The Prehistoric Artifact That Swallows the Starry Sky

Okay, okay, hold it down a little bit, don't be too awesome all at once, otherwise it will be boring to watch.

Author, I recommend that you add a sentence in the original text or in the comment area. The Prehistoric World is the setting of this book, or the world outside the infinite Chaotic Source Space, or one of the source worlds. The Prehistoric World itself is a set of templates, a genre of novels. Just say that the Prehistoric World is the Prehistoric World of your novel. It is completely different from the Prehistoric Times of other novels. It is just a template. If you don't add this to the comment area, you will definitely get into a fight and devour your writing. Fans of Swallowing are dissatisfied. Honghuang is written in a weak way. Fans of Honghuang are dissatisfied. To be honest, the popularity of such a highly controversial novel is quite poor. I usually don't bother to read such highly controversial novels. After all, there are definitely many people like me who like to browse the comment area. As a result, when I browsed the comment area, I didn't find anything I wanted to see. I only saw a group of fans from both sides quarreling with each other over the issue of combat power. Which passerby has the patience to read it? (It doesn't count if you like to make noises.) I saw that your book has just been written and there haven't been so many people making noises yet. I would like to remind you.

There is nothing new, it's still the same old story, Battle of Geniuses, Chaos City, and it still follows the main line of Luo Feng's story. I'm tired of reading it. Can't I write something a little different using the Devouring worldview and setting? In short, I don't know how to write without the original line.

Such an awesome treasure as the Jade Disk of Creation is actually a treasure that is equal to the Chaotic Source Lord level. What is outrageous is that it cannot be used casually, and the cooling time is increased by ten times for every major realm.

Forget it if you always touch on myths. The little devil from the Great Desolation will step on and praise them every day. It seems that if you don't boast that the Great Desolate is invincible, you will kill his whole family (not against the author, only against some of the embarrassing boasters)

If you don't know how to write about women, don't write about it. The author looks single at first glance, and the interactive plots are all seen in novels and TV.

The original text "Swallowing the Starry Sky" is a refreshing article about upgrading and growth. In the process of Luo Feng's continuous growth, a fantastic and magnificent cosmic world is constructed. The coolness of the original text is reflected in Luo Feng's upgrade and growth route: 1. Inheritance Huyanbo inheritance → Chaos Monument → Beast God Statue → Ancestral God Cult → Broken East River → World of Jin → Yuan 2. Gene Level 10 times the Golden Horn → Fusion of the Blood Luo Crystal → Practicing the Nine Tribulations Secret Book → Studying the Genes of the Blood Sea Clone → Genetic Map of the World of Jin → World Beast Genes → 100,000x Genes 3. Treasure Duntiansuo → Yanshen Weapon → Weapon Armor (Jiang Jia, Wang Jia, Huang Jia, Jie Jia) → Killing Wu Wings (Four Wings, Six Wings, Eight Wings, Chaos Golden Wings) → Star Tower (Sealing Stars, Sermon Pictures, Tower Beads) → Tomb Boat → Yuan Embryo The excitement of the original work lies in the step-by-step growth of the protagonist, the adventures and fantasy world experienced during the growth process. Author, if you upgrade to a level, you will be given a prehistoric treasure, so what is the point of your enjoyment? You just give three clones. Is it cool to have Luo Feng go through suffering and burn his soul and then seize the body of the golden-horned giant beast? You give the gene level directly, and Luo Feng in the original book practices step by step. Is it cool to experience a fantasy world every time he improves? It is recommended that the author study the outline more, sort out the protagonist's growth path and experience, and try to write the protagonist's own gains as a refreshing point, so that people can see the protagonist's subjective initiative.

This protagonist's character is too low. It's so frustrating to drive such a big thing, and he still has to lick a mountain guest.

Talking to yourself again? Are you really not afraid of being turned back in time? Do you think the overlord of the universe is blind? Speechless😅

Lightning protection, what the hell are you writing? You don't want the protagonist to be powerful and you set up such a big hook. From the end, you keep suppressing the protagonist and the pressure is very strong. Also, the disciple monk is a giant poison, and you have so many artifacts, even higher than the Star Tower. You still have to write a segment where the protagonist really wants the Star Tower. It's disgusting🤢

That's right! Speaking of which, I remember that among the prehistoric artifacts there was an innate treasure that could be used to refine spiritual treasures. It seemed to be called the Qiankun Ding, right? I remember that if you throw some weapon-refining materials into it, it can automatically refine the finished acquired spiritual treasure (I read the ancient novel many years ago, I can't remember if this is the case). I wonder if the author has considered arranging this treasure for the protagonist? 🤭

After reading more than 30 chapters, I don't have the slightest sense of involvement. The protagonist is too stupid.

I don't understand the setting that the protagonist in the previous life must be a special forces soldier?

