Versatile Mage: Traveling Through Mo Fan, I Am Still Qinglong

I wrote a fic when I didn't even understand the original work when I saw it for the first time. I won't mention the fact that my combat power is broken. How can a fan make up something like an ice-attributed wind soul species? The conditions for the birth of elemental species are very harsh and require pure elements to be born. Also during your national server period, you asked Mu Ningxue to absorb an ice elemental and become a natural soul species. Do you know what the concept of a natural soul species is? The original work was about the disaster victims who were inherited by Mu Ningxue in Antarctica after Qin Yuer's death. I'm too lazy to complain about directly copying the plot of the original work. Also, if you like to show off your fighting power so much, then what kind of government are you playing? In the plot of Egypt, you're afraid that others won't know about your super-level combat power, right? Not to mention that the setting of super-level is prohibited in the national competition. I am afraid that the Holy City does not know that you have super-level combat power at the age of 20, right?

I have only read a few dozen chapters now. In my opinion, this full-time fan novel is quite good. It does not completely follow the original work. The description of the battle process is also okay. I enjoyed reading it. I hope the author can keep writing. Come on.

After reading the entire book, I can only say that the text is average, but the plot is at an above-average level among fan fictions. It doesn't slow down the pace or overwhelm the combat power, and the ending is quite satisfying to watch. Most of the settings are derived from the original work or are reasonably derived. I don't know why not many people read the book and discuss it.

I don't know why, when I read this novel, I always feel like I'm back in a story novel.

The writing is pretty good, compared to the book next door "The Full-Time Mage: I Was Reborn as Mo Fan", 95% of the writing is the same as the original. It's just that the updates are a bit sparse, there are still three chapters every day.

Author, your emotional drama is so eye-catching

Versatile Mage: Mo Fan starts with all types of mage.

How can I put it? The writing is good, but I feel that the emotional scenes are skipped directly. It is not as well written as the emotional scenes in the other book Rebirth of Mo Fan. There is basically no psychological change of the heroine. It is like writing a supporting role. However, the plot develops faster than that one, but the details are not in place. It is too fast and you don't even know it. How does a woman like the protagonist? You only know that you started to get to know each other, and then you get to know each other, and then you get to know each other, and then they get together. There is no simple description, no summary, it is very abrupt, it is not even free, it is inexplicable. This is my guess, I will take a look, anyway, this is the case for the time being! I don't know what's behind, but the author, please go read Versatile Mage: Summoning the Black Dragon Sky, the Peak of Divine Power. The emotional drama is very well written. Although it is written in such a way that it is not obtrusive because of the background, status and strength, but I love it so much! Especially the part where the protagonist told Mu Ningxue that he was a "dog licker", and then he really acted like a "dog licker"! It's so cool

There are no details at all. The most written ones are about pretending to be slapped in the face during the competition, and gaining benefits from experience. If you have the ability to gain it, just summarize it. If you don't have it, just follow the original plot! It's boring. It's very cross-server. I can't even understand its strength. Sha Yuan used it to improve Qinglong's strength. Xiayu didn't know that the strength didn't change after being absorbed by the Holy Spring. Qinglong and the protagonist didn't change. And how did you conquer the totem guardian Xiayu? I don't understand it at all. Just use it!

Let's create a book club group 😭