Starting from a Fire and Evolving into the Sun

Main world setting: A star system, Azure star and multiple life planets. In the future, Sky Blue Star will attract alien civilization due to the birth of strange objects. There are mechanical stars and alien cultivation civilizations. Azure Star cooperates with other alien civilizations through unknown methods. Develop civilization together. Setting: Strange objects: creatures of rules, existences of miracles. Similar to the existence of contained objects, there is a low lower limit and no upper limit. It is a creation of fantasy, imagination and rules. The protagonist's ability comes from the strange object, the box. The abilities of the box are: traveling through other worlds, becoming one with all the ways (it can unify the cultivation systems of other worlds and merge with the body after perfection.), Carry the starry sky with the world, and plane anchor point (the soul of the main world passes through the peers of other worlds, and is born in the box. Then use the box as the anchor point of the world) Rebirth (after the death of the main world body, the soul automatically takes away the peers in other worlds or any human being in the current world.)

The content is interesting, the setting is interesting, and it also captures the naivety of the protagonist as a high school student and the stupidity of young people. But what are those inexplicable descriptions? It's understandable to create a protagonist, but it uses too much space, right? The introduction to the work is also baffling. I don't know whether you want to take the main world as the theme, the different world, or the balance. After reading Chapter 31, I can't see that the experience of the different world is of any use to the protagonist. Seven worlds with colorful halo? One world identity corresponds to one ring? I see there is a description of a unicorn shadow? When the Fugitive Five appeared on the scene, I knew they were dead, but considering the way you wrote it, I thought it was not the traditional way: appear, have an impact on the protagonist, die, and the protagonist transforms. This disgusting route ended up being the traditional route after half a day, and Hong died miserably. If you die, you will die. Be mentally prepared. Some supporting characters exist for the transformation of the protagonist as soon as they appear. But what happens to the protagonist after he goes to the Machine Star? Amnesia? The savior, the escaping companion, the first throbbing in my heart, just died, no emotion at all, right? So the fugitive five appear just to help the protagonist in transition, right? Other than that, it's useless, right?                            ，，，， Do you still have resentment after death? Can it be aggregated into some kind of sludge? What the hell is wrong with the corpse abusers? Because there are ghost torturers? The writing is messy, with hammers here and there, characters appearing inexplicably, inexplicable functions, inexplicable deaths. In a short period of time, I experienced near-death, time-travel, near-death, rescue, escape, battle, near-death, becoming stronger, and near-death. After traveling through such a series of complex experiences, I was stupid enough to look at the problem based on the behavior pattern of my home planet. There was no progress at all. Apart from the growth in ability, there was no other growth at all. Hey, it's already 2024 and will be 2025 soon. Will anyone still want to write the protagonist of the Virgin? No way, right? ? ? When I saw 31, it was still a mess. After looking at the table of contents, I went to the third world within a few chapters. I didn't know the mechanism of time travel, and I didn't study the protagonist. I just thought about it and stopped studying it. The author wouldn't simply decide how many times to enter the seven worlds according to the ranking he entered, right? Just once in the first world and twice in the second world? The third third time? Will you go back to the first world after your seventh turn? You'd better play a big game of chess, otherwise I think you'll be on the street. In Douyin terms, it's like 300 fans playing 300,000 fans. Even if it's a game of chess, see if you can survive until the moment it works.

Baffling. . . There are time-travelers, but there are time-travelers from different worlds, and there are gold fingers, but there are two gold fingers that cannot be controlled, but the protagonist commits suicide and there is no one. The protagonist is an idiot.

I'm relieved to see that I'm not the only one feeling confused.

Nice idea, but it feels too messy

Recently, I have discovered that there are many books in this interstellar era, where aliens are fighting wars, and the lifestyle is a modern background. It feels like they may have been written with AI. If not, it only means that the environment has regressed. We don't want to be as imaginative as the Trisolaris, but we can at least have a Star Wars lightsaber mecha like the emperor's golden hoe. Aren't you willing to just spend some time thinking about the future now? It's rubbish.

There is nothing to say, very poor writing, I have no idea what you want to express. Frankly speaking, the introduction is already the best part of this novel.

For me, a newcomer to the game, I would like to write down some settings for readers to enjoy. The first world, fight against the urban version. Refining medicine and strange fire. The protagonist has the ability to absorb heat. The second world, the prehistoric flow + the strange beast flow. The protagonist's ability is to eat an XX and devour everything. Third world, Western background + mysterious resurrected ghost setting. The evil god is difficult to kill and can only be imprisoned and sealed. The protagonist's ability, combined with the evil god's ability, becomes it. The fourth world, the wandering earth + AI virtual life crisis. The protagonist's abilities draw from their origins. The fifth world, interstellar civilization + advanced civilization. The protagonist's ability to accommodate space and change its own size. The sixth world, the world of cultivating immortals. The protagonist's ability, the inner demon devours life. In this world, the primary civilized race is forced to come to the Yuanyang system to resist the invasion of fog. The protagonist travels back and forth between different worlds. Copy; Water Pollution + Mechanical Empire + Clone Wars + Battle for Yuanyang + All-Out Plan + Sun Secrets + Twenty-seven Star Fields.

After reading the first 3 chapters, I was confused and confused.

I have read 23 pictures. To be honest, I feel confused and the protagonist is not likeable. The protagonist's mind is like that of a child, maybe because he is an aboriginal or because he has been brainwashed. And the plot is also like this one and then another. The most important thing is that if you want to see the kind of decisive killing, then don't read it. The protagonist understands very well that he is a law-abiding person and likes to be treated like a dog. You can read this book.

The introduction of the protagonist of the Aboriginal style is excellent, but the protagonist is immature and confused, not about development, but about the environment as a whole. You might as well write a time traveler protagonist. Written a bunch of plots about social relationships and social conflicts, which are more comical than Slow Heat. At least the other ones will learn from the protagonist's development. How many stories have you written? The protagonist only has a few sentences. Why did you write it? I feel like I have no goal after writing twenty chapters.

The setting is very good, but the actual plot is the same as Yi Tuo Xiang. The most important thing is that I can't empathize with the protagonist. I can't understand what the protagonist is thinking and what does he want to do? What are the goals? It feels like aliens, aliens with the same kind of thinking, completely different from us earthlings. It can only be said that it is completely impossible to bring into the perspective of the protagonist. This book is considered useless.

The narrative is a bit confusing and the story is not clear enough. It is really cute \(//∇//)\

I haven't understood it since Chapter 3. Accepted

The first chapter is too long-winded 😐 I can't stand it anymore The author should practice some more and we'll see each other in the next book.

I didn't understand it. I was so confused that I didn't know what I wanted to talk about. The world view was not very clearly described. It was like watching a movie without watching the first three and going directly to the fourth. The most important problem is that the protagonists' personalities are too similar. It feels very inappropriate to be a child. Although it is very suitable for the age of 18 years old, the protagonist in the novel can be 18 or 16 years old, but you can't really write it as a 16-year-old. Especially in this kind of novel with special supernatural time travel and doomsday elements, if you write it like this, it will only give people the impression that the protagonist is mentally retarded.

It's so messed up and the main character is so stupid

If the first 24 chapters are a bunch of insults, then Chapter 25 is by far the most stinky beginning in the online literature world.

It feels like the author has to advance the main plot step by step, but one day he drank and broke up and became depressed. He wanted to have a ending where he was killed. After he woke up, he regretted it and then coded to make up for the mistakes and made money. He drank and coded again, which caused the plot to be too fragmented. There are two things that attracted me. One is that the introduction talks about dreaming of avatars becoming bosses, and the other is that the first thirty chapters are not about selling sheep over others, and the world of avatars has nothing to do with the main world. Later on, the preparation for the plug-in was too sloppy. In many places, it was not because I didn't understand it but because there was no transition that was too stiff. I originally thought that Hong's death caused the pig's feet to transform into humans, but it turned out not to be the case. I'll see how I make it up later. Maybe it was because after returning home from an incident, I found that all my family members were dead? Are equal knights of the motherland unequal? Of course it is possible that it is true, good and beautiful. In summary, the emotional drama in the native world is relatively sincere, but the bloody plot behind it is a matter of opinion.

Too messy, too messy. When you describe other worlds, don't do it so often. One or two tickets require a visit. This makes the reader look very confused and confused.

I've listened to the 9th one, but I don't understand anything about the world view.

From the introduction, I think the settings are pretty good. Let me recommend some similar settings.