The boss has two hundred chapters. I can only say that this book is pure rubbish. I have been cheated on many times, but I just don't learn my lesson. I get stung again and again, right? It's like this over and over again. A Zerg mother queen who was about to achieve immortality in about ten years and become the invincible king went out to wander without waiting, and her soul enslaved those flat peaches and enlightened tea trees and was reluctant to use them; a clone of an ancestor dragon with perfect genes was beaten into a dog. This was the first time the ancestor dragon had been hacked. During the worst fight, the whole process was just roaring, without the need to self-destruct those inherited heaven-defying secrets and the strongest secrets given by the original universe; a small tribe in Hongmeng who came from nowhere was provocative and looked down on the human race for disrespecting the venerable.

In what age do we still have special forces? Don't you think it's outdated? I ran away when I saw this

Rubbish among rubbish, you have already driven to Hunyuan and still want to fight with genius, pure shark-arm behavior

When he saw the author get the golden finger, he left talking to himself all the time. There is no secret to those masters of the universe.

The Xuanhuang Pagoda is only 90,000 light-years away. I remember that the body of the Mountain Guest seemed to be in units of trillions of light-years. By comparison, it was no bigger than a fingernail?

Brothers, if there is anything wrong with this book, you can point it out directly, but try to leave a message in a blank paragraph without comments so that I can see it. There are also some things that I have written that are not good. Please feel free to criticize them. I won't correct them even if I don't say it. I just want to ask for advice.

Don't write it, don't you feel disgusted? Chunchun suppressed the article, and the results of being such an awesome guy? When you meet a powerful one, you can't beat him, or he will be beaten up, or he will be knocked away at every turn. Then you think in your heart that this person is so strong, MD is so disgusting, he can only bully rubbish, and he can't compare to Luo Feng if he is dressed in a bunch of tricks.

The main function of the clone is to save life. If the two clones carry the original nucleus on the battlefield outside the territory, does it make any difference whether there is a clone or not?

With the devouring setting, it feels like the protagonist has many powerful and powerful treasures in his body. He knows that he is the most powerful and powerful treasure, but he uses it as a decoration. The stuff given is so awesome, the author must have realized it, so he started to press it, but it gives the impression that it is the identity setting of a genius and strong person, but his cognition has not kept up. Just like the saying circulating on the Internet, cognition determines a person's height. This protagonist feels that the hardware is great but the software is not so good. As for Luo Feng's arrangement, it was relatively good at first. They didn't follow Luo Feng's line. They each practiced their own way, not the kind of nanny flow in the name of investment. After finishing the book, Luo Feng didn't give you any feedback, and he was not as strong as you. But after the Genius War, the feeling of experiencing the secret realm was still the same. Luo Feng basically avoided all the things he wanted to take. I had a hunch when I saw it, and it was still the same. Until I sat in the Star Tower with the mountain guest, and he said frankly that he didn't want to offend City Lord Luo, I knew that this book would be over by this point, and the rest of the book should not be much different from other books. The core of Swallowing Starry Sky itself is: the laws of the dark forest, plundering, fighting, and the cruel reality of the universe. However, many of the articles give people the impression that the writing style is leisurely. They don't want this or that, and they give it to their faces. They don't want what is useful to them. They want gold-fingered things, but the gold-fingered ones have not changed with the writing style. Furthermore, the setting of City Lord Luo's future is too deliberately emphasized for fear of offending. How can such a protagonist become the strongest? Are you worse than City Lord Luo in the future? If you show protagonists like Shi Hao and others, they will be different and have future settings. Moreover, this kind of book has changed many causal lines in the past, and now it doesn't talk about the future. After this kind of book is finished, he is still better than Luo Feng. I have read a lot of this kind of book. As long as this kind of thing appears in the front, the plot style in the rest is basically the same. I personally don't like this kind of setting. I have read this book at Star Tower Sitting Mountain Guest, and I don't plan to read it later. If I read it again, I would like to share with you what the plot is like later.

I opened such a big plug-in, and the more I read it, the more frustrated I became. If I put other novels on, just take one of these treasures of yours, and others will have a great time playing it. Look, what the hell did you write? It's so frustrating that you're overwhelmed by so many powerful cheats. , Funny? The plot of "The Mountain Guest" is so poisonous that others want to kill you and read your memories. The protagonist is licking his face and wants the Star Tower to recognize its master.

If the protagonist is so powerful, he won't kneel down and lick the tribe again, right?

One or two treasures are enough to write about. You want to write so many more. Can you handle it? In the end, there is only one name. In fact, it is just garbage, which can only be used to eat dust. Even if it is used, it can only reflect its name.

Shuangwen is not happy, what are you still writing here?

"Pluto Devouring the Starry Sky" I would like to recommend my new book. I welcome your comments. I will work hard to write every chapter. Thank you.

You can still take a look at the front, but start adding water in the middle.

. You have to have a baby, right?