
Versatile Mage: the Holy Sword of the Stars, Slaying All Evil Spirits
全职法师:星之圣剑使,斩尽邪祟
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- Completed
- Length
- 300k Words
- Genre
- Urban
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Urban Superpowers
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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There are no major problems, but there are some minor ones. First of all, there is something wrong with Xiao Mo's character. When Lingling calls her sister, Xiao Mo should refute his gender. Xiao Mo is very sensitive to his gender. Also, the protagonist has the blood of the red dragon and the identity of the old sword. According to Logically speaking, when Xiao Mo is summoned, he will find out and draw the sword to the protagonist, and then he will put down the sword when he finds out that Arthur is not real. Also, after the protagonist reveals the holy sword, there is no aristocratic family to come to the protagonist for the holy sword. The plot is a bit abnormal. It seems that there are Knights of the Round Table in the original work, right? It's been so long that I can't remember, so is the protagonist the reincarnation of Arthur? Well, for the time being, I only found these minor problems. The writing and characters are too lazy to talk about. The problem is not a big problem. There is also the protagonist's personality. It's not particularly like an old sword. Others are fine. As for the heroine, you shouldn't accept everything, right?
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Is it okay?
There's no big problem with what I've written so far, as long as I can keep the B grid in the future.
It looks okay so far, and the character of the protagonist is also okay, not a loser stallion.
It's better not to write. No book has many words and is complete. If you like to write, just slowly draft it first.
Say sorry!
The writing of the Heroic Spirits of the Twelve Knights of the Round Table is too complicated and the author cannot control it, so I will correct it.