Above the Wizard: I Forge Nine Rings with Immortality

1. The plot is okay, it depends on personal preference. 2. The character design is relatively normal, neither Madonna nor dark. 3. The author's experience or writing ability can combine Chinese and Western elements. This is the main highlight of the whole book. The golden finger is good. 4. This kind of subject matter will inevitably have extreme positive and negative reviews. If you click on it, you may run away if it is not the subject matter you want to see. My suggestion is that it is worth a try.

When I first looked at the process of starting a business, I thought it was of the indigenous type. Then I continued reading, and found out that it was the predecessor, so what? It's so confusing that people think he is a time-traveler. His brain is as bright as a piece of wood. One card after another, he is said to be an aborigine. It's his predecessor, and he's an ancient scroll from time-travel. The look and feel is just average. This is just the exhaustion period from the early stage to the later stage. What should I do? What should we do in the mid-term? There will always be times when you are tired, and that's already the case now

I was doing a good job as a priest, but then I was exposed and ran away. The wizard must be the opposite, so I should continue to be a priest. I thought things would blossom, but I became bored and ran away.

Recently, several books about cultivating immortals and wizards have been cut 😅😅😅

The plot is not good, it just seems to have all kinds of rules and regulations, and the plug-ins are terrible.

Is the protagonist going to follow the immortal path or the divine path? What's the purpose of writing about Yin virtue by following the path of immortality? I don't want to develop my power to gain regional reputation. I thought I was going to recast the underworld, but in the end, I used the Yin power as mana to release divine magic. There are so many surrounding characters, and the protagonist doesn't do much, so it's not interesting.

It's watchable, but it's extremely long-winded, the plot moves too slowly, and there's also a problem with the settings.

I couldn't stand this kind of mash-up of themes, but this book is an exception. The author has a strong foundation in fairy tales and western fantasy, and the story is well written. I'll give it a try! Hope it lasts!

It's well written, but it's too young and the number of words is too few.

The flood started after it was put on the shelves? The wheel is talking nonsense back and forth

I was threatened and uncomfortable when I left. That old Javier is here. Gone

As the title says, it's well written, but the pace is too slow, and it's different from the mainstream fast-paced web novels. When I saw the title and introduction, I thought it would start at the wizard academy. Common wizard novels basically start with apprentices in the academy. Your book starts from the church, and the wizard content has not been introduced in more than 40 chapters, so it is a bit slow. , Many readers of wizarding novels may give up after not reading very much. Of course, being slow to read is not necessarily a shortcoming, and it can also attract some readers. I just want to remind the author that if the author has an outline and knows what he knows, then treat our kind of comments as farts 🙂 The characters are also a bit messy, no If you often read Western fantasy, it is easy to misunderstand the characters. There are too many descriptions of other characters, but the image is okay. The protagonist is a bit less in the role, and there is very little psychological description. However, this writing does not say that the writing is shocking. Even if it is written about escaping, it feels calm and in control. I don't know what this writing style is. It's not the author's intention, it's just a lack of control In short, the plot writing is okay, and there should be the right readers on the radio. However, according to the progress of the plot, I won't be able to read it all the time. I have to save up to read it Finally, I hope the author can work hard and write better and better 🙂

It fell very well. The plot is also exciting. It breaks away from the structure of traditional wizarding literature. The system of cultivating immortals is integrated very well, rather than being imposed stiffly. Unlike other articles like this, it directly creates a new system. Integrating a new system into the old system is undoubtedly a very smart behavior. The biggest shortcoming of this article is that the update is too slow and it is easy to die suddenly.

Hey, just write it down according to your own ideas. Stop being a eunuch.

Just like the title, it is quite comfortable and smooth to read, and the collision between wizards and Taoism is quite novel The disadvantage is that there are too few. I feel that the author has not saved any manuscripts and has not added any updates to the shelves. It is really slow. Some book reviews say that the plot is dull, and there is nothing wrong with it. But this is young grass after all, and the plot has not yet unfolded. Overall, it's a good source of food.

What I was most afraid of happened. The author stopped updating and basically had nothing to play.

Can you update two pages every day? Newcomers, please update more every day. You can't even read one page after reading it.

Also, it's too slow. If you want to save, just save. If you want to, just stand by and watch. It took a long time to write a plot conflict before the protagonist takes action. It gives people a very bad impression and is very bloody.

There is no excitement or climax at all. It is as bland as water and makes people have no desire to continue reading.

The writing is quite interesting, but it's just too little.

Update quickly. With this amount of updates, don't send it any day.

Why are there so few protagonist roles recently? They are all about supporting roles. The protagonist is only briefly described during battles, but is not visible at all other times. He is just like a tool man. I'm still going to write a group portrait, but the way I write it doesn't look like it.

It's dry food, it doesn't involve too many fighting plots, nor does it involve specific research. It's more about my power of thinking. Like the main line, you get the Immortal Way system. Then the level of upgrading is also based on the cultivation of immortals. I can read it, but it doesn't describe the essence of the wizard style. It also didn't write the fantasy of Sendō-ryu, and the fighting was exciting. Not to mention the combination of the two. In this book, the wizard is more like a background.

Brother, what attracts us is your title. You must write closely with this theme. Now it is all about supporting roles. Don't you think it is too divergent? If you want to write about events and worldview, you have to look at it through the eyes of the protagonist. Write it aside from the protagonist, and it is not a group portrait. What kind of approach is this?

It's a pity that this book has an interesting setting.

Good guy, is Yihuan so strong?

I'm afraid that this book may be sent at any time.

The first twenty or so chapters will make people's eyes light up, and then it will just be a frame text, which is sparse and ordinary.

I saved more than 40 chapters and read them all in one go. How can I put it, it's tasteless and a pity to abandon it. I don't have that urgent desire to read it. I'll wait and see for a while.

It's a pity, the author is still very capable.