money to go to work, but the two of them came together. It is too stupid. If this is a top scorer in the national martial arts examination, it would be understandable. The fourth detail is that the protagonist got the first place in the exam and was slandered and insulted by the supporting character and his mother. In the end, he let it go easily with just one sentence. He only felt suffocated and unfulfilled. In reality, he couldn't deal with the conversation and there were fights (refer to What are you looking at). As a result, the protagonist of the novel has both started to live in the world. The protagonist's life is in front of him. For example, record an audio video or something, and then prove yourself and sue the supporting actor. If the protagonist has such achievements, then everyone in the office should be willing to testify and ask that the supporting actor's insults and slanders be written into the supporting actor's file. If the principal refuses to write, he will be transferred to another school. At least the supporting actor will be given tens of thousands of yuan to pay. If he talks bad words, he will have to pay the price. Otherwise, the protagonist's two worlds wouldn't have been opened in vain. I am a reader of books, and I didn't read carefully. I was deeply impressed by this part. There are also other minor points, so I won't give an example. The author has a lot of brains in writing novels, but he is just a normal person. There are many unexpected things. The subject matter and details should be strengthened. Don't let other websites get some results. The main reason now is that the readers' requirements are too low. There are still many people who listen to books, but there are too few people who read novels to refresh their brains. Finally, I wish the author will continue to work hard and get better and better.

What is the author's off-site ID?

The last chapter contains an invisible coating. Why was I still followed by poor people just after I came out of the safe house?

It's such a pity to see the author commit suicide! Although there are many flaws in the writing, it is pretty good!

Good guy, although the plot is a bit cliche, it's okay to watch. I didn't expect to directly offer sacrifices to heaven. Is it so difficult to get along in Qidian now?

The introduction is a bit fake. Will the planet not be able to tolerate mechas?

Wouldn't it be more practical to drive Gundam Gundam?

Speed, speed, I will update 50,000 words tomorrow

No, I only saw Chapter 27. This thing should be borrowed from Super Mechanic

Uh⊙∀⊙! It's already Chinese New Year, why don't you give me an update?