After Being Reborn, It's Time to Fall in Love

I feel his relationship with Aunt Luo is too close; please reduce that, ideally making him practically invisible. Especially the chapter where the male lead asks his second uncle if he likes Aunt Luo, and the second uncle says he's not interested. Honestly, that part was a little frustrating. It makes it seem like the second uncle can get her just because he's interested. Also, what kind of "care" was mentioned earlier? Was it simply asking if there were any problems with her life? Did he even enter her dormitory? This is a harem novel; don't waste time describing an insignificant male supporting character, especially since he's just a relative of the male lead. I hope the author will reconsider and add some plot clarification. The second uncle usually only inquires about her life, and Aunt Luo is simply grateful to him; she has never been attracted to any man and has never had any physical contact with any man. I'm only subscribing to this one book now, with auto-subscription enabled. I'll be voting for you exclusively with all my recommendation and monthly tickets. The reason is that I thought your previous book did a pretty good job of avoiding bad books, and I hope this one will continue that strength. I almost never invest in new books because I'm afraid of them going bad and my investment going down the drain. I trust you now because of your previous book. I hope the author sees this.

The description of this fat woman being a beauty is useless and only exacerbates the disconnect. Fat and good-looking people are extremely rare; most people have never seen one in their lives, lacking a concrete point of reference. So no matter how beautiful or appropriate your description of her features is, it's useless. The strongest impression is that she's fat. The first image that comes to mind is definitely one of those ugly, fat people you've seen in real life. This is too drastic compared to your description, and it has a huge negative impact on the overall impression of the book.

I've read a few chapters and it seems pretty good. I hope they don't write too many female leads. Three or four should be enough. Too many is actually not a good thing.

Will Aunt Luo accept it or not? If not, she'll just leave.

The male lead talks too much; it's tiring to watch.

It's not recommended to use these local dialect-like terms frequently, as they don't sound very pleasant, especially when listening to audiobooks.

Author, you've added too many female characters! The male lead is overwhelmed! High school classmate Ye Zi; counselor Xiao Lu; Han; landlady Jiang Xin; Yu Qian; Lu Wei's wife. The slice-of-life story could have been a long one... But it's all disjointed and haphazard. The character development is alright, though. I've seen over 100 chapters so far. I wonder how you're going to handle the later love triangle.

This is my favorite urban novel recently; I think it's really good.

The author is daring to write, but he might get banned someday, hahaha.

I hope you won't add any unattractive female supporting characters to the harem, like in my last book. Anyway, good luck, author! I'll definitely support you with my first subscription